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The plot has so much potential and it can be so much more interesting if written properly. The dialogues and the mindset of the main character are cringe enough for me to stop and leave this review here. If only the characters were less cringe and the plot was focused on a particular issue to be taken care of by the main character, this could've been a jewel.
Muy buena historia, la tuve marcada un tiempo sin leerla porque no tenía etiquetas de romance ni harem pero valió la pena haberla leído. Aunque no soy fanático de ese tipo de romance que termina(como fue con Kyoko) puedo ver que lo manejaste bien(tampoco se centró mucho en el romance así que no importó mucho, pero en mi opinión, si ibas a hacer que la pareja rompiera, no lo tendrías que haber unido en primer lugar). Mi preferencia para este tipo de historias donde el MC viaja a varios mundos siempre es harem pero me gustó en general. La personalidad y el crecimiento del MC me gustó, el trasfondo mundial también(me gustó que agregaras la relación entre el mundo del MC y esos mundos Isekai). La elección de mundos también me gustó, es el primer fanfic que leo sobre Kumo desu y Konjiki no word master. La elección de los miembros del chat también me gustó y el desarrollo de los miembros también. La historia y la trama fue original y bien desarrollada y no lo sentí para nada forzado. Una historia entretenida y agradable de leer, sigue así autor.
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is this translate?, can i get the raw?, y'know the las updae is 4 month ago, if this not traslate can you update pleasse, i like relationship of izumi and tabane
Would have been better if the chat group only involved those in the same or similar genre. Horimiya is a cute feel good anime, it would have been better if the premise is Miyamura helping the other protagonist with their lovelife or something. Or spraying dogfood in the chat, since other Protagonists only get the girl in the last episodes while Miyamura already got Hori in the first episodes. I didn't like Miyamura's sudden need to become OP when in the first chapter it was explained that he just regained his memories but in the later chapter it seems like someone just replaced Miyamura. The power balance of the worlds are very unequal when the Original world is "normal" Japan.
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The story and premise are great. The MC is dog water trash. made by some Chinese kid who doesn't have a social life so has no idea what talking to other humans is actually like. the grammar is subpar. almost not worth attempting to read it but still passable enough to at least see where the story heads. a lot to be desired. if this author had an editor and someone who knew how social interaction worked then this story would be awesome, sadly thats not the case. I can say for sure that this author has never had a girlfriend.
is harem!!!!!!?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I'm going to be completely honest when I first started reading the book I dropped it what in the first couple chapters but I said hey I enjoyed the other books from the author so let's just give the author of benefit of the doubt and finish the book after I came back and started reading the book I found that I actually enjoyed it the character development after like a couple of chapters actually started getting good I would recommend the book but to those who are going to read it I strongly advise you to just continue reading I know some parts of the book at first may not make any sense but keep reading and it actually become enjoyableoh unto the author I need more chapters thank you very much[img=update]
pls update this book, really enjoyed reading this as it included lots of animes i like. even if this gets dropped thank you for writing this
Like the story ! Plus the concept is rocking awesome !! I enjoyed every moment of his novel for those who are reading this review if you are search for a good novel then this for you guys!!!!
good story so far I love the fairy tail anime and honestly think it's underated I glad to see you included it in your book and can you tell me the love interest if there is one
This novel pretty much have what i would ask so you can say the review is biased 😂
The story is something the author didn't put much effort into, it seems like what popped into his head and sounds interesting was written into the story. Protagonist and like a child with his powers, he wants a power that he thinks is cool, he gains power, plays with the new power, then in the next chapter he is already thinking of another power without really mastering what he has. Other than that the characters get strong at such a fast speed that for the missions to have some difficulty a part of their power has to be blocked. Anyway, it's not a story to be taken seriously when reading, if each member of the group keeps to 1 single type of power or advantage and trains for their powers and complements them during missions that need several members, together with a slower development of strength, only then would this story be an interesting read. And the protagonist doesn't seem to have a personality of his own, for me he conveys the idea of a character whose personality is formed from pieces of fictional characters
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rewrite? is there any difference from the previous one? i mean, before you rewrite it.
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I like it and it's refreshing when dimensional fanfic is not about harem hunting and hopefully won't turn like that because fanfic like that is already the norm they turn stale and repetitive
Well I Feel Sorry For Hori-san 🥺 But in my mind I am hoping for HAREM 😅 I avoid this novel since some member of group chat that I didn't like but when I try to read this 😅 I feel astonished 🤯
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I am disappointed.. Until this chapter he still insists on Kyouko... I feel like MCs are becoming more and more selfless... Even though there are many other characters... I'm disappointed to read... Too forced story also becomes bland
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This fanfic is truly fantastic In my opinion It is nice to read and the story isnt to slow paced or fast paced. The only sad thing is that there are to little Chapters and i Want to read more :(( This is my fIrst time i voted for a novel and i Do not regret it. I recommend This novel!!!
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I like this fic its one of my top liked ones (buttt why make him break up with horiiii)
Говно а не сюжет зачем ты так блин затягиваешь эту миссию а!? Меня уже это заебало все я ливаю ..............................................................................
Currently on chapter 60 of the rewrite. The original's romance with Hori-san makes sense, he has low self esteem, is lonely, was bullied and in the end found her who "accepts" him. But here, he's not like that at all, and we only see a Hori-san who is jealous, she doesn't want him to stop being "dark", show his pretty face to others and stand out, at the same time she doesn't want others to find out that she knows someone so "dark" and it's very possessive. In the end it's just a toxic relationship.
alright, gonna say to all of you, readers. Thanks for your patience as I rewrite this novel from the first chapter. I believe the grammar was too awful to read, so I decided to rewrite it at that time. although I'm not sure how my grammar currently is, I already tried my best, and I hope you like it. I made a lot of changes in interactions and deleted an arc that was supposed to be after the Konosuba arc. I also added more words per chapter. 1400-2000. ah, let me remind you, the plot is basically the same as the previous one. anyway sorry for the inconvenience, and thank you for still willing to wait for the new chapters to come.
The plot has so much potential and it can be so much more interesting if written properly. The dialogues and the mindset of the main character are cringe enough for me to stop and leave this review here. If only the characters were less cringe and the plot was focused on a particular issue to be taken care of by the main character, this could've been a jewel.
Muy buena historia, la tuve marcada un tiempo sin leerla porque no tenía etiquetas de romance ni harem pero valió la pena haberla leído. Aunque no soy fanático de ese tipo de romance que termina(como fue con Kyoko) puedo ver que lo manejaste bien(tampoco se centró mucho en el romance así que no importó mucho, pero en mi opinión, si ibas a hacer que la pareja rompiera, no lo tendrías que haber unido en primer lugar). Mi preferencia para este tipo de historias donde el MC viaja a varios mundos siempre es harem pero me gustó en general. La personalidad y el crecimiento del MC me gustó, el trasfondo mundial también(me gustó que agregaras la relación entre el mundo del MC y esos mundos Isekai). La elección de mundos también me gustó, es el primer fanfic que leo sobre Kumo desu y Konjiki no word master. La elección de los miembros del chat también me gustó y el desarrollo de los miembros también. La historia y la trama fue original y bien desarrollada y no lo sentí para nada forzado. Una historia entretenida y agradable de leer, sigue así autor.
Reveal Spoiler is this translate?, can i get the raw?, y'know the las updae is 4 month ago, if this not traslate can you update pleasse, i like relationship of izumi and tabane
Would have been better if the chat group only involved those in the same or similar genre. Horimiya is a cute feel good anime, it would have been better if the premise is Miyamura helping the other protagonist with their lovelife or something. Or spraying dogfood in the chat, since other Protagonists only get the girl in the last episodes while Miyamura already got Hori in the first episodes. I didn't like Miyamura's sudden need to become OP when in the first chapter it was explained that he just regained his memories but in the later chapter it seems like someone just replaced Miyamura. The power balance of the worlds are very unequal when the Original world is "normal" Japan.
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The story and premise are great. The MC is dog water trash. made by some Chinese kid who doesn't have a social life so has no idea what talking to other humans is actually like. the grammar is subpar. almost not worth attempting to read it but still passable enough to at least see where the story heads. a lot to be desired. if this author had an editor and someone who knew how social interaction worked then this story would be awesome, sadly thats not the case. I can say for sure that this author has never had a girlfriend.
is harem!!!!!!?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I'm going to be completely honest when I first started reading the book I dropped it what in the first couple chapters but I said hey I enjoyed the other books from the author so let's just give the author of benefit of the doubt and finish the book after I came back and started reading the book I found that I actually enjoyed it the character development after like a couple of chapters actually started getting good I would recommend the book but to those who are going to read it I strongly advise you to just continue reading I know some parts of the book at first may not make any sense but keep reading and it actually become enjoyableoh unto the author I need more chapters thank you very much[img=update]
pls update this book, really enjoyed reading this as it included lots of animes i like. even if this gets dropped thank you for writing this
Like the story ! Plus the concept is rocking awesome !! I enjoyed every moment of his novel for those who are reading this review if you are search for a good novel then this for you guys!!!!
good story so far I love the fairy tail anime and honestly think it's underated I glad to see you included it in your book and can you tell me the love interest if there is one
This novel pretty much have what i would ask so you can say the review is biased 😂
The story is something the author didn't put much effort into, it seems like what popped into his head and sounds interesting was written into the story. Protagonist and like a child with his powers, he wants a power that he thinks is cool, he gains power, plays with the new power, then in the next chapter he is already thinking of another power without really mastering what he has. Other than that the characters get strong at such a fast speed that for the missions to have some difficulty a part of their power has to be blocked. Anyway, it's not a story to be taken seriously when reading, if each member of the group keeps to 1 single type of power or advantage and trains for their powers and complements them during missions that need several members, together with a slower development of strength, only then would this story be an interesting read. And the protagonist doesn't seem to have a personality of his own, for me he conveys the idea of a character whose personality is formed from pieces of fictional characters
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rewrite? is there any difference from the previous one? i mean, before you rewrite it.
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I like it and it's refreshing when dimensional fanfic is not about harem hunting and hopefully won't turn like that because fanfic like that is already the norm they turn stale and repetitive
Well I Feel Sorry For Hori-san 🥺 But in my mind I am hoping for HAREM 😅 I avoid this novel since some member of group chat that I didn't like but when I try to read this 😅 I feel astonished 🤯
Reveal Spoiler I am disappointed.. Until this chapter he still insists on Kyouko... I feel like MCs are becoming more and more selfless... Even though there are many other characters... I'm disappointed to read... Too forced story also becomes bland
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This fanfic is truly fantastic In my opinion It is nice to read and the story isnt to slow paced or fast paced. The only sad thing is that there are to little Chapters and i Want to read more :(( This is my fIrst time i voted for a novel and i Do not regret it. I recommend This novel!!!
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I like this fic its one of my top liked ones (buttt why make him break up with horiiii)
Говно а не сюжет зачем ты так блин затягиваешь эту миссию а!? Меня уже это заебало все я ливаю ..............................................................................
Currently on chapter 60 of the rewrite. The original's romance with Hori-san makes sense, he has low self esteem, is lonely, was bullied and in the end found her who "accepts" him. But here, he's not like that at all, and we only see a Hori-san who is jealous, she doesn't want him to stop being "dark", show his pretty face to others and stand out, at the same time she doesn't want others to find out that she knows someone so "dark" and it's very possessive. In the end it's just a toxic relationship.
alright, gonna say to all of you, readers. Thanks for your patience as I rewrite this novel from the first chapter. I believe the grammar was too awful to read, so I decided to rewrite it at that time. although I'm not sure how my grammar currently is, I already tried my best, and I hope you like it. I made a lot of changes in interactions and deleted an arc that was supposed to be after the Konosuba arc. I also added more words per chapter. 1400-2000. ah, let me remind you, the plot is basically the same as the previous one. anyway sorry for the inconvenience, and thank you for still willing to wait for the new chapters to come.