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its a good read, i tell ya... its just that sometimes there are naming problems such as clovis becoming nick, melody to kanaria and vice versa. in any case its a good wn, just the name errors irked me a bit, but i definitely recommend it
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from the start , mc have all the overpowered enemy behind him. he is talentles(as usual) but due to his parents , he have to face boss level enemies who are in power. so yeah you can guess the story. Typical , mc surviving being targeted by powerful peoples throughout story. this is annoying.
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It's been a while since I last wrote this type of novel. I, too, will be one of the main character's comrade who won't be left behind because they've been power-creeped by MC. ;)
Another shit where the protagonist is not suitable or does not have talent so that something happens later so that if he has it, just because of that lack of originality or rather cliché I am going to give him a low grade.
its a good read, i tell ya... its just that sometimes there are naming problems such as clovis becoming nick, melody to kanaria and vice versa. in any case its a good wn, just the name errors irked me a bit, but i definitely recommend it
hello, Can you review my book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
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from the start , mc have all the overpowered enemy behind him. he is talentles(as usual) but due to his parents , he have to face boss level enemies who are in power. so yeah you can guess the story. Typical , mc surviving being targeted by powerful peoples throughout story. this is annoying.
Hello, I am creating a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
It's been a while since I last wrote this type of novel. I, too, will be one of the main character's comrade who won't be left behind because they've been power-creeped by MC. ;)
Another shit where the protagonist is not suitable or does not have talent so that something happens later so that if he has it, just because of that lack of originality or rather cliché I am going to give him a low grade.