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Give the author a chance, he is new, do not start tearing him apart. He's obviously new, even those with experience in the field make mistakes
Okay story is vastly diffrent than i thought, Mc is overpowerd with no character development and an cringe personality, The romance is forced was hoping for something other than "i will marry you" as there first meeting and like i also mc character is very hard to like i get annoyed on his character, The writting also seems force like no emotions to it. Updates are great He describes the character over exagerated and story seems like an slice of life becausw he's op right away no start nada and romance is forced, Would highly not recommend.
brooooo don’t do this. it was going so well. Now he looks like a greenboy with no brains. Just goes and proposes to Xia. Begging for her hand like that… it’s demeaning . He’s the one with power girls should be coming to him not the other way around and its a cutthroat cultivation world he can’t afford to be naïve because he read a comic in his past life
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try to keep moderate not too op let him fight only use shadows when exterminating sects and clans and try change heroine fate no ntr on little aunt
Mano a sua história é boa só falta mais capítulos e os capítulos tem que ser maiores também tem que aumentar a contagem de palavras mas ainda assim é uma boa história bem criativa 🤔🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍
Очень интересно, но хотелось чтобы главы выходили чаще. Спасибо автору за такой интересный фанфик)).[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love to read fanfictions. I had always wanted a fanfiction like this where the mc had the power of shadow monarch and lives up to the expectations of the readers. I promise you guys, this will be a hell of good novel. The plots that I have planned for the future are never found in any of the fanfics I have read and mind you I have been reading them for around 3-4 years. So, support me and give me 5 star ratings
Give the author a chance, he is new, do not start tearing him apart. He's obviously new, even those with experience in the field make mistakes
Okay story is vastly diffrent than i thought, Mc is overpowerd with no character development and an cringe personality, The romance is forced was hoping for something other than "i will marry you" as there first meeting and like i also mc character is very hard to like i get annoyed on his character, The writting also seems force like no emotions to it. Updates are great He describes the character over exagerated and story seems like an slice of life becausw he's op right away no start nada and romance is forced, Would highly not recommend.
brooooo don’t do this. it was going so well. Now he looks like a greenboy with no brains. Just goes and proposes to Xia. Begging for her hand like that… it’s demeaning . He’s the one with power girls should be coming to him not the other way around and its a cutthroat cultivation world he can’t afford to be naïve because he read a comic in his past life
I'll wait for the continuation............................................................................................................................................................................................
try to keep moderate not too op let him fight only use shadows when exterminating sects and clans and try change heroine fate no ntr on little aunt
Mano a sua história é boa só falta mais capítulos e os capítulos tem que ser maiores também tem que aumentar a contagem de palavras mas ainda assim é uma boa história bem criativa 🤔🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍
Очень интересно, но хотелось чтобы главы выходили чаще. Спасибо автору за такой интересный фанфик)).[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love to read fanfictions. I had always wanted a fanfiction like this where the mc had the power of shadow monarch and lives up to the expectations of the readers. I promise you guys, this will be a hell of good novel. The plots that I have planned for the future are never found in any of the fanfics I have read and mind you I have been reading them for around 3-4 years. So, support me and give me 5 star ratings