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i am gonna get hate for this but meh. good story but to manny r18 chapters where nuttin happens for story progress. i like reading ff to see the au elements in the storys once they start doing r18 chaps back to back the ff turns into a hentai at that point might as well fire up the old phub. so far outside the r18 chaps the story is desent.
wtf is this shit i can't understand a thing and coming me who read a lot of shit of translation
too much for a harem with no back story just take the best family , race and other shit and threw them to the MC as for courting girls ? the mc just wave his hand and hug her and boom welcom to the harem and dont let me start with the system all those powers with no practical use bitch please this is bad
I'm a new reader myself I bench red the current novel all the way to chapter 62, current thoughts are it's a really fun story I highly recommend, if you're a big fan of power trips having a big harem I mean if you're a red-blooded male who wouldn't want big harem, and that lemon scene are pretty enticing, so if you want something you can casually read, recommend this novel I recommend giving it a shot it wouldn't hurt.
I've snorted glue and rambled more coherently than this novel. This is most likely written by sheogorath on a skooma binge. Like the idea but its for one too fast paced power ups too fast and frequent. The moment I read about the marriage contracts I freaking cringed. overall a good read I recommend it as an interrogation tool.
To be honest, it's terrible. The incoherent hasty narration makes you sympathize with the author and wonder if he is in a fever. However, maybe this will change by the later chapters, I want to treat such authors positively and believe in their growth above themselves, I could only withstand 15 chapters. I'm putting a triple as a support.
I think this story is pretty good sure their gonna be a lot of girls but what guy wouldn't dream of having a big harem
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i am gonna get hate for this but meh. good story but to manny r18 chapters where nuttin happens for story progress. i like reading ff to see the au elements in the storys once they start doing r18 chaps back to back the ff turns into a hentai at that point might as well fire up the old phub. so far outside the r18 chaps the story is desent.
wtf is this shit i can't understand a thing and coming me who read a lot of shit of translation
too much for a harem with no back story just take the best family , race and other shit and threw them to the MC as for courting girls ? the mc just wave his hand and hug her and boom welcom to the harem and dont let me start with the system all those powers with no practical use bitch please this is bad
I'm a new reader myself I bench red the current novel all the way to chapter 62, current thoughts are it's a really fun story I highly recommend, if you're a big fan of power trips having a big harem I mean if you're a red-blooded male who wouldn't want big harem, and that lemon scene are pretty enticing, so if you want something you can casually read, recommend this novel I recommend giving it a shot it wouldn't hurt.
I've snorted glue and rambled more coherently than this novel. This is most likely written by sheogorath on a skooma binge. Like the idea but its for one too fast paced power ups too fast and frequent. The moment I read about the marriage contracts I freaking cringed. overall a good read I recommend it as an interrogation tool.
To be honest, it's terrible. The incoherent hasty narration makes you sympathize with the author and wonder if he is in a fever. However, maybe this will change by the later chapters, I want to treat such authors positively and believe in their growth above themselves, I could only withstand 15 chapters. I'm putting a triple as a support.
I think this story is pretty good sure their gonna be a lot of girls but what guy wouldn't dream of having a big harem
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