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You need to improve your your grammar and you need to make sure words are in places their suppose to be some words are missing every other sentence. Overall good novel
Yo, it's the author! I wanted to leave this review to say that, this story has become one of my favorite things to write. I've written loads of stories before but none of them ever exceeded 10 to 11 chapters, but this one just feels right. And I hope to keep it going and not disappoint! I hope to improve my writing style and become the author I want to be. Thanks for reading!!
You need to improve your your grammar and you need to make sure words are in places their suppose to be some words are missing every other sentence. Overall good novel
Yo, it's the author! I wanted to leave this review to say that, this story has become one of my favorite things to write. I've written loads of stories before but none of them ever exceeded 10 to 11 chapters, but this one just feels right. And I hope to keep it going and not disappoint! I hope to improve my writing style and become the author I want to be. Thanks for reading!!