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luv this story, I can see where alot of the elements of influence you mentioned come into play, I think you used them well and added a good blend of your own self to it to really give it a life of its own while still giving up the tropes we all love from these stories!!
free five star. Just wanted to ask if this was dropped or on hiatus? it was one I had been looking at reading, but it frustrates me if it goes unfinished. please let me know....
A very good novel with good plot and good character development. just wanna ask who the heck is the main character? is it this Yumo? if so you could've at least added a genderbender tag not to confuse us. Still that'd be a turn of since its not what I was expecting... I need your confirmation author, whether to continue or not. don't wanna end up disappointed by the turn of events.
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I started reading this novel because I liked the other book by this author, but (spoiler) unfortunately I gave up after I realized that the protagonist would become a woman :(. There could have been a better indication that this would happen. It gave me hope and then crushed it until it became nothing .
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An excellent story. Characters are all fun, and gets better over time. Great comedy, with sprinkles of action, drama, tension etc etc. The yuri is very much there. There's a bit too much text fillers (like alot of previous chapter as start of next chapter, too much character descriptions) but its all minor issues really. I'd say this is an absolute must read story.
After reading more than a half of the available chapters might as well leave a review. Long story short it's one of my favourite novels on this app. The characters are really well written, have their own thoughts and reach different conclusions because of that. The impact their actions have on a world is explained and shown from different perspectives which makes them even more interesting. Overall I highly recommend this novel.
The 'goddess' in the 4th chap disdains the 'male lead', while also telling the MC that when he sees the 'female lead', he'll get the [feeling] (Note: MC was still male at the time). There's also no mention of the MC needing to be 'killed', just needs to help the protagonist group grow. Maybe the goddess is into yuri and paired her 'daughter of destiny' to the final boss? There's also the fact that the female lead can absorb the MC's shadow power. It's like finding a suitable spouse for their kid. Anyway, the novel is really great! Just that I have to be extremely patient and stock up on the chaps before reading them all in one go. And the bombshell of a revelation that the MC might have gotten a physical body more than eight hundred years ago is shocking. The twist is great! I love it! I hope the Sacred Dragon King accepts the body and reveal this information. I also speculate that the one who made the scars on the first son was the MC in her out-of-control state and not the eldest daughter. The mysteries keep on piling up. I can't wait for the arc where the MC and her youngest go to the academy with the female lead. To sum everything up, it's a great story. Thumbs up to the author!
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a really nice story with amazing character details,descriptions and developments with extensive experience and a really captivating approach to a well defined reading quality. An outstanding work all in all.
quite liking this story but I'm hoping our lovely MC stops/ or at least catches on to the fact her "children" betray her every chance they get...she showers them with love and they do nothing but lie and betray her....it is sad to see that they all get away with it with no recompense :(
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very fun read ... .. I wouldn't say the story is too impressive but. .. it's good enough to satisfy me ,I'll give it five star cus I personally like it and enjoy it it's a bit more on the funny side and I like the warm moments and interactions too .
Reminds me of Villains need to save the world with no harem.. disappointing 🤣... Also so far the "antagonists" is her subordinates which is interesting
Wow! this story is truly something, the plot, the characters, the world building, the comedy, and with amazing update, all 5/5 . but that tragedy tag scares me....
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A top-notch female-led novel that captivated me from the very first chapter! The story's development is superb, and the dynamic between the MC and the female lead, along with her children, is truly amusing. The plot is exceptionally well-written, making it a true gem.
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Read up to chapter 100 so far and really enjoying it. Love the interactions between our FL and her family although the tragedy tag scares me. Hopefully nothing happens to them
I have no idea why this book doesn’t have a whole lot more views and comments and such, but this is one of the best written and most interesting concept books I’ve read on this platform. Though they are correct about being bad at writing a synopsis, we are 262 chapters in and we haven’t actually fully resolved what is stated in the synopsis. But it’s still really good with very consistent and plentiful uploads.
I enjoy it very much so far at 54 chapter in. However, I don’t really see the title or synopsis correlating to the actual plot at all.
This is one of the best fl novels I've read love how it progresses bu what happened to the other daughter of the fl when limo raided the galros fortres in the galros fortress arc she wasn't mention even once which is strange
Reveal Spoiler luv this story, I can see where alot of the elements of influence you mentioned come into play, I think you used them well and added a good blend of your own self to it to really give it a life of its own while still giving up the tropes we all love from these stories!!
free five star. Just wanted to ask if this was dropped or on hiatus? it was one I had been looking at reading, but it frustrates me if it goes unfinished. please let me know....
A very good novel with good plot and good character development. just wanna ask who the heck is the main character? is it this Yumo? if so you could've at least added a genderbender tag not to confuse us. Still that'd be a turn of since its not what I was expecting... I need your confirmation author, whether to continue or not. don't wanna end up disappointed by the turn of events.
Reveal Spoiler I started reading this novel because I liked the other book by this author, but (spoiler) unfortunately I gave up after I realized that the protagonist would become a woman :(. There could have been a better indication that this would happen. It gave me hope and then crushed it until it became nothing .
Reveal Spoiler An excellent story. Characters are all fun, and gets better over time. Great comedy, with sprinkles of action, drama, tension etc etc. The yuri is very much there. There's a bit too much text fillers (like alot of previous chapter as start of next chapter, too much character descriptions) but its all minor issues really. I'd say this is an absolute must read story.
After reading more than a half of the available chapters might as well leave a review. Long story short it's one of my favourite novels on this app. The characters are really well written, have their own thoughts and reach different conclusions because of that. The impact their actions have on a world is explained and shown from different perspectives which makes them even more interesting. Overall I highly recommend this novel.
The 'goddess' in the 4th chap disdains the 'male lead', while also telling the MC that when he sees the 'female lead', he'll get the [feeling] (Note: MC was still male at the time). There's also no mention of the MC needing to be 'killed', just needs to help the protagonist group grow. Maybe the goddess is into yuri and paired her 'daughter of destiny' to the final boss? There's also the fact that the female lead can absorb the MC's shadow power. It's like finding a suitable spouse for their kid. Anyway, the novel is really great! Just that I have to be extremely patient and stock up on the chaps before reading them all in one go. And the bombshell of a revelation that the MC might have gotten a physical body more than eight hundred years ago is shocking. The twist is great! I love it! I hope the Sacred Dragon King accepts the body and reveal this information. I also speculate that the one who made the scars on the first son was the MC in her out-of-control state and not the eldest daughter. The mysteries keep on piling up. I can't wait for the arc where the MC and her youngest go to the academy with the female lead. To sum everything up, it's a great story. Thumbs up to the author!
Reveal Spoiler a really nice story with amazing character details,descriptions and developments with extensive experience and a really captivating approach to a well defined reading quality. An outstanding work all in all.
quite liking this story but I'm hoping our lovely MC stops/ or at least catches on to the fact her "children" betray her every chance they get...she showers them with love and they do nothing but lie and betray her....it is sad to see that they all get away with it with no recompense :(
Reveal Spoiler very fun read ... .. I wouldn't say the story is too impressive but. .. it's good enough to satisfy me ,I'll give it five star cus I personally like it and enjoy it it's a bit more on the funny side and I like the warm moments and interactions too .
Reminds me of Villains need to save the world with no harem.. disappointing 🤣... Also so far the "antagonists" is her subordinates which is interesting
Wow! this story is truly something, the plot, the characters, the world building, the comedy, and with amazing update, all 5/5 . but that tragedy tag scares me....
Reveal Spoiler A top-notch female-led novel that captivated me from the very first chapter! The story's development is superb, and the dynamic between the MC and the female lead, along with her children, is truly amusing. The plot is exceptionally well-written, making it a true gem.
Reveal Spoiler Read up to chapter 100 so far and really enjoying it. Love the interactions between our FL and her family although the tragedy tag scares me. Hopefully nothing happens to them
I have no idea why this book doesn’t have a whole lot more views and comments and such, but this is one of the best written and most interesting concept books I’ve read on this platform. Though they are correct about being bad at writing a synopsis, we are 262 chapters in and we haven’t actually fully resolved what is stated in the synopsis. But it’s still really good with very consistent and plentiful uploads.
I enjoy it very much so far at 54 chapter in. However, I don’t really see the title or synopsis correlating to the actual plot at all.
This is one of the best fl novels I've read love how it progresses bu what happened to the other daughter of the fl when limo raided the galros fortres in the galros fortress arc she wasn't mention even once which is strange
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