/ Urban / Alive again
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Is there anything worse than watching your mother get murdered by your father after he used her to get ahead in life in any way possible?
Well except you get killed next, then, Yes!
I'm stuck in this hallow dark place. I think I've been here for days or months, I don't know.
Wait! I feel like I'm moving
What's that white thing
I'm going to the light
Nice, at least it's not hell then...
Where am I? And why on earth is that girl looking at me like I stole her money? She's pretty though. Wait, I'm suppose to be in heaven, why am I here?
Wait how am I seeing, I feel like my eyes are closed. They are.
Gosh I'm soo tired, let me try and get up.
My hands definitely did not look like this before I died, this is not my skin.
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Write a reviewThe story's sentence structure makes it feel like a quick read. The story develops fast, it's simple and easygoing. It gives you enough to keep reading while making you ask new questions. The grammar and writing style is good for now but I hope it gets better as the story progresses.
Definitely a captivating read. The poignant tale centred around the two characters, Tia and Marie who are very unique in their own way. The character descriptions are vivid and the dialogues are heartfelt and perfectly captures their emotions and struggles. Overall, an engaging story with great potential.
Author Sleepyglasses
Hello, I'm the Author of this novel. This is me shamelessly writing a review for myself. I really hope you take your time to read the novel and enjoy it. Do comment your thoughts on the novel, chapters, heck even paragraphs. Thanks!