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Chaoyun is a girl who sometimes wondered about the possibility of her finding her own path. Not having her own life be dictated by anyone else, or decided for her the moment she was born. She has always held her own fate by her own hands.
And wanting to see the world had been her dream. For years she spent it in a town, where people come and go and in hopes of seeking a chance to leave it. A chance to see the country and the world beyond her own town.
That seems almost impossible, or a fleeting dream. Until one day, where her town receives a visitor. And all sorts of situations start happening to her and she was often at the centre of them. Making it hard for her to not ignore them as it was her own reputation at stake here .
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A different kind of historical fiction found on this site with a strong female lead who has a self-worth to try to overcome her situations. There's also a taste of new world adventure in a bygone era. It's a slow burner with a lot of potential. Where I struggled was with the add on sentences. There were too many extended conditions that started with "And", which led to moments of brain drain and having to cope with info dumping. A bit of shame as the world and character design of this story is quite unique. Otherwise, this is a hidden gem and with a bit of fine-tuning can go far. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.