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A sports fanfic and very well written 5 stars. Never leave this fanfic it's great. Although for me without the system it would have been better, it is still very good as long as you don't break the system too much.
Podrías agregar algo así como un rival para el MC para que la rivalidad que tiene de siempre ganar lo lleve a evolucionar en el montículo cuando se enfrenta a un rival fuerte
well, i'm little bit confused with author do with recent story development. the turn around is too fierce, how come coach not see value of such player that can do so well in koushien and make him not the ace just to humble him. but its allright, the joy of this novel is character increasing his skill and slap anyone with it [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]. how he choose from the system and how anyone react to such skill. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story was really good but the author decided to throw a surprise that was poorly written, in haste. no build up whatsoever. very amateurish and put a giant dent in the great story this was. Trying to be unique is hard I get it but there's better ways to go about it. if you can ignore this horrible plot point and event altogether then you'll probably still enjoy the story. because it was quite good until then.
Got to say one of the best novels that I have read so far on this platform, and that's saying a lot about this novel, now in the early chapters the author went for slow clean development which I loved, now people are complaining about his anger issues and acting like a kid, but he doesn't act like a kid, he has a temper but his normal just like any of us. All in all, pretty great novel keep it up author, I'm loving this.
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I was gonna give this a 4 star because its good but it has some grammar mistakes and the system feels kinda wonky, but the latest chapter 68.......man that was just so satisfying, you can tell the author is improving so 5 stars from me
At first, Even if this type of anime/manga doesn’ go well with system genre, I gave it a try since most reviews were well. But as soon as I read the first chapter and that mc is supposed to be a pro baseball player, my interest shot down -10000. Because then, mc is just too op. He has the experience of being pro, experience of stress that’s nothing compared to playing in a high school games. But as if that wasn’t enough, he knows what he’ s good at, what pitches he needs to throw, in what situations. Just that, already makes this story immensely boring and destroys any potential. But no, it’s not enough, lets add a system to it as well. A system that will guide mc step by steps. The best part of reading/watching sport slice of life anime/manga is the struggles that the characters go through. you could just take the first few paragraphs of the first chapter and write an original 100 chapter story instead of making this a FanFiction.
The book is good, however, it was wonky somewhere within Chapter 35-50. Author just needs a bit of touch up with baseball knowledge and everything would be good. The pacing of growth is actually pretty good, however, the characters could do some canon touch up. For example, Miyuki kept experimenting, while it was his way of playing, it was done wrong. Kept making mistakes and what not. Overall, book is good, a solid read.
ill update dis later.... because I'm I like sport anime/manga/novel... and here is one. ace of diamond 👍👌😁
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Love the story keep it up I like the character of the mc Seido's pitchers are either reserved or comic relief and the way mc is makes him stand out in the cast of interesting characters, the only problem that I might see is mc growing in strength way too quick, and system being waaaaay to OP, but I've seen a comment the author made about this very issue hopefully it will not be a problem.
It was good while it lasted ff canon. latest chapters just doesnt make sense anymore, at this point it is good because of it being a diamond no ace fic but anything additional is just trash
I like the anime Diamond no Ace And is refreshing see one fanfic that continue over the 40 chapters Thank you Srry if my englis is a little bad
I don't have much to say in term of the story as a whole, but the one thing that annoys me or that disturbs me a lot is the system. In my opinion, a system does not go well with a slice-of-life anime like Diamond no ace or other sports anime. It breaks the vibe that the story should have and it's only distracting. The system feels like a sore thumb that you have no idea what to do with. Instead of "telling" us the improvement of the character, "show" us his improvement. That's the main reason why I love sports anime. They don't tell, they show. But installing a system in that sort of story, it just kills all expectation and surprise and hype for a tense situation.
need more diamond no ace fanfiction. Love this fanfiction Great fanfiction with good grammer and mc is not fanboying the main cast lalalalalalla
Amazing. It is a reall fun read. It has a census side to it while maintains a decent pace for a fanfic. Totally recommend it. Love the system.
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This fanfic is very good! Congratz autor-san and good luck !!! ....... ........... .. .........................................................
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A sports fanfic and very well written 5 stars. Never leave this fanfic it's great. Although for me without the system it would have been better, it is still very good as long as you don't break the system too much.
Podrías agregar algo así como un rival para el MC para que la rivalidad que tiene de siempre ganar lo lleve a evolucionar en el montículo cuando se enfrenta a un rival fuerte
well, i'm little bit confused with author do with recent story development. the turn around is too fierce, how come coach not see value of such player that can do so well in koushien and make him not the ace just to humble him. but its allright, the joy of this novel is character increasing his skill and slap anyone with it [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]. how he choose from the system and how anyone react to such skill. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story was really good but the author decided to throw a surprise that was poorly written, in haste. no build up whatsoever. very amateurish and put a giant dent in the great story this was. Trying to be unique is hard I get it but there's better ways to go about it. if you can ignore this horrible plot point and event altogether then you'll probably still enjoy the story. because it was quite good until then.
Got to say one of the best novels that I have read so far on this platform, and that's saying a lot about this novel, now in the early chapters the author went for slow clean development which I loved, now people are complaining about his anger issues and acting like a kid, but he doesn't act like a kid, he has a temper but his normal just like any of us. All in all, pretty great novel keep it up author, I'm loving this.
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I was gonna give this a 4 star because its good but it has some grammar mistakes and the system feels kinda wonky, but the latest chapter 68.......man that was just so satisfying, you can tell the author is improving so 5 stars from me
At first, Even if this type of anime/manga doesn’ go well with system genre, I gave it a try since most reviews were well. But as soon as I read the first chapter and that mc is supposed to be a pro baseball player, my interest shot down -10000. Because then, mc is just too op. He has the experience of being pro, experience of stress that’s nothing compared to playing in a high school games. But as if that wasn’t enough, he knows what he’ s good at, what pitches he needs to throw, in what situations. Just that, already makes this story immensely boring and destroys any potential. But no, it’s not enough, lets add a system to it as well. A system that will guide mc step by steps. The best part of reading/watching sport slice of life anime/manga is the struggles that the characters go through. you could just take the first few paragraphs of the first chapter and write an original 100 chapter story instead of making this a FanFiction.
The book is good, however, it was wonky somewhere within Chapter 35-50. Author just needs a bit of touch up with baseball knowledge and everything would be good. The pacing of growth is actually pretty good, however, the characters could do some canon touch up. For example, Miyuki kept experimenting, while it was his way of playing, it was done wrong. Kept making mistakes and what not. Overall, book is good, a solid read.
ill update dis later.... because I'm I like sport anime/manga/novel... and here is one. ace of diamond 👍👌😁
TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP
Love the story keep it up I like the character of the mc Seido's pitchers are either reserved or comic relief and the way mc is makes him stand out in the cast of interesting characters, the only problem that I might see is mc growing in strength way too quick, and system being waaaaay to OP, but I've seen a comment the author made about this very issue hopefully it will not be a problem.
It was good while it lasted ff canon. latest chapters just doesnt make sense anymore, at this point it is good because of it being a diamond no ace fic but anything additional is just trash
I like the anime Diamond no Ace And is refreshing see one fanfic that continue over the 40 chapters Thank you Srry if my englis is a little bad
I don't have much to say in term of the story as a whole, but the one thing that annoys me or that disturbs me a lot is the system. In my opinion, a system does not go well with a slice-of-life anime like Diamond no ace or other sports anime. It breaks the vibe that the story should have and it's only distracting. The system feels like a sore thumb that you have no idea what to do with. Instead of "telling" us the improvement of the character, "show" us his improvement. That's the main reason why I love sports anime. They don't tell, they show. But installing a system in that sort of story, it just kills all expectation and surprise and hype for a tense situation.
need more diamond no ace fanfiction. Love this fanfiction Great fanfiction with good grammer and mc is not fanboying the main cast lalalalalalla
Amazing. It is a reall fun read. It has a census side to it while maintains a decent pace for a fanfic. Totally recommend it. Love the system.
Didn't ever think i did get one.Just cause its DnA,itz a 5star[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This fanfic is very good! Congratz autor-san and good luck !!! ....... ........... .. .........................................................
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
The best sport fanfic on here.......................................................... ...................................................................