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Inesperadamente, la serie es muy interesante, tengo mucha curiosidad por lo que viene después de cada capítulo, es una lastima, pues esperaba más desarrollo en asterisc, con tal vez una o dos waifus, sin decir, si mc quisiera que xinglu se uniera a el hubiera sido fácil, aunque creo que tendría algunas consecuencias en el espacio divino, como reducción de recompensas y similares. Bueno, la parte sería ahora: la historia en realidad va lento, aunque pareciera rápido, sería genial un poco más de desarrollo entre personajes, después de todo, las waifus en asterisc fueron tratados como un extra con una cantidad mínima de contenido cada una, es triste, La historia también tiene varios capítulos en dónde solo vuelcan información, parecen un poco redundante, talvez agregar un poco más de perspectivas diferentes sería bueno, para ver el efecto del mc en el restó del mundo, así como ver cómo otros personajes tratan su relación con el mc, también agregar algo de relleno, después de todo, es importante mostrar, que mc cuida su salud mental, y que no todo son combates a muerte, un buen relleno es el clásico viaje a la playa, o visitar las aguas termales, dónde los personajes pueden mejorar su relación y liberar su estrés acumulado, lo demás son todos detalles menores, la escritura esta muy bien, la historia es perfecta, ahora solo falta ver a donde se dirige.
The fanfic is well written, I liked it. Thanks to the author, I even remembered War Asterick and refreshed my memory, but special thanks for the good writing of the work, especially in the part about Danmachi. It's not often you come across a good fanfic about Danmachi.
Explanation - is all that fanfic have. Boredom - is all i feel. Narrative - is what author doesn't know. Mtl it is. . .
To be honest, it's kind of ambivalent, on the one hand it's not bad, on the other hand it's not clear. I mean the interaction of Luke with the rest, there are whole chapters in which Luke just sighs and that's it. the feeling that he is mute, and can not talk, I would like to interact with other characters. Another point is that a lot of “water”, that is, a lot of unnecessary words, what the author wrote in previous chapters, he repeats the same in subsequent chapters, I do not mind the explanation, but he has it too detailed and unnecessary, the plot is interesting, romance is not yet clear, so I'm waiting for better writing, unless of course the author does not abandon it.
Writing quality is decent and the plot seems not bad but I regret Asterix arc is a bit short and lack backstory(10 years is mentoned for ser veresta it seems strange to me the big sister didn't seem so much older than ayato but I can be wrong and I don't remember an overwelming 'immortal' like his master) The Danmachi arc is slow paced but MC backstory is still blank. It's nethertheless a pleasant read.
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One of the most enjoyable DanmachiXAsterisk crossover mercenary isekai fanfic I've come across in a while. The fanfic is by no means 'unique' nor 'the best', since it has a pretty much cliche and straightforward plot of any Mary Sue type of MC isekai-ed to animeverse. However, the execution of the storyline and fighting scenes are definitely outstanding and pleasantly enjoyable to read. With excellent writing, minimal error, and smooth grammar, it is no wonder I have a great time reading this work to the point I can't stop reading it. On another note, the entire experience is extremely similar to another fanfic I've read: Illimitable until death. In plot, MC, and vibe. I almost imagined the MC to be the same person if not because the stark difference in skillset. 😂 Overall, if you're looking for an enjoyable Danmachi/Asterisk fanfic, you won't regret reading this work.
Great story. unique origin. pretty unique first world. grammar is great. honestly nothing i could criticize that wouldn't be nitpicking or my own personal preferences.
This book is worth trying. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
The Mc is Very weak despite having trained before and all. Really weak pathetic, what a way to ruin the story 😡💢. Slow growth so nothing special This is my review for Danmachi chapters.
its pretty hard to understand the begning of the story it just confusing asf... and the author goes with the whole chineseish spin on his writing and if u expect a thrilling spin of the cannon stories .. well ur wrong its all oc he just borrows the names of the places and makes up his own story its good but not what i was after i came for a fanfic not some original novel with some names and characters that are the same... and back to the chinese thingy.. he joins a specific group in asterisk war world where they all talk like chinese cultivators so if its not to ur liking you should stay away it was truly hard for me to read thru all this imo i hate chinese styled writing.... it just sounds stupid and their saying just makes me want to die ... anyways i dident bother to read more then 30 chapters and i had to really force myself to do it .. the dialouge was really har with the wuxia style xD anyways its not all bad , the author writes really really well its not just my cup of tea !
I have only read the Danmachi part which starts from ch 53 . But these 3 chapters are good. I expect you to maintain this quality ☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜☺️☺️☺️😜😜☺️
its good, though o stopped after asterisk war volume since i want to stack chapters of the danmachi til it finishes.
It is entertaining and very funny and fulfills the objective[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
so far so good, I love this Danmachi Arc and I want Ais and Ryuu, become MC's Harem and take them with him, and make them stronger than their canon
Pretty good animeverse fic.Hope the pacing was a bit faster but besides that i really enjoyed reading this [img=update][img=update][img=update]
the start of the history os good but as you read the history Just turn into something generic, Its nota bad Just clichê and generic
As of ch85, I'd say a Pretty good fic, as expected, Danmachi arc is exciting since Asterisk war arc was just a training arc so he has a solid foundation in the upcoming worlds. MC isn't immediately OP but trains for his strength. Asterisk War arc was pretty doozy, it has a few filler chapters that I didn't like, hopefully he advances his relationship there once he comes back. I'll be back in the future after stashing more chapters since I don't wanna be left on a cliffhanger in Danmachi arc. Also author sama, you said this has 2800 chapters? can I get the link?
A decent fic. It is kinda slow for now. Translation is good and smooth. Thank you for your hard work!
very good story, although it would be better if the mc was more of a hero for the world, loved by spirits and magic, I quite like his talent with the sword, but it would be nice if he was a magical swordsman, although it is said that he was already when he combined seiseijutsu and his swordsmanship, but then in Danmachi he only knows the "Basics", although it was mentioned that he was a genius in Seiseijutsu, not as much as the sword but they called him a Genius, just knowing the basics? , try to add more magical knowledge, everything else is 10/10. recommended story I give you 5 ☆
All I can really say about this story is that it is great. The only part I deducted a star from was World Background because the background is based off of original material.
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author you promised that once the novel gets 20 reviews we get a bonus chapter, well until i finish binge reading the novel this reminder/review will have to do.
It’s a interesting story to make the main character an agent for an high god space as his main base before he goes to other wolds for missions .can’t wait for more 😎
Pretty decent animeverse fic. If the details regarding the main god space and why the MC can traverse was meshed out from the beginning then the World Background would be more solid but its still good. The 'golden finger' gives me Terror Infinity vibes. Overall its a nice fic, would definitely recommend.
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Inesperadamente, la serie es muy interesante, tengo mucha curiosidad por lo que viene después de cada capítulo, es una lastima, pues esperaba más desarrollo en asterisc, con tal vez una o dos waifus, sin decir, si mc quisiera que xinglu se uniera a el hubiera sido fácil, aunque creo que tendría algunas consecuencias en el espacio divino, como reducción de recompensas y similares. Bueno, la parte sería ahora: la historia en realidad va lento, aunque pareciera rápido, sería genial un poco más de desarrollo entre personajes, después de todo, las waifus en asterisc fueron tratados como un extra con una cantidad mínima de contenido cada una, es triste, La historia también tiene varios capítulos en dónde solo vuelcan información, parecen un poco redundante, talvez agregar un poco más de perspectivas diferentes sería bueno, para ver el efecto del mc en el restó del mundo, así como ver cómo otros personajes tratan su relación con el mc, también agregar algo de relleno, después de todo, es importante mostrar, que mc cuida su salud mental, y que no todo son combates a muerte, un buen relleno es el clásico viaje a la playa, o visitar las aguas termales, dónde los personajes pueden mejorar su relación y liberar su estrés acumulado, lo demás son todos detalles menores, la escritura esta muy bien, la historia es perfecta, ahora solo falta ver a donde se dirige.
The fanfic is well written, I liked it. Thanks to the author, I even remembered War Asterick and refreshed my memory, but special thanks for the good writing of the work, especially in the part about Danmachi. It's not often you come across a good fanfic about Danmachi.
Explanation - is all that fanfic have. Boredom - is all i feel. Narrative - is what author doesn't know. Mtl it is. . .
To be honest, it's kind of ambivalent, on the one hand it's not bad, on the other hand it's not clear. I mean the interaction of Luke with the rest, there are whole chapters in which Luke just sighs and that's it. the feeling that he is mute, and can not talk, I would like to interact with other characters. Another point is that a lot of “water”, that is, a lot of unnecessary words, what the author wrote in previous chapters, he repeats the same in subsequent chapters, I do not mind the explanation, but he has it too detailed and unnecessary, the plot is interesting, romance is not yet clear, so I'm waiting for better writing, unless of course the author does not abandon it.
Writing quality is decent and the plot seems not bad but I regret Asterix arc is a bit short and lack backstory(10 years is mentoned for ser veresta it seems strange to me the big sister didn't seem so much older than ayato but I can be wrong and I don't remember an overwelming 'immortal' like his master) The Danmachi arc is slow paced but MC backstory is still blank. It's nethertheless a pleasant read.
Reveal Spoiler One of the most enjoyable DanmachiXAsterisk crossover mercenary isekai fanfic I've come across in a while. The fanfic is by no means 'unique' nor 'the best', since it has a pretty much cliche and straightforward plot of any Mary Sue type of MC isekai-ed to animeverse. However, the execution of the storyline and fighting scenes are definitely outstanding and pleasantly enjoyable to read. With excellent writing, minimal error, and smooth grammar, it is no wonder I have a great time reading this work to the point I can't stop reading it. On another note, the entire experience is extremely similar to another fanfic I've read: Illimitable until death. In plot, MC, and vibe. I almost imagined the MC to be the same person if not because the stark difference in skillset. 😂 Overall, if you're looking for an enjoyable Danmachi/Asterisk fanfic, you won't regret reading this work.
Great story. unique origin. pretty unique first world. grammar is great. honestly nothing i could criticize that wouldn't be nitpicking or my own personal preferences.
This book is worth trying. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
The Mc is Very weak despite having trained before and all. Really weak pathetic, what a way to ruin the story 😡💢. Slow growth so nothing special This is my review for Danmachi chapters.
its pretty hard to understand the begning of the story it just confusing asf... and the author goes with the whole chineseish spin on his writing and if u expect a thrilling spin of the cannon stories .. well ur wrong its all oc he just borrows the names of the places and makes up his own story its good but not what i was after i came for a fanfic not some original novel with some names and characters that are the same... and back to the chinese thingy.. he joins a specific group in asterisk war world where they all talk like chinese cultivators so if its not to ur liking you should stay away it was truly hard for me to read thru all this imo i hate chinese styled writing.... it just sounds stupid and their saying just makes me want to die ... anyways i dident bother to read more then 30 chapters and i had to really force myself to do it .. the dialouge was really har with the wuxia style xD anyways its not all bad , the author writes really really well its not just my cup of tea !
I have only read the Danmachi part which starts from ch 53 . But these 3 chapters are good. I expect you to maintain this quality ☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜☺️☺️☺️😜😜☺️
its good, though o stopped after asterisk war volume since i want to stack chapters of the danmachi til it finishes.
It is entertaining and very funny and fulfills the objective[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
so far so good, I love this Danmachi Arc and I want Ais and Ryuu, become MC's Harem and take them with him, and make them stronger than their canon
Pretty good animeverse fic.Hope the pacing was a bit faster but besides that i really enjoyed reading this [img=update][img=update][img=update]
the start of the history os good but as you read the history Just turn into something generic, Its nota bad Just clichê and generic
As of ch85, I'd say a Pretty good fic, as expected, Danmachi arc is exciting since Asterisk war arc was just a training arc so he has a solid foundation in the upcoming worlds. MC isn't immediately OP but trains for his strength. Asterisk War arc was pretty doozy, it has a few filler chapters that I didn't like, hopefully he advances his relationship there once he comes back. I'll be back in the future after stashing more chapters since I don't wanna be left on a cliffhanger in Danmachi arc. Also author sama, you said this has 2800 chapters? can I get the link?
A decent fic. It is kinda slow for now. Translation is good and smooth. Thank you for your hard work!
very good story, although it would be better if the mc was more of a hero for the world, loved by spirits and magic, I quite like his talent with the sword, but it would be nice if he was a magical swordsman, although it is said that he was already when he combined seiseijutsu and his swordsmanship, but then in Danmachi he only knows the "Basics", although it was mentioned that he was a genius in Seiseijutsu, not as much as the sword but they called him a Genius, just knowing the basics? , try to add more magical knowledge, everything else is 10/10. recommended story I give you 5 ☆
All I can really say about this story is that it is great. The only part I deducted a star from was World Background because the background is based off of original material.
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author you promised that once the novel gets 20 reviews we get a bonus chapter, well until i finish binge reading the novel this reminder/review will have to do.
It’s a interesting story to make the main character an agent for an high god space as his main base before he goes to other wolds for missions .can’t wait for more 😎
Pretty decent animeverse fic. If the details regarding the main god space and why the MC can traverse was meshed out from the beginning then the World Background would be more solid but its still good. The 'golden finger' gives me Terror Infinity vibes. Overall its a nice fic, would definitely recommend.
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