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an incredible story! I love that the transmigration was in a different village than the leaf village (which is already tiring with so many of them), the character development feels natural and is not so OP from the beginning. In conclusion, read it.
Mc doesn't even act like a reincarnated person he acts more like a person born in that world it would have been better if author did make mc a reincarnated person because even if mc delete that section when mc talks about his past life it won't change any thing since mc doesn't even act like it
Lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo this work is about nothing. literally the canonical story of the original Utakata. just copy and paste
Good stuff only con I can say is him being a si doesn't have nearly as much impact as you would think so don't expect him using his meta knowledge for anything and updates are slow af but hood story overall
idk what these other dudes read, or if it's the author who is deleting all non 4/5 star reviews but this is a mid read, naïve and hopefully mc nothing particularly of note to read either
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This is freaking awesome !! I just wish there were around 500 chapters to binge on :) Keep up the good work author san
Did not know you have webnovel account, love to read your stories at fanfiction . Great story and chapters.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
The story is perfect down to the last bit only problem is updates but over all everything looks good
Firstly I need to apologise for my English, that’s not my first language. This fanfic is amazing. It’s really hard nowadays to find such an interesting and unique story. I really would join your patreon to support you but unfortunately it doesn’t work with my country’s cards so I can only say how good is tour story to cheer you up, hope that you won’t quit this fanfic and be patient.
Normally I give reviews with descriptions of what they do good or bad, but i’m to sad to do it this time. Just read it i’m going to cry again if I think more about it.
I feel like this is the authors best work yet.. This feels oddly realistic as everyone seems to forget they are human as well.. one thing this novel has that most don’t is a sense of realism.. u just don’t adapt to situations like that so easily and circumstances can change a person.. I was skeptical at first cuz I like novels that have wishes or boons given by a god so that they can have a easier time.. this changed my perspective on things.. it’s impressive how author writes the story to keep the readers engaged.. pls don’t stop and see this through to the end.. Wonderful work.🙏
Love it. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ This is perfect.🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
in general it's a story with a good concept. Instead of taking us to well-known already Konoha the author dared to take us Kirigakure, which makes the fanfic somewhat fresher. The mc has to confront the most cruel village system, so cruel so it can be called only wasteful. The author did good job in describing that bad experience. If there's something wrong about the fanfic it's only that the mc has described relationships almost only with characters presented in Naruto. Back in the academy he had a friend that was expelled. Till now he didn't care enough to look for him. It's like mc is unable to have any friends that aren't from the original
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really like the setting and character chosen in this fanfic as it is something new and fresh. getting to see the mist village through yagura's reign.
One of the best Naruto fanfics. Good Character development with an extraordinary story. But updates are very slow.[img=update]..............................
A história é realmente boa, apesar de ser bem "realista", ainda é possível ver elementos da história original, o Mc é bem desenvolvido assim como aqueles ao seu redor e o fato que o autor prefere mostrar ao invés de descrever é outro ponto positivo.
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Good so far, only that the mc seems a bit naive for a reincarnator at certain points.
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an incredible story! I love that the transmigration was in a different village than the leaf village (which is already tiring with so many of them), the character development feels natural and is not so OP from the beginning. In conclusion, read it.
Mc doesn't even act like a reincarnated person he acts more like a person born in that world it would have been better if author did make mc a reincarnated person because even if mc delete that section when mc talks about his past life it won't change any thing since mc doesn't even act like it
Lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo lololololololololololololololololololo this work is about nothing. literally the canonical story of the original Utakata. just copy and paste
Good stuff only con I can say is him being a si doesn't have nearly as much impact as you would think so don't expect him using his meta knowledge for anything and updates are slow af but hood story overall
idk what these other dudes read, or if it's the author who is deleting all non 4/5 star reviews but this is a mid read, naïve and hopefully mc nothing particularly of note to read either
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This is freaking awesome !! I just wish there were around 500 chapters to binge on :) Keep up the good work author san
Did not know you have webnovel account, love to read your stories at fanfiction . Great story and chapters.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
The story is perfect down to the last bit only problem is updates but over all everything looks good
Firstly I need to apologise for my English, that’s not my first language. This fanfic is amazing. It’s really hard nowadays to find such an interesting and unique story. I really would join your patreon to support you but unfortunately it doesn’t work with my country’s cards so I can only say how good is tour story to cheer you up, hope that you won’t quit this fanfic and be patient.
Normally I give reviews with descriptions of what they do good or bad, but i’m to sad to do it this time. Just read it i’m going to cry again if I think more about it.
I feel like this is the authors best work yet.. This feels oddly realistic as everyone seems to forget they are human as well.. one thing this novel has that most don’t is a sense of realism.. u just don’t adapt to situations like that so easily and circumstances can change a person.. I was skeptical at first cuz I like novels that have wishes or boons given by a god so that they can have a easier time.. this changed my perspective on things.. it’s impressive how author writes the story to keep the readers engaged.. pls don’t stop and see this through to the end.. Wonderful work.🙏
Love it. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ This is perfect.🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
in general it's a story with a good concept. Instead of taking us to well-known already Konoha the author dared to take us Kirigakure, which makes the fanfic somewhat fresher. The mc has to confront the most cruel village system, so cruel so it can be called only wasteful. The author did good job in describing that bad experience. If there's something wrong about the fanfic it's only that the mc has described relationships almost only with characters presented in Naruto. Back in the academy he had a friend that was expelled. Till now he didn't care enough to look for him. It's like mc is unable to have any friends that aren't from the original
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really like the setting and character chosen in this fanfic as it is something new and fresh. getting to see the mist village through yagura's reign.
One of the best Naruto fanfics. Good Character development with an extraordinary story. But updates are very slow.[img=update]..............................
A história é realmente boa, apesar de ser bem "realista", ainda é possível ver elementos da história original, o Mc é bem desenvolvido assim como aqueles ao seu redor e o fato que o autor prefere mostrar ao invés de descrever é outro ponto positivo.
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Good so far, only that the mc seems a bit naive for a reincarnator at certain points.
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