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Records of the Weakest Emperor
In a world fraught with innumerable dangers where living day by day is a struggle, a young man from the modern age transmigrated into such a world, accompanied by a peculiar system made for assassination.
[Move footsteps three inches apart for enhanced stealth.]
[Strike at the indicated acupoint to ensure a quick death!]
[Host has successfully assassinated the designated enemy! Gained one Assassination Point!]
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I have had this issue in the past. It does demotivate you when people unfairly rate your work. Me. My problem is sometimes someone says something in comments. I disagree. And then one minute after they read my reply rate my story 1* due to butthurt. At least on WN you can respond to reviews. On WN Power Stones are what rates a novel. This is an awesome system because haters can do nothing to affect the stones you get. People who like you, give you stones. On RR you can be pulled down by haters. It cannot happen here. So... given the fact that haters cannot pull you down. You can approach negative comments in two ways. 1) be super nice. Say they are right with everything and you will try and improve taking on board their sage advice. OR 2) Troll the **** out of them. Seriously what can they do? not give you power stones? Guess what your fans will love it. So Far chicken Skully has been super nice. But...I haven't run into any ****turds yet.
I like the fact that circumstances are pushing him to abandon his emotions, but it slightly irks me how powerless the MC is in all sorts of situations. He's literally being punched around by the world as of now. Please give him a nice and fluffly romance to settle down, the boy has been scarred from the betrayals~
good, but need more harem :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)::):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
Very poor buildup. Rushed beyond compare and nothing is explained. A totally unreliable NEET MC dies from Weebing too hard apparently, and then becomes reliable, able to kill, smart, and good with girls after he transmigrates. He is the polar opposite of the previous body’s owner, and does multiple things totally out of character. It’s an interesting story design, but the execution is just garbage. I was hooked and spent about an hour or two reading more than I planned, but I kept cringing at the sudden unexplained changes and finally couldn’t handle any more. Points for the story None for the design
Writing Quality: 3 *** - This is due to the author not giving a proper development for every thing that happens within the story. Things just happen out of nowhere in things such as the MC's love interest. The good thing is there are not too many mistakes in the author's spelling or grammar. The issue only lies within the author's delivery. Stability of Updates: 5 ***** -At the time of writing, I have not yet arrived at the latest chapter. But a short scroll through the table of contents allows me to conclude that the author is very diligent in releasing chapters daily. The author has achieved a minimum of 1 chapter per day and a maximum of 5 chapters per day on this web novel. Although this is great, I would suggest that the author should only try maintain it at 1 or 2 chapter per day so that more time can be put into improving the quality and to avoid health issues. Story Development: 3 *** - It is an interesting novel, the only issue is that the development is not consistent and is too rushed. Most of the problems surrounding the development of the story can be attributed to the character design, mainly the MC and those close to him. Character Design: 2 ** CONTAINS SPOILER FOR 3 DIFFERENT CHAPTERS - This is the area that bugs me the most with this novel. Characters do not match their 'mold'. For example, the father is an esteemed general and yet he allows his son, who he knows to be a person who does not focus on cultivation and only knows how to harasses women, to lead an army. Sure, the father saw his son fight others in one of the chapters, but someone of his ranking should have the brains to doubt his son and not be confident in him blindly unless he doesn't care about the lives of his men. Better yet, why would an esteemed general let his son, who he does not know the full capabilities of, to go ahead and assassinate the opposing army's leader? From what he understands of his son, he should be doubting the mental health of his son for proposing such a plan or be worried for the success of the mission or safety of his son. Anyway, what I would like to say is that each of the characters should have a proper foundation that can justify their decisions and actions. Whatever they do, should make sense from what was said in previous chapters or descriptions. The chapter that annoyed me the most was when the MC got together with his love interest. Whatever the MC told the love interest did not match with what happened in previous chapters. I started to doubt whether the MC was just coaxing her or it was just simply bad development. The author has a nice naming sense though. Just need to put more effort in building stable foundations for the characters and make them stay in character unless they are forced by the circumstances. World Background: 3 *** -Barely any information is given about the world but there is no issue with that. Your typical cultivation world, just with a different naming for the cultivation levels. All in all, this is a decent novel to read to pass time when you're bored. I do not suggest this to people who are picky about quality of the story itself. The author is improving and I think that his/her next story would be an interesting read if he/she comes up with a good plot. Read this novel if you wish to witness the authors' rise. To the author: Good job and keep it up. If you find my review bad or mean in anyway, I am not sorry. :) If writing is your passion, I hope it helps. Though I think there are more I want to say(both positive and negative), it's already late and I can't remember them.
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Gave it a 1 star rating for the sole reason that they said that One Piece would come to a end. One Piece will never end, and for spouting such blasphemy you get 1 star sir. Otherwise great novel but you really crossed the line.
I can't suggest you read this. The characters are two-dimensional, villains and the MC both. The MC is an idiot suggested to be a clever reincarnated human from Earth however. He's using an assassination system however the novel we thought we'd get, after about 25 chapters devolves into a 'RUTHLESS ASSASSIN MC' falling for a divorced woman with a daughter used as a sex slave and made powerful for no god damn reason.
There is little to no explanation or exploration of World background or even MC's clan or techniques it's not that it's mystery his dad & butler knows it but never told MC. MC is thinks little to nothing logical isn't very attentive to surrounding or happenings main thing for assasin,his character didn't grow much his wife has more development than him, she went from mortal to being more powerful than MC. MC gets thrown to random places comes back boom his wife is more Powerful than before. Even his daughter has more progress than MC in month too.
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Tbh was starting to like this novel until the romance happened, that **** ruined it for me. I mean he could’ve tried finding someone while in his adventures rather than be with a milf...
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Calling it an absolute trash is an insult to the word trash. If you want to know why read it and experience the pain first hand ..........................................................................................
Yeah...... I can't. Didn't develop an interest in this. Somethings are too outrageous for even "screw physics." Bye bye Apologies, I have to bullsh*t a little more for the review to be accepted. Lallalalalalalalalalalalalala I think that ought to do it
Here are honest reviews.. This novel is about transmigration MC, who replace/ possess trash young master from powerful clan.. With the help from the assassination system, he can buy modern weapons in the cultivation world.. This is not an OP MC because of how much MC almost dead by weak villain character are uncountable.. And MC is also a teenager who falls in love with old women and "sleeps" with her, making me feel disappointed and disgusting.. If you have a fetish for old women, this novel is for you.. Even with the help from the assassination system, MC has not become that strong.. MC is just strong in technique because, if you read, his strength, constitution, agility, intelligence, and Qi are all lower than average people.. So, what I mean by MC strong in technique is that system helping MC calculating his enemy stat, show enemy weakness, calculate the position, angle, strength need to use to aim/attack his enemy, using system to get skill like concealment, stealth, and all other type of assassination skills.. Plus, the author does not care about MC Reputation in this novel.. You would see MC Reputation is no different with trash.. Plus, with clinging old women, how can MC become assassin? He always needs to send his older women and her daughter to a safe place before starting his assassination..
There are some suggestions tho, which I hope you take as a constructive criticism for your own improvement. You don't really need to be adamant in explaining the system but at least include some subtle hints or few information regarding it. The MC is great for developing so keep at it. I just hope you don't take his ruthlessness in later chapters. A cold dagger slices the hand that touches it. Don't go overboard in being conceited tho, a shadow may bask in the light but they stay firm relative in their position. The harem, i approve your building up too. Keep it not as rush, it relish the flavor. Character introduction should be firm and their encounter somewhat distinct than the others. In this your doing a good job. Nice building up Natalie, I like hardworking characters that although seen with shade of frost but within them a summer breeze. The world building could use some work. It is alright tho so I say slightly above average. Make people be absorbed in the explanation. Such as make some detailed overview to work the reader's imagination. The greatest working hand of the author is his reader's imagination so do experiment your own style in captivating that aspect. Of course you can't cater everyone so don't compromise the story for just about everyone. This is not because I don't like the story. It is good and interesting but I'll be frank that I'm not much sold. This is the highest I could give for now. I hope your growth would be outstanding. Current chapter: 128 I'll be taking my leave then.
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At least you put more twist in the story.. later i guess after this arc.. that will be cool if there is an assassin system.. there will be other system like warrior system meaning there are other reincarnators in this world but still focus on the mc... that will be more diffuclt i guess...... but continue the hardwork...
This is not a review,perhaps? Lol i just want to recommend this story . It has a great potential , Not overpowered at all but still the protagonist had enough of power to beat bad guys and tame beauty(ies?) As the MC is growing up the flow also make every chapters become interesting.
-game elements, system, assassination skills, blessed by the gods, *** maniac -from being an otaku, reincarnated in a hedonistic young master of the strongest general of the empire after being beat to death -his *** maniac comes from the life of the previous young master, instead of cultivating martial arts he learn carnal knowledge and practice cultivation to help his stamina in bed
This book is quite an interesting one. Although it doesn’t have much of the “promised” assassinations as I wished for, it has a quite good lead and story. A novel with a story that includes things of family and relationship development. It’s a well laid back novel although there are some quirks I have with this novel. These quirks are how the MC is just overall too underpowered - his wife was just some random homeless girl he fancies basically but she got stronger than him..., the kid that his wife had previously also is stronger and beat him in a match because of techniques (but realistically this shouldn’t happen... the difference in power is immense... basically like saying a highly skilled child in martial arts is able to beat a trained soldier who doesn’t have formal training of the arts), the amount of depressing chapters of rap* and people taken advantage even though it kinda doesn’t do anything for the story. I’d have to rate this out of the novels I’ve read a read but be sure you are able to hold in the pain for some scenes depicted. (THIS REVIEW IS MY OPINION and although it may be a little indifferent to others deal with it) TLDR: Read but hold in pain and clench for some scenes. The family moments are enjoyable to read though. Also don’t expect too much assassinations.
I tried to finish this novel, made it to chapter 270ish. Despite the writing level being that of a drink middle school student at the start, it seemed to have an interesting enough premise, and potential. It failed to live up to any of that. World building was haphazard in those places it did exist. Comparable power levels shifted to fit whatever the author needed to happen at that time. Character personality and background morph with little regard for what's gone before. There is little to no structure, characters show up, randomly interacting with extreme familial intimacy, that have LITERALLY NEVER BEEN MENTIONED BEFORE!! The system is hauled out doing stuff that just needs to be done, but seems to ignore its own rules most of the time. It is also largely ignored except when the writer screws up and needs a hand wave solution. Do not read this book, almost anything is better, and I regret the money I spent unlimited cling chapters because I gate to not finish something I started, regardless of how bad it is. This book however has made me break that trend . I'm only 20 chapters from the end, but I just can't go on. On top of everything else the author needs a serious proof reader as he constantly gender bends his pronouns, mixes up names of who he is referring too, contradicts what he said a paragraph before, and twists idioms to inadvertently reverse their meaning. He also seems to have a fixation with people finding 10-12 year Olds as sexual/romantic/r*pe targets, or implying that someone had kids, at 13, after years of abuse, as if that age was "standard". (23 year old (which he considers mud 20s) with a 10 year old daughter for example). This extends as low as it seemingly being "normal" for the 8 year old twin sister of one character, to have been trading sexual favours to folks for a living.
Fking loving so far 😍 :) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)):)::):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) does it contain 140 characters yet?
Do you want to read a System Story with an MC that learns about the world and develops along with it? Do you want to read an MC that grows along with the author? Then, you came into the right place, just go read the first chapter, already!