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This really wasn't all that good to read, but it was able to retain attention. There were points where walls of text in some chapters could simply be skipped, and I'd miss out on nothing as a reader. I would have kept reading if it wasn't for the genderbending of Alucard later into the story. It's just not for me. It's a real shame too, because I really like this author's writing/fanfics when it's not focused on getting girls. But they are writing this primarily for themselves, so while it's not for me, maybe you reading this are a part of the target audience. If you think that's the case, then I encourage you to check it out.
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You know how long I've been waiting for this? Seriously tho, I love this to bits, mainly cuz of the power system but the story ain't bad either so 10/10. Thanks for coming back👍
Love It <3 Interesting Ideas <3 Need More Chapter <3 Need More Update [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This is a very intriguing and well written story. The Lotm power system is always a broken system and seeing it being implemented in this turbulent mis-mashed cohesion of a world is a fun read. Please do continue the story author. I hope to see this story go much farther. Good luck.
This really wasn't all that good to read, but it was able to retain attention. There were points where walls of text in some chapters could simply be skipped, and I'd miss out on nothing as a reader. I would have kept reading if it wasn't for the genderbending of Alucard later into the story. It's just not for me. It's a real shame too, because I really like this author's writing/fanfics when it's not focused on getting girls. But they are writing this primarily for themselves, so while it's not for me, maybe you reading this are a part of the target audience. If you think that's the case, then I encourage you to check it out.
Reveal Spoiler You know how long I've been waiting for this? Seriously tho, I love this to bits, mainly cuz of the power system but the story ain't bad either so 10/10. Thanks for coming back👍
Love It <3 Interesting Ideas <3 Need More Chapter <3 Need More Update [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Love the idea and the current flow of the story, just wish for more update[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is a very intriguing and well written story. The Lotm power system is always a broken system and seeing it being implemented in this turbulent mis-mashed cohesion of a world is a fun read. Please do continue the story author. I hope to see this story go much farther. Good luck.