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Shameless Author here! This is my Fantasy Carnival entry. I hope everyone can give it a read and maybe a few votes if you happen to like it. Please enjoy!
Really an enjoyable reading. ML and FL are relatable, dialogues flow naturally, the story is developing in a logic way. Good pace, some action with purpose, MC building strength without weird out of the blue deus ex machina. The world background isn't that much developed same with the system, but te story is just starting. If I were to criticize something, it would be the headache scene. I've seen that somewhere else. The MC talking to himself out loud to trigger it was a bit unnecessary but I hope it will be well managed in the end. Either way I don't dislike that path. So far so good š Keep going, author sama! I believe in you!
I've really been enjoying the story so far. Will it continue or has the project been abandoned?
I want more than this! more more~~......................................................................................................................
The characters are irritable, all they do is threaten and the fool of the protagonist doesn't say anything, it's annoying. Also, despite having time, because if he does, he doesn't practice spells, it's absurd. I spend more time fruitful than entertained reading this, and that the story has potential.
great story, loved reading it until I had to purchase the privilege chapters only to have the author stop updating. cost to finish the book as is is $30. privileged chapters are a waste of money at this point
I absolutely love this story! Definitely one of the better ones Iāve read. Definitely give this story a chance if you like video game mixed with fantasy. The harem also feels totally naturally so thatās a huge plus. To the author: I donāt know if youāre looking for a copy editor but if so let me know! Iām a copy editor in desperate need of experience and job opportunities. Iām okay working for free at first as a trial, and will continue to work for free if this isnāt a big job. Iād love to hear from you if youāre interested. Have a great day and I canāt wait to read more of your story!!
Author i loved the story so far it's one of best i have read recently i only have 1small request which u can ignore if it's problem with ur plans Please don't have more than 1 Romantic interest if 1 is low then 2 is fine too but no more šš
Love the story. I wonder if the goddess was the one who changed his life. My only hope is that he gets even stronger than his previous prime.
This novel has become one of my favourite now and even if concept is a bit common but for me it is well written and i love how the story is going on even though i have read it upto 20 chapters .
I love this novel it has sorting that captivats me and I can't stop reading. in my opinion the game mechanic and the world mechanic is really creative.
not yet given a try but my friend recommended it . there is still few chod but if it is good I will also recommend this book to my discord membersš. and i will update the review after reading 100 chps but author don't drop the novelš„²
It's hard to review something that won't be removed automatically. I'm trying to make it show up so others know what to expect but I guess I have to make it brief. It's well written with little errors. The story is developing nicely and if you've read something like TLM, it has the same vibes. MC is built well without upsetting qualities from what I can see so far but early chapter world-building isn't very enlightening unless you've decided to stick around and read. Everything is laid out very informatively and pleasant for the eyes, give it a go.
Somone recomed it to me and i am realy impresed. I realy like this novel and i would recomend it to other people. It was my first novel i red online.
A realy great novel. Its been a while since i had a great novel like this. I hope author doesnt drop this and i absolutely recommend it to other readers.
First if all I didn't Expect for this to be Good! There's still some room for improvements and the romance is developing well! .. Soisisksksksks
So far so good lol can't wait to see how the story evolves. Haven't seen much about items and if they help with stats or have keyword abilities (i.e) sharpness or causes bleed. Idk if author plans to implement it at a later point but it definitely doesn't take away from the story and I know some authors go overboard with it making pages of numbers and skills repeatably to nauseum.
I have now looked at 69 books with many of them being dropped very quickly. If you like fantasy and leveling, this is the story for you. The leveling isnt insainly fast and hes an npc. A new angle I have not seen. I am glad this book is my 69th book.
pleasantly surprised, so far the story seems to moving in a good direction. keep up the good work.
Good book. whyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovel
Excellently written story. Main Character in a game word as an 'NPC', which although being a common trope but usually fails due to character relationships, cringe MC etc. are not seen in this story. It is still in its early stage so just hoping for author to not drop this story and prioritize quality over quantity. Excellent execution 5 stars for now. MC relationship with and MC well fells more humane(having own character). No complains for now.
Shameless Author here! This is my Fantasy Carnival entry. I hope everyone can give it a read and maybe a few votes if you happen to like it. Please enjoy!
Really an enjoyable reading. ML and FL are relatable, dialogues flow naturally, the story is developing in a logic way. Good pace, some action with purpose, MC building strength without weird out of the blue deus ex machina. The world background isn't that much developed same with the system, but te story is just starting. If I were to criticize something, it would be the headache scene. I've seen that somewhere else. The MC talking to himself out loud to trigger it was a bit unnecessary but I hope it will be well managed in the end. Either way I don't dislike that path. So far so good š Keep going, author sama! I believe in you!
I've really been enjoying the story so far. Will it continue or has the project been abandoned?
I want more than this! more more~~......................................................................................................................
The characters are irritable, all they do is threaten and the fool of the protagonist doesn't say anything, it's annoying. Also, despite having time, because if he does, he doesn't practice spells, it's absurd. I spend more time fruitful than entertained reading this, and that the story has potential.
great story, loved reading it until I had to purchase the privilege chapters only to have the author stop updating. cost to finish the book as is is $30. privileged chapters are a waste of money at this point
I absolutely love this story! Definitely one of the better ones Iāve read. Definitely give this story a chance if you like video game mixed with fantasy. The harem also feels totally naturally so thatās a huge plus. To the author: I donāt know if youāre looking for a copy editor but if so let me know! Iām a copy editor in desperate need of experience and job opportunities. Iām okay working for free at first as a trial, and will continue to work for free if this isnāt a big job. Iād love to hear from you if youāre interested. Have a great day and I canāt wait to read more of your story!!
Author i loved the story so far it's one of best i have read recently i only have 1small request which u can ignore if it's problem with ur plans Please don't have more than 1 Romantic interest if 1 is low then 2 is fine too but no more šš
Love the story. I wonder if the goddess was the one who changed his life. My only hope is that he gets even stronger than his previous prime.
This novel has become one of my favourite now and even if concept is a bit common but for me it is well written and i love how the story is going on even though i have read it upto 20 chapters .
I love this novel it has sorting that captivats me and I can't stop reading. in my opinion the game mechanic and the world mechanic is really creative.
not yet given a try but my friend recommended it . there is still few chod but if it is good I will also recommend this book to my discord membersš. and i will update the review after reading 100 chps but author don't drop the novelš„²
It's hard to review something that won't be removed automatically. I'm trying to make it show up so others know what to expect but I guess I have to make it brief. It's well written with little errors. The story is developing nicely and if you've read something like TLM, it has the same vibes. MC is built well without upsetting qualities from what I can see so far but early chapter world-building isn't very enlightening unless you've decided to stick around and read. Everything is laid out very informatively and pleasant for the eyes, give it a go.
Somone recomed it to me and i am realy impresed. I realy like this novel and i would recomend it to other people. It was my first novel i red online.
A realy great novel. Its been a while since i had a great novel like this. I hope author doesnt drop this and i absolutely recommend it to other readers.
First if all I didn't Expect for this to be Good! There's still some room for improvements and the romance is developing well! .. Soisisksksksks
So far so good lol can't wait to see how the story evolves. Haven't seen much about items and if they help with stats or have keyword abilities (i.e) sharpness or causes bleed. Idk if author plans to implement it at a later point but it definitely doesn't take away from the story and I know some authors go overboard with it making pages of numbers and skills repeatably to nauseum.
I have now looked at 69 books with many of them being dropped very quickly. If you like fantasy and leveling, this is the story for you. The leveling isnt insainly fast and hes an npc. A new angle I have not seen. I am glad this book is my 69th book.
pleasantly surprised, so far the story seems to moving in a good direction. keep up the good work.
Good book. whyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovelwhyfortycharacterswebnovel
Excellently written story. Main Character in a game word as an 'NPC', which although being a common trope but usually fails due to character relationships, cringe MC etc. are not seen in this story. It is still in its early stage so just hoping for author to not drop this story and prioritize quality over quantity. Excellent execution 5 stars for now. MC relationship with and MC well fells more humane(having own character). No complains for now.