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A young man named Mark finds himself at the crossroads of life and death, struck by the fateful "truck-kun" and offered a chance for reincarnation by a higher-dimensional being known as ROB.
Given the opportunity to start anew, Mark, now reborn as James Logan Howlett, enters the Marvel Cinematic Universe (MCU).
Armed with the combined abilities of Wolverine and an Alpha werewolf, James now as one of the most formidable beings in existence, he navigates his new life.
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Write a reviewI have to say, this is a MASSIVE improvement over the original story so far. The pacing is still very fast but at least everything is properly explained and accounted for now. Basically the largest issue with the story now is the grammar. I suggest a Beta reader and using Grammarly to iron out those issues for smoother/easier reading. The only other issues I personally have are the lackluster explanation for the new AU world background elements (vampires, werewolves, and how mutants and other elements will fit in) and the minimal character development for the so-called 'Pack'. Like seriously, the only people we actually KNOW in this fairly large 'Pack' are Laura, Selene, and now Hank and Logan. Aside from these issues, it is an interesting story and the improvement from your original story is phenomenal — keep up the good work!
Reveal SpoilerThis is way way better than the original [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story has potential to be great, just hoping the author won't drop. Though the story is entertaining, it can be more better. All The Best 🙏
Author Kakarot1809
So far the story telling is way better than the OG