As Sasuke With 10-Quest System

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Intense_Gaming_5908

It's a bad fan fiction. Character feels like NPC but the bad version.

LV 1

reza_Asgari

there are lots of forced plot no detailed the idea of the plot is amazing that is why i still read it romance is odd ( It feels a little awkward for me) also the plot is like ONLY sasuke is getting stronger

LV 14

Transhumanist

There are many plot holes and author's handwaving trying to smooth the plot. But all it does is make the world become an even more irrational mess than the original story.

LV 1

Brady_Lustlara

The story is just weird. The MC is trying to be unique in taking over sound village which is honestly stupid because it literally has no powerful people or things. The female lead is just some random mob chick who simps after the MC which is a waste because of all the potential real characters in the shinobi world. just an all around letdown of a fic because of the ma's hairbrained schemes somehow working even with bad acting on his part.

LV 3

PurpleRoseImmortal

5 Stars for myself. Typical author behavior. If you like this novel, make sure to give a review and check out my Patreon for advanced chapters.

LV 2

DaoistCGid7j

Good, but there are no strong details, the romance is trite, and the battles end quickly, as if he is focusing only on the hero becoming stronger. I hope you improve the details of the entire story. If you solve this problem, the story will become much better.

LV 2

SlumberSeal

This novel is the literal definition of "Gold in a Miner's hand". The idea and planning are great. No one has ever thought of doing a fanfiction on Hebi Sasuke but unfortunately, the author of this fanfic is a rookie and can't bring out the true potential of this book. 5 stars either way. Get good author

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NeaCambelt

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clattan0ia

The hero is not an anti-hero as promised, and the story is poorly written with little depth or originalit the story is bad, and I strongly advise against watching it not worth your time 👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👶🏼

LV 3

Hanimelove

Not a good read, character development seems forced, definately need to improve writing skills. Just find something else .

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Ole_Tessmann

Translation is passable but this has the worst story telling and interactions ever lol

LV 4

MD_Toriqul_Islam

after the harem started, story started to go downhill.

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Luizz_Ricardo

Constructive criticism, author, the idea of ​​this whole fanfic is good, the mission is cool, and everything else, but the problem is your writing, your writing is very simple and has no details, no depth, the story also moves too quickly.

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jan_Zaib

thanks for dropping this master piece. Please keep updating this work ...

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Prince_Sky_

Thanks for the wonderful Story. You know author, one of my favorites in Naruto is Sasuke. Thanks to you, you make a amazing 🤩 work. I rate it a 5 star ⭐ because it's amazing 🤩 So keep a good work author 😁...

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JasonReilly05

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MD_Toriqul_Islam

overall the story is engaging. recommendable.

LV 4

Addybuddy

I will give a detailed review of the fanfiction. The story is a quick and enjoyable read but the are a lot of things that can be improved. Positives: 1. Excellent idea for the story, haven't see may stories with Sasuke as a protagonist and even then the start with death of Orochimaru was also unique. 2. We are not following the cannon and the butterfly effect are also accounted for. 3. Sasuke strength( he is quite op which could be a good read depending on execution Negitives(things that can be improved) 1. The charecter interactions have much left to be desired( they seem a bit lifeless like they do not have any of their own thoughts or every thing they do is for or against. 2. He is too op or the enemies are nerfed( it would have been better if he started with abilities but had to adapt to them or had some serious challanges to grow rather that 1 shot them.( Orochimaru and Deidera fight was justified ,orochimaru being weak and deidera not being a hand to hand combatant but itach, and pain fights could have been more detailed or have been better). Fights are also too short or doesn't have the thrill(could be because author is still learning. Also while he is strong because of him not having sasuke memories, he should not know how to plan battle strategies ( like in pokemon, using speed and prority moves or combination attacks) so sauske while having strength should strugle which he is not 3. Some one said that the plot is forced which feels that way but that could be seemlessly bleded with better and detailed writting style(like giving situation of other villages even if it doesn't immediately effect the time line.) 4. sasuke is a hypocrite or the guy who becaome sasuke(we know very little of him) so we dont know his morlas but when the sound village rules had the harrasement(it seemed that he had morls) but then the way he behaved with Tsunade and Hinnata.(even others like if you want me be with me if not leave= which is also not helped with the lack of charectes personalities ) Overall the novel has potential if improved upon (but also make sure not over do it like drang fights for so long or make focus only on charecter reactions to evens). giving it a solid 3.2 of 5 (compared to others on the platform) A 5/5 recomendation [Naruto: the wind Calamity]

I'm really disappointed with this story. As a fan of Naruto x Hinata, I felt very disturbed by the story decision to make Sasuke take Hinata from Naruto. This plot is very forced and does not fit with their characters who have been built so strongly in the original series. Naruto and Hinata's relationship already has a deep emotional foundation in it, and suddenly there's a story that introduces Sasuke as an obstacle? That's so annoying! Not only that, the addition of a harem element with characters like Karin, Ino, Sakura, is still acceptable, even though it feels a bit forced, but when Hinata is trapped in this game, it feels like an insult to the development of their mature story. Sasuke is the one who manipulates Hinata and makes her trapped in a dilemma, as if making her a character who is far from the integrity that we have known. The highlight is how this story changes the relationship between Naruto and Hinata to make it look so fragile, just to make room for unnecessary drama. I feel like I was lied to by this baseless plot. Naruto and Hinata should have a more beautiful and natural path, not be bothered by intrigue that seems to only exist to attract attention without a good reason. Overall, this story is very disappointing and leaves a feeling of dissatisfaction. Sasuke x Hinata can be interesting for some people, but for me who always wants a Naruto x Hinata story, a plot like this is very disturbing and ruins my hopes for this story

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Theory18

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