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Don't take too many women to be in his harem like 3-5 are ok like it wouldn't be good if half of the story is about his women and if u can make them strong-minded and dependable women that would be great of course we don't want them to take over the mc. This just my opinion. I M JUST GONNA GIVE YOU 5 STARS REVIEW EVEN THOUGH I HAVEN'T STARTED READING YET.
The whole thing of making vampires like some sort of angels is so stupid. Like for example his parents teaching him to love and respect other people?!! LOL. Bro, they are vampires I am pretty sure it is in their nature to be apex predators. Why the heck did you have to vilify humans and angelify VAMPIRES!! Like them drinking animal blood and stuff......
It's fine to me.Wonderful story! πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I loved It so much!!! Keep the vampire things plss. ππππππ€π€π€π€π€π€ππππππππππππππππππππππ€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€ππππππππππβοΈ
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Shameless author here. Of course, I will give myself a positive review. If I didn't like what I write, why would I keep writing? I hope to be making fewer grammatical mistakes but if there are still any, just comment and I'll fix it. π€βοΈβ₯οΈπ
It's fine to me. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Author's friend here. So i'm going to give it five stars. :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :pi :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p
I just signed up to give this review and help the author. Even if it have some misspellings, I still will give five stars. :D :D ;D :D :D ;D :D :D ;D :D :D ;D :D :D ;D :D :D ;D :D
very good, I liked it too, very good story deserves 5 stars easy very good, I liked it too, very good story deserves 5 stars easy very good, I liked it too, very good story deserves 5 stars easy very good, I liked it too, very good story deserves 5 stars easy very good, I liked it too, very good story deserves 5 stars easy
The story is good for those who like an evil mc or just dont care. The author seems to be a beginner so there are some strange parts, but it will probably get better later.
Gostei muito do livro. Adorei a forma como os personagens foram desenvolvidos e como o autor escreve, sem falar no plot da historia, que se desenvolve muito bem.... Meus parabΓ©ns ao autor.
I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it! I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it! I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it! I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!
Well five star for me for a novel with evil mc.. Well five star for me for a novel with evil mc.. Well five star for me for a novel with evil mc..
if you're here for the same reason as me, which is for the villain tag, I'm sorry but here's just the disappointment in this aspect because despite the protagonist having a tremendous hatred for humans, he is very stupid and immature when the story involves no -humans because sarah herself manipulates him and he thinks she understands him after some events a non-human appears and guesses our protagonist considered a good idiot will save her in exchange for nothing and for me what can be unbearable was the fact that in chapter [spoiler] 22 and 23 because of a disagreement with this non-human he attacks a family and in the process instead of killing everyone, he for finding a girl who wants to sacrifice herself for the family, interesting he spares the family and still protects them against the rival family, [honestly he killed humans from a whole planet i doubt everyone was selfish and nothing tempting to sacrifice herself for her family and that's not even considering he's killed innocents and now he's found her acting like it's a human's first noble act]
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Don't take too many women to be in his harem like 3-5 are ok like it wouldn't be good if half of the story is about his women and if u can make them strong-minded and dependable women that would be great of course we don't want them to take over the mc. This just my opinion. I M JUST GONNA GIVE YOU 5 STARS REVIEW EVEN THOUGH I HAVEN'T STARTED READING YET.
The whole thing of making vampires like some sort of angels is so stupid. Like for example his parents teaching him to love and respect other people?!! LOL. Bro, they are vampires I am pretty sure it is in their nature to be apex predators. Why the heck did you have to vilify humans and angelify VAMPIRES!! Like them drinking animal blood and stuff......
It's fine to me.Wonderful story! πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I loved It so much!!! Keep the vampire things plss. ππππππ€π€π€π€π€π€ππππππππππππππππππππππ€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€ππππππππππβοΈ
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Shameless author here. Of course, I will give myself a positive review. If I didn't like what I write, why would I keep writing? I hope to be making fewer grammatical mistakes but if there are still any, just comment and I'll fix it. π€βοΈβ₯οΈπ
It's fine to me. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Author's friend here. So i'm going to give it five stars. :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :pi :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p :p
I just signed up to give this review and help the author. Even if it have some misspellings, I still will give five stars. :D :D ;D :D :D ;D :D :D ;D :D :D ;D :D :D ;D :D :D ;D :D
very good, I liked it too, very good story deserves 5 stars easy very good, I liked it too, very good story deserves 5 stars easy very good, I liked it too, very good story deserves 5 stars easy very good, I liked it too, very good story deserves 5 stars easy very good, I liked it too, very good story deserves 5 stars easy
The story is good for those who like an evil mc or just dont care. The author seems to be a beginner so there are some strange parts, but it will probably get better later.
Gostei muito do livro. Adorei a forma como os personagens foram desenvolvidos e como o autor escreve, sem falar no plot da historia, que se desenvolve muito bem.... Meus parabΓ©ns ao autor.
I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it! I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it! I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it! I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!
Well five star for me for a novel with evil mc.. Well five star for me for a novel with evil mc.. Well five star for me for a novel with evil mc..
if you're here for the same reason as me, which is for the villain tag, I'm sorry but here's just the disappointment in this aspect because despite the protagonist having a tremendous hatred for humans, he is very stupid and immature when the story involves no -humans because sarah herself manipulates him and he thinks she understands him after some events a non-human appears and guesses our protagonist considered a good idiot will save her in exchange for nothing and for me what can be unbearable was the fact that in chapter [spoiler] 22 and 23 because of a disagreement with this non-human he attacks a family and in the process instead of killing everyone, he for finding a girl who wants to sacrifice herself for the family, interesting he spares the family and still protects them against the rival family, [honestly he killed humans from a whole planet i doubt everyone was selfish and nothing tempting to sacrifice herself for her family and that's not even considering he's killed innocents and now he's found her acting like it's a human's first noble act]