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I really enjoyed the story and action. As the story continues, the MC develops his harem. But i want more mature scene. I personally like harem. The story speed is fast but it has a lot of potential for greatness.
honestly where do you authors come up with the weird ideas for these types of novel. A "pregnancy system"? seriously. at this point I want be surprised if there's on as baby daddy system
author ur story concept is eye catching... but when a mc is demon readers expect him to be cruel, ruthless and villian like character.... not like acting as a good guy when his subordinate wolf was attacked and he is making friends with humans after that without any reason... i know u want to say that black organization or something is dangerous and something but this is not how a demon wolf should be, I came to read about a wild wolf who could care less about consequences and act wild, not like coward and soft spoken u r showing.... by doing this he is telling the world to target him as he will be seen as easy target
Thestory is full of holes. And there is no chaptet to do world building. The names of the places turn into chinese and somehow the magical world becomes chinese. Somehow huaxis also exists and the names of peoole might start in english but i have the feeling that it like western names in a western starting world turning slowly into ancient china. Its makes you confused without reason. Its making my head hurt. I will read something else especially because the fun parts are skipped all the time
I really enjoyed the story and action. As the story continues, the MC develops his harem. But i want more mature scene. I personally like harem. The story speed is fast but it has a lot of potential for greatness.
honestly where do you authors come up with the weird ideas for these types of novel. A "pregnancy system"? seriously. at this point I want be surprised if there's on as baby daddy system
author ur story concept is eye catching... but when a mc is demon readers expect him to be cruel, ruthless and villian like character.... not like acting as a good guy when his subordinate wolf was attacked and he is making friends with humans after that without any reason... i know u want to say that black organization or something is dangerous and something but this is not how a demon wolf should be, I came to read about a wild wolf who could care less about consequences and act wild, not like coward and soft spoken u r showing.... by doing this he is telling the world to target him as he will be seen as easy target
Thestory is full of holes. And there is no chaptet to do world building. The names of the places turn into chinese and somehow the magical world becomes chinese. Somehow huaxis also exists and the names of peoole might start in english but i have the feeling that it like western names in a western starting world turning slowly into ancient china. Its makes you confused without reason. Its making my head hurt. I will read something else especially because the fun parts are skipped all the time