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Hitherto finding myself in this unaccustomed area, I think, at the least, that a cripplingly powerful presence had overwhelmed me...
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Write a reviewThere are only 2 chapters so I can't judge too much, but for now, the writing quality's pretty good and I'm now hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author Ruukasu
There are only two chapters and there seems to be no schedule for uploads (this is the reason for a4 star rating on uploads). the writing was good, was easy to read, and didn't have weird phrasing. The characters lacked individuality and react to the situation as if they were npcs. No one directly asked jaendo or anyone from the world about anything. They talked amongst themselves but never directly to the people who knew what was happening. The protagonist never asked anyone anything just simply followed instructions. The world background has yet to be really developed so I gave the benefit of the doubt. I have high hopes for the light novel especially since the writing was good. I think they need to flesh somethings out and they would have a fantastic story in there hands.
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