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Gotha
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The novel itself for the first fourteen chapters is really nice and I have nothing against premium, but seriously? after unlocking 4 chapters I feel like being punished by unedited stuff, it became hard to read and I gave up.

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GEEGEE
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if this was a movie, i will be hiding myself under the covers while peeping out with one eye. this is just so thrilling and nice to read. it makes you feel as if you are watching a movie and i love it. can't wait for more....

3yr
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KaGen
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A tragical entrance and a good choice for a horror type. first two chapters have boosted while reading. And adding character summaries between the chapters is an interesting style. I liked the construction type of the novel, I may also copy the style:) the story is a good type too. writing quality is also another level. I liked it too much and gave another 5 stars for this one too. Thank you, dear writer, I will keep reading it

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Mayra_Lagunas13

amazing story, Low key shivers down my spine at some points because they just sounded very creepy but I love the detail and the atmosphere of it all. the character dynamic is amazing.

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Thiya15
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This book is extremely amazing. It has such an intriguing plot and the penmanship with holds the book. I haven't read such a good book in long time. I am enjoying the book very much.

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ShoRin
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I'm into horror novel and this one has become my favourite so far! this is a really good novel to read and my friends would love to read this with me! it's well written, nice job author!(◕ᴗ◕✿)

3yr
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MildredIU

This is fantastic. This story is well written, intriguing, and engrossing. I like how the author made the story very descriptive and how the characters are very well thought out. I applaud the author for a job well done❤

3yr
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Enny_williams

Amazing! Horror thrillers are my absolute favorite and I'm glad I got to read one this awesome! There's laughter spookiness and a lot of comrades.

3yr
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Chuck45Single

This is a really cool story. Absolutely loved the prologue, the way it threw me into the story just to then continue in the present. It's well written and the author knows how to build up tension. Keep it up! :)

3yr
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Fortheloveofbooks

what an amazing story. Such teary and heartfelt moments. You can clearly feel the swarming emotions. You can relate because it's so close to home. I just love love love it. Y'all should put this amongst your favourites because it deserves it

3yr
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hiraki_mitsuha22

the story is gold and the plot is unique. gpod job author. keep it up! [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update]

3yr
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siaaa_mir

honestly I don't read horror much maybe because many people can't really express it but I really loved your book, it has been a while I've read a horror-thriller this good, your character discription is amazing ❤

3yr
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Phantoms_are_true

The chapters are very well written and it intrigues me so much. I really love the word play. The first chapter is solid and it got me hooked. I would love to read moreeee💙💙👏👏👏

3yr
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Kazmicink

Ohhh nice. Exciting! This is a horror / suspense story with a family of strong characters in the middle of it. Love the writing style and the detail. Can’t put it down!

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lady_diamonique

This is actually the first time I read a horror story here in webnovel, and this is no doubt a promising story. I love how it started and the mystery it gives to the readers. Like, what is going to happen in the succeeding chapters. Keep it up~[img=recommend]

3yr
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jayhaydn

What a wonderful horror story. This book is written beautifully and is both creepy and sad. The characters are well developed and work well with the gripping plot.

3yr
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Sinadin

Okay... NGL this book is good. Even though the genre wasn't my cup of tea the chapters were smooth for me to read. It does have a huge intrigue factor after all. I don't have anything else to say other than the writing. I know grammar' a pain in the neck but rereading every chapter before publishing it would greatly help and increase the quality. Not saying that it's bad, it's super good than many other novels out there!!. Thank you, Author keep up the good work 💯💯

3yr
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RoseOfBlues

The book, I have to say, is all the more hilarious as it can be scary. It is not devoid of a punchline which makes one read more. The cover and synopsis are intriguing, and the first two chapters are enough to get you trapped in the book. I really look to reading more of this book. It has been delightful to have been a part of its journey.

3yr
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Alancaster

It's my first time reading a horror/thriller webnovel and I must say I was not disappointed. The author has a promising plot-line and I would love to see how the story develops. Keep it up~

3yr
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Tas_kp020403

This story is a must reading. In a word, it's just wowwww..... author please update daily.... it's more than temptating storyline....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
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Megana4

Horror & thriller genre is not my cup of tea. But this book intrigued me to read further. The Prologue is well written and the incident pictured in my mind. The characters are well portrayed. The story is understandable and easy to read. The dialogues are on point and Highly recommend!!! Keep up the good work, Author!

3yr
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Deborah_John_8098

Intriguing The prologue is well written. I could imagine the entire incident in my mind. I love the mystery it's brings. Great work. Thumbs up to the author

3yr
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Bethel_Gold

I love horror stories and this just make me want to get lost in and keep reading, on and on, well done Author you did a great job keep updating and keep up the good job!!!

3yr
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chickyduck

idk why but this book mc got the same name with me and i like horror so yeah.. i will read it and author please do make a lot of update coz I'll be waiting

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Darkswan

First of all your synopsis is great and your title is eye catching. I am good at watching horrors not reading them but this one is great and your plot is well laid out, this story has a lot of potential, keep up the good work Nia.

3yr
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Erivva

The story is really amazing just loving it my only problem is the character description I'm confused about how they look so I would like to suggest if you could make an auxiliary chapter that talks about the character's looks

3yr
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Novelstar_PG

The author knows how to use "show not tell" technique and writing, especially in narrating the characters emotion. Not just simply telling the readers that she/he fid and that. The prologue part is well-written, from there, we could really say that the remaining parts of the story would also reflect to it. It is clear and precise. Also, the synopsis is catchy. And I am wondering what 'gift' the protagonist has.

3yr
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Hakdogs_

The synopsis is so catchy. It will make the reader read the story. I'm not really a fan of horror stories, but I love your writing style, the transition, and my heart literally starts beating so fast that I can't take it HAHAHAHA you have potential. Keep it up!

3yr
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Rosnocht

usually I can't keep up with horror stories, but the tragedy here is top notch. What I love about this story is the emotional depiction and expression build up-- this is such a perfect read for tragedy lovers like me.

3yr
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Silent_Listener

Wow a great work by the author. I am beyound impressed. Even the title gives the vibe of mystery in it. Looking forward to read more of it.

3yr
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Gotha
LV 14 Badge

The novel itself for the first fourteen chapters is really nice and I have nothing against premium, but seriously? after unlocking 4 chapters I feel like being punished by unedited stuff, it became hard to read and I gave up.

2yr
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GEEGEE
LV 13 Badge

if this was a movie, i will be hiding myself under the covers while peeping out with one eye. this is just so thrilling and nice to read. it makes you feel as if you are watching a movie and i love it. can't wait for more....

3yr
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KaGen
LV 10 Badge

A tragical entrance and a good choice for a horror type. first two chapters have boosted while reading. And adding character summaries between the chapters is an interesting style. I liked the construction type of the novel, I may also copy the style:) the story is a good type too. writing quality is also another level. I liked it too much and gave another 5 stars for this one too. Thank you, dear writer, I will keep reading it

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3yr
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Mayra_Lagunas13

amazing story, Low key shivers down my spine at some points because they just sounded very creepy but I love the detail and the atmosphere of it all. the character dynamic is amazing.

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3yr
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Thiya15
LV 10 Badge

This book is extremely amazing. It has such an intriguing plot and the penmanship with holds the book. I haven't read such a good book in long time. I am enjoying the book very much.

3yr
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ShoRin
LV 11 Badge

I'm into horror novel and this one has become my favourite so far! this is a really good novel to read and my friends would love to read this with me! it's well written, nice job author!(◕ᴗ◕✿)

3yr
View 0 Replies
MildredIU

This is fantastic. This story is well written, intriguing, and engrossing. I like how the author made the story very descriptive and how the characters are very well thought out. I applaud the author for a job well done❤

3yr
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Enny_williams

Amazing! Horror thrillers are my absolute favorite and I'm glad I got to read one this awesome! There's laughter spookiness and a lot of comrades.

3yr
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Chuck45Single

This is a really cool story. Absolutely loved the prologue, the way it threw me into the story just to then continue in the present. It's well written and the author knows how to build up tension. Keep it up! :)

3yr
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Fortheloveofbooks

what an amazing story. Such teary and heartfelt moments. You can clearly feel the swarming emotions. You can relate because it's so close to home. I just love love love it. Y'all should put this amongst your favourites because it deserves it

3yr
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hiraki_mitsuha22

the story is gold and the plot is unique. gpod job author. keep it up! [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update]

3yr
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siaaa_mir

honestly I don't read horror much maybe because many people can't really express it but I really loved your book, it has been a while I've read a horror-thriller this good, your character discription is amazing ❤

3yr
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Phantoms_are_true

The chapters are very well written and it intrigues me so much. I really love the word play. The first chapter is solid and it got me hooked. I would love to read moreeee💙💙👏👏👏

3yr
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Kazmicink

Ohhh nice. Exciting! This is a horror / suspense story with a family of strong characters in the middle of it. Love the writing style and the detail. Can’t put it down!

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3yr
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lady_diamonique

This is actually the first time I read a horror story here in webnovel, and this is no doubt a promising story. I love how it started and the mystery it gives to the readers. Like, what is going to happen in the succeeding chapters. Keep it up~[img=recommend]

3yr
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jayhaydn

What a wonderful horror story. This book is written beautifully and is both creepy and sad. The characters are well developed and work well with the gripping plot.

3yr
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Sinadin

Okay... NGL this book is good. Even though the genre wasn't my cup of tea the chapters were smooth for me to read. It does have a huge intrigue factor after all. I don't have anything else to say other than the writing. I know grammar' a pain in the neck but rereading every chapter before publishing it would greatly help and increase the quality. Not saying that it's bad, it's super good than many other novels out there!!. Thank you, Author keep up the good work 💯💯

3yr
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RoseOfBlues

The book, I have to say, is all the more hilarious as it can be scary. It is not devoid of a punchline which makes one read more. The cover and synopsis are intriguing, and the first two chapters are enough to get you trapped in the book. I really look to reading more of this book. It has been delightful to have been a part of its journey.

3yr
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Alancaster

It's my first time reading a horror/thriller webnovel and I must say I was not disappointed. The author has a promising plot-line and I would love to see how the story develops. Keep it up~

3yr
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Tas_kp020403

This story is a must reading. In a word, it's just wowwww..... author please update daily.... it's more than temptating storyline....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
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Megana4

Horror & thriller genre is not my cup of tea. But this book intrigued me to read further. The Prologue is well written and the incident pictured in my mind. The characters are well portrayed. The story is understandable and easy to read. The dialogues are on point and Highly recommend!!! Keep up the good work, Author!

3yr
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Deborah_John_8098

Intriguing The prologue is well written. I could imagine the entire incident in my mind. I love the mystery it's brings. Great work. Thumbs up to the author

3yr
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Bethel_Gold

I love horror stories and this just make me want to get lost in and keep reading, on and on, well done Author you did a great job keep updating and keep up the good job!!!

3yr
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chickyduck

idk why but this book mc got the same name with me and i like horror so yeah.. i will read it and author please do make a lot of update coz I'll be waiting

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3yr
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Darkswan

First of all your synopsis is great and your title is eye catching. I am good at watching horrors not reading them but this one is great and your plot is well laid out, this story has a lot of potential, keep up the good work Nia.

3yr
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Erivva

The story is really amazing just loving it my only problem is the character description I'm confused about how they look so I would like to suggest if you could make an auxiliary chapter that talks about the character's looks

3yr
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Novelstar_PG

The author knows how to use "show not tell" technique and writing, especially in narrating the characters emotion. Not just simply telling the readers that she/he fid and that. The prologue part is well-written, from there, we could really say that the remaining parts of the story would also reflect to it. It is clear and precise. Also, the synopsis is catchy. And I am wondering what 'gift' the protagonist has.

3yr
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Hakdogs_

The synopsis is so catchy. It will make the reader read the story. I'm not really a fan of horror stories, but I love your writing style, the transition, and my heart literally starts beating so fast that I can't take it HAHAHAHA you have potential. Keep it up!

3yr
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Rosnocht

usually I can't keep up with horror stories, but the tragedy here is top notch. What I love about this story is the emotional depiction and expression build up-- this is such a perfect read for tragedy lovers like me.

3yr
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Silent_Listener

Wow a great work by the author. I am beyound impressed. Even the title gives the vibe of mystery in it. Looking forward to read more of it.

3yr
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