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BEING RE-WRITTEN!!
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What is the story about? video game character in FIFA/PES? if he gets any skill it should assimilate with his body and brain. improve his stats and game intelligence. it should be like he practiced it for a long time. in this story he uses skills like he's using a controller to play. and he acts like he's playing street football. and author says that it's one of the best football novel there! I think author's research is based on virtual game like FIFA/PES.
at the start, I really liked this story, but after a lackluster story development and a shoddy update, stability I might drop this story.
Just based on fact that the author refers to it as Football rather than Soccer if enough of a sell. The most memorable sports stories basically have powers in them and they always manage to blow my expectations out of the water. The system in this work is no exception.
I really like the your artistic approach for system usage and I want to assure you that this work that you just start writing in boredom will carve your career in a positive sense
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Well, this novel has great potential even though it's a little slow-paced. it describes a youngster who got recruited to play for a Premier league team young players but didn't get his chance to prove himself and by the end of the season while regretting he got his chance to redo that year while also having a system that helps him gets better. Btw this novel has little to no romance
I like this story, it’s a football story about a young footballer trying to make it as a pro but there are not any of the nonsense in other stories where the main character gets the skills of ronaldinho, Beckham, Zidane and the list goes on. I can’t stand that I prefer what the author is doing
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Honestly I’m agreeing with about her review. The author seems to not be a real football fan doesn’t fully understand it and it’s much worse than most football novels I’ve read here. While I have read very many I’ll be honest, a blue lock fan fic has more interesting tactics than this. It really does feel like the author played fifa and then decided to write like that’s how foot ball actually works.
Being honest, I probably just wrote this because I was bored, but for all it’s worth, I guarantee that this is one of the best football (or soccer, whatever you’re used to) fictions that you’ll ever see. This book is very different when compared to most of the other books that I’ve written, being that everything doesn’t happen in some sort of fantasy world or something. There will be romance really early on in the book, for those of you that would like that although there will be NO form of harem. If there’s more then I’ll provide an update. Happy reading!