/ Fantasy / A Walk Among Stars
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Would you give your sight... the very essence of that sense of yours...? So that never again would you be able to see again. For the simple ability to heal.
Take upon the injuries of those you care for. As with a single touch. They shall be healed. Whether it be a broken limb... a bruise... or even a whole arm... nothing, not a single thing within your grasp will ever be broken.
Yet when I opened my eyes... it was not the kaleidoscope of colors I knew the world as... nor the exuberant face of my sister. No, it was to this empty void. Filled only by my sense of touch.
"Of course"
There was no other answer that would satisfy my will. For this was my choice... and my choice alone.
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When the world was created... populated by species upon species of beings. Yet a drop here... a star that may have yet to burst. A small flap of some God's coat. For the world was given life. Life greater than others.
For they could use magic. An ability so wondrous that many nations had been created and felled in the harrowed halls of libraries.
Yet this ability was not equal, and neither was the strength of will. For it appeared within women, every man that was born... for every one of them, there was an equal thousand women. As for magic. A rare occurrence already, made even more rare by the gap.
A change in dynamic. For there was not some great king... there was not one holy emperor. Or even a god. There was a queen... a holy empress.... a Goddess.
For man's place was not on the battlefield but upon the soft ballrooms, kitchens laden with instruments of creation rather than destruction. Married into well families that cared for them like precious possessions.
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Write a reviewI was captivated by the first chapter and abused by the rest. I was enthralled with this Novel for better or for worse but as I read my frustrations mounted and I would get lost from time to time.Truly I was unable to grasp the structure of this world and the way the people in it think like a child trying to do advanced math, lost and clueless. but I could not stop reading it, at first I was upset and felt like I walked into a depression trap haha but I really don't regret reading this. Just upset that the fog covering this Novel feels as if it hasn't lifted even a little.
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I'll give this book a solid five stars as being an author myself, I had no doubt it would be very high in the rankings if work continues. Recommended to any reader who wants a gentle piece of writing or an author who wants to improve his or her writing.Keep up the good work author. I believe in you.