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When the universe ends and you are given the option to choose your next life, what options would you take ... Taking into account that you can pay for it.
My level of English is not enough to write a novel, so I've translated it with the google translator, so if you see some strange word or sentence, tell me to keep it in mind for the future.
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5+ chps just for the prologue where the author literally tells you how the world is created through a greedy beta MC. The MC is obsessed with DBZ but doesn't want to go to that universe cause he'll die for being a wimp. Instead he swindles 'god?' into getting to spend his karma for cheap versions of saiyan powers that changes his body into some weird red monkey hybrid. Literally the author wasted alot of his attention catching in those chapters when it could've been explained in a paragraph. I find it annoying to see such a shameless beta MC with plot armor.
FUCK YOU DRAGON BALL FUCK YOU SAIYAN. GOOD LLS BECOME DB STUPID IDIOT SCREAMING MONKEY. MULTIDIMENSIONAL TRAVEL SHIT. IDIOT WISH. IDIOT BLOODLINE OF MONKEY THAT ALWAYS SCREAMING LIKE BITCH WHEN THEY POWER UP. IT'S BETTER TO GET GRANDPA SUN BLOODLINE THAN STUPID BARBARIC IDIOT SCREAMING SAIYAN MONKEY.
I donโt want to read this **** just because of the ****ty protagonist. Greedy coward obsessed with DBZ. He could freely go there, but because of his cowardice did not go there and took the bloodline of a ****ty sayan to go to that world.
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man you destroyed this fanfic you are able to write so why get sayain here i don't hate monkeys but you don't give him karma to get the race nor to be able to go to another world i know you are trying to you the cheap passport to make some future plot but you can used some thing different i read every lls novel even if it's dropped from more than a year
The google translation without edition is a great turn down for the story. Pity because thi ff has potential. Read all the way to chapter 18 before drop, the loss of immersive reading because of non-translated words, wrong setences, genre swapping and others ends up burying the good sides of the ff. If you can ignore machine translation without edit, i recommend.
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favorite lls fanfic wish for more updates though im a bit disapointed bulma didnt join the harem hopefully android 21, kale & Caulifa join from the DB-Verse
The story itself is interesting but the constant grammer errors ruined the story for me.
Nice fanfic of LLS author! although the grammar seems to be your problem and sometimes it's hard to distinguish the real genders of the characters because of the "HIS, HE, SHE, HER" though I can see from the latest update you are improving overall it's a good story.
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For exp I can do anything..... For exp I can go to any lengths..... For exp I can create many useless reviews..... Because exp is my life.... It is my love.... And it is my dream.....
I like the story, but why does the character always try to make his monsters female.... He should get more Male monsters... but he has like none..
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This's the best fic i had read in this site and bring the real meaning of hiden Gem. We don't have a too early op Mc or a idiot Mc who chase all the girls that he see, basicaly a hiden Gem.
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Go to dragon ball world, and go to namekian fat old elder... Unlock your potential, wish for abilities to plant senzu bean so your elf could plant and cultivate it, and wish for world law to accept you so you would be able to up your strength without worry... And lastly, wish for assimilation of broly legendary saiyan genetic into your body!!!!!
Sigh....it's really hard to find lls fanfiction When i find one, the author destroy it with fricking saiyan stupid bloodline ๐๐ If u ask me why saiyan is sucks is cuz, no matter how strong you are, that dosn't change the fact that you are monkey