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A common man suddenly woke up in one of the cultivation worlds where normal people can be killed at any time but that is not all, but he discovers that he is not a human being either, but rather a fish that has a system that will take you to the pinnacle of all races
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the MC is very bad, he thinks he is still human, he keeps complaining all the time, all the time he complains that even though he has the strongest system I have ever seen, the only thing he really knows how to do is be a drool and pet little girl, one of the worst rehabilitation works in monsters Iโve read
Darn, both of your novel is good, I don't know why people don't see your novel... It's better if you don't take this as a full time job, writing novel is not profitable, do it as a fun project or time waster.
so lucky as in he falls into tits or the lucky where he finds new treasure/ random jade beauty because I saw harem tag so are you gonna do a trophy wife who gets kidnapped or lusted by some random young master
In addition to being very difficult to read, the protagonist has already given the first symptoms of lack of intelligence, I hope this will not happen in the future, because I'm already tired of "mc" stupid.
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Reveal SpoilerDumb mc, it's like he don't have a mind, oops, fish mind can't think, so it's like he don't have a soul to think, and the language.....better not to say anything, I won't give a low rate because it's a story about evolve.
I'll give credit where credit is due. Having your MC start off as a fish is pretty unique for a gamer reincarnation. I also see that the MC is building towards becoming Albafica in a xianxia setting. Other than that, each update isn't is short with not much happening in each chapter besides some minor banter and stat changes.
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A really interesting novel. Can't wait to read more chapters ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It needs a litter more editing here and there and it does ho a bit to fast in the Beging but I say it's ok for a novel like this at least up to page 14 or so (as I got to about there before it got to annoying for me with certain mistakes...gives me a tad bit of a headache...) but otherwise it needs a bit of editing and all and it will be really good instead of just good...keep up the good work and good jop...bye
Author The_Immortal_King
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