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Одна из лучшей истории по блю лок, которые я читал. Мне особенно понравилась предстояния. Я когда читал вообще не задумывался, что это фанфик. Это полноценный роман. Особенно мне нравится предыстория и развитие. И по ходу будет глав 200-300. Очень нравится.
Writing quality 5/5 Story development 5/5 Character design 5/5 Updating stability 5/5 World background 4/5 Great fanfic, it's rare to find good ones like these types of fanfictions. Enjoyable and interesting.
it's a good Fanfic so I need More!!! So please do not dropped this[img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a great story with it's up and downs on the mc and everyone and everything around the mc and you will always expect something cool about to happen to the story and there something's that will live you in shock and that is my review
I randomly felt like rating my own story, now that it have around 40 chapters I believe I can give a more objective review. writing quality: 5/5while I think it might be an overstatement since some mistakes might slip from me when I edit the chapters, I still think the writing quality have been improving steadily throughout the chapters. story development: 5/5it might feel a little slow, a whole arc being dedicated to his life before blue lock, but I believe it gives readers a way better idea of his personality, and it also introduce his strength and weaknesses perfectly. character design: 5/5I enjoy all of my OCs and I think they all have their own personality and place in the world. I also believe I portrayed the characters we already know as accurately as possible. updating stability: 5/5I'm aware this is the worst point, the only reason I'm giving it a 5/5 is because I think it's the best I can currently do, my irl life leaving me with very little time to write. world background: 5/5as I said, a whole arc was dedicated to his life in Spain, and that in itself developed the world background way more than I could've hoped.
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la dernière fanfiction que j'ai lu était horrible, je vais lire les chapitres d'une traite et je vais voir si c'est bien en tout cas ça fait plaisir de vour qu'il y a des auteurs français sur cette plateforme peu importe que se soit bien ou pas finalement, même si j'ai de bons espoirs, j'espère que tu continueras si ça te plaît vraiment, bon courage.Pour l'instant je mets tout à 5 étoiles pour ne pas faire baisser la note et je changerais après ou pas.
Absolutely loving your story! Your writing style is captivating, and I'm already hooked on the characters and plot. Please keep the chapters coming – can't wait to see where you take this!
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I really like sports fanfics, and I thought yours was very well written! But you won't release bonus chapters anymore?????????????????????????
the bestt blue lock fanfiction!!! at first i only try to read it because i was bored and i don't have any high expectations because I don't really like story that have a system but this one just became one of my favorite..
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не плохо но как будто чего то не хватает но я все же поставлю 5 звезд <><><>><<><><><><>><<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
The best blue lock fanfiction. SI and gamer elements only make it better . I hope with all my heart that it won't be abandoned like so many other awesome fanfictions. Kudos to y'all who are reading this awesome book.
спасибо за все и пожалуйста продолжайте историю :} :}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
Plot is well paced. Great writing quality. pretty good character creation, Though updates are pretty bad right now and we could only hope the author keeps pumping out some chaps. World background i pretty well explained so no problems there.
great fanfic... [img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo]
It's a very good fic, I'm 4 in updates because the author unfortunately had to take a break (or that's what I understood) because of the university. If I come back one day I'll change it to 5. Good luck and become a great doctor!
Одна из лучшей истории по блю лок, которые я читал. Мне особенно понравилась предстояния. Я когда читал вообще не задумывался, что это фанфик. Это полноценный роман. Особенно мне нравится предыстория и развитие. И по ходу будет глав 200-300. Очень нравится.
Writing quality 5/5 Story development 5/5 Character design 5/5 Updating stability 5/5 World background 4/5 Great fanfic, it's rare to find good ones like these types of fanfictions. Enjoyable and interesting.
it's a good Fanfic so I need More!!! So please do not dropped this[img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a great story with it's up and downs on the mc and everyone and everything around the mc and you will always expect something cool about to happen to the story and there something's that will live you in shock and that is my review
I randomly felt like rating my own story, now that it have around 40 chapters I believe I can give a more objective review. writing quality: 5/5while I think it might be an overstatement since some mistakes might slip from me when I edit the chapters, I still think the writing quality have been improving steadily throughout the chapters. story development: 5/5it might feel a little slow, a whole arc being dedicated to his life before blue lock, but I believe it gives readers a way better idea of his personality, and it also introduce his strength and weaknesses perfectly. character design: 5/5I enjoy all of my OCs and I think they all have their own personality and place in the world. I also believe I portrayed the characters we already know as accurately as possible. updating stability: 5/5I'm aware this is the worst point, the only reason I'm giving it a 5/5 is because I think it's the best I can currently do, my irl life leaving me with very little time to write. world background: 5/5as I said, a whole arc was dedicated to his life in Spain, and that in itself developed the world background way more than I could've hoped.
Arriba España 🇪🇸 Arriba España 🇪🇸 Arriba España 🇪🇸 Arriba España 🇪🇸 Arriba España 🇪🇸 Arriba España 🇪🇸 Arriba España 🇪🇸 Hail Europe🇮🇪🇳🇱🇮🇹🇪🇸
la dernière fanfiction que j'ai lu était horrible, je vais lire les chapitres d'une traite et je vais voir si c'est bien en tout cas ça fait plaisir de vour qu'il y a des auteurs français sur cette plateforme peu importe que se soit bien ou pas finalement, même si j'ai de bons espoirs, j'espère que tu continueras si ça te plaît vraiment, bon courage.Pour l'instant je mets tout à 5 étoiles pour ne pas faire baisser la note et je changerais après ou pas.
Absolutely loving your story! Your writing style is captivating, and I'm already hooked on the characters and plot. Please keep the chapters coming – can't wait to see where you take this!
Está muy bueno y va mejorando [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really like sports fanfics, and I thought yours was very well written! But you won't release bonus chapters anymore?????????????????????????
the bestt blue lock fanfiction!!! at first i only try to read it because i was bored and i don't have any high expectations because I don't really like story that have a system but this one just became one of my favorite..
😁😁😁😁😁💯👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💯😁😁😁😁😁
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не плохо но как будто чего то не хватает но я все же поставлю 5 звезд <><><>><<><><><><>><<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
The best blue lock fanfiction. SI and gamer elements only make it better . I hope with all my heart that it won't be abandoned like so many other awesome fanfictions. Kudos to y'all who are reading this awesome book.
спасибо за все и пожалуйста продолжайте историю :} :}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
Plot is well paced. Great writing quality. pretty good character creation, Though updates are pretty bad right now and we could only hope the author keeps pumping out some chaps. World background i pretty well explained so no problems there.
great fanfic... [img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo][img=recomendo]
It's a very good fic, I'm 4 in updates because the author unfortunately had to take a break (or that's what I understood) because of the university. If I come back one day I'll change it to 5. Good luck and become a great doctor!