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A Little Pride Ain't Hurt Nobody
4.43 (15 ratings)
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Aliens to Gods. From Powers to Magic. From death to life. Where does our Protagonist stand? Well, of course, the top.
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I have been waiting for a long time for fan fiction with Escanor I hope that you will continue to write______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________-
very fast, very confusing, little background construction. starts with an interesting premise, but ends up losing its luster, personally I liked it better when it started full of pride, but adding a cheap novel out of nowhere, giving an idea like “violence only generates violence” or even changing the life perspective of people with a few words, you should go back to africa when the Europeans arrived there and enslaved the blacks, try the same trick and the "talk no jutsu" will work yes, you can trust.
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Honestly? I'd like to ask what were you on? Marijuana? Something stronger? Cause what you wrote is just fuc!ing confusing. It's like you were having a fuc!ing seizure while writing it. I'm just... disappointed, you know? It had a good premise, Escanor without his weakness to darkness/night but just as prideful reborn in DC however you destroyed it with your writing. You go through events too fast, they are abrupt, no world building. For example in some chp he went from talking to a condescending Elven Queen to killing some dude named something Destiny in like 2 fuc!ing seconds. It's just bad, horrible I would even say.
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I haven't even read the story but I'm giving it 5 stars just because of the title -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Pretty good story so far needs more chapters. Keep up the good work.. Exp exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp exp.
Just readin the Description and knowing is our body escanor the one who stands atvtop of all clans! ...this is must! DO A MASS REALESE!!!!! No demon, Hero and no GOD can be on top of me---Escanor!
Mc is pretty great but I'm kinda disliking the world getting being the time of Merlin and Hogwarts founders . Him being with ravenclaw is great but I feel you should time skip that **** to the time of Harry Potter and make ravenclaw immortal and kinda fade into darkness until time of harry and reconnect with the school with ravenclaw and live through the ho story. Just my opinion , I just dislike fanfics of different timelines of the original.
THE MORE I READ THE MORE PRIDEFUL I GET KNEEL‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
the only presence of the mighty Escanor make it awesome but covering his weakness and keeping his personnality is like he became perfect !!!!! i have hight hope for this fanfic, keep it up!!! LOVE ya!!!!
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Very nice to read this. Lots of potential.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
I haven't even read the story just kind of waiting for him to update his Borderlands one so I gave almost 50 power Stones so far P.S I'm actually going to read the story but I want his Borderlands one to be updated