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A young Japanese man with eyes that take him as a 'demon,' Jinma Kotori, is killed by his former shady company and gets a second chance to live in a new fantasy RPG-like world as a bodacious goddess' 'Champion.' He begins his new life with the world's default starter class, a Brawler, and a defense-based blessing. Much to the goddess' surprise, Jinma's stats were already high for a human before the blessing was granted, and his first encounter in the new world of Raiza is a high-leveled, Special Monster ...
A typical isekai harem story with video-game mechanics and OP MC with monster girls as his main focus of love interests. Adult language, scenes, and content involving sex and gore are to be expected. Viewer discretion is advised.
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I really don’t like it he’s to much of a pushover and a beta male for me and it annoys me when he asked to be set free who dose that. And he also just talked to the spider when he was trapped and he’s just stupid in general.
The novel is good, but your setting is not right, he got a really high stats compare to other novel but he was still capture than of what use is the stat and making him OP so maybe you should consider, because a normal person can still capture him that means he is not OP with all the strength he has i don't think he can't break out of the web am not trying to diss you but the way you wrote it just made the MC feel dumb and weak
good story ****ty/dumb mc just gets lead by the nose its good but can't stand mc gl with future chapters unfortunately I'm dropping this. 140140140140
Really bad Beta B*tch MC, his personality makes no sense, and he is really stupid. He is so much of a Beta B*tch that it makes it impossible for him to be OP.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
Be warnd is veryyyyyy slow paced. like very very slow paced.When you read it you move actually back in time.es you cann see i´am at chap 113 but nothing relly happend there.like NOTHINK litte sex secene there and here but thats all.
I barely read up to Chapter 3. MC's personality doesn't match what the author describe. Especially the MC's behavior is too passive. Anyways. If you want to read just read it. I just don't like the story.
I like the story so far but the way the mc handles girls just makes me want to flip some tables and then some. didn't we have enough of those beta males in all the japanese/chinese novels?
This novel will seriously test your patience while reading. One of the worst novel available on webnovel and Mc is just stupid. Don't waste your time on this shit .
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First of all, thank you Author!! For bringing us your wonderful story here in webnovel, cause its so rare to find a good read, about action/adventure/fantasy/hentai novel out there!! And I commend you for that!! (Thankful) 😂 Okay storywise, the world background in my opinion (is still developing, I mean there are still tons of improvements, as of right now in the current chapters) is detailed enough for the current arc? And I think we will discover it as long as we continue to follow the story of Jinma. As for the characters, their all okay for me, I mean its not even a week last the story so yeah, their personalities is just the tip of the iceberg, "currently". And also my only concern is the MC, I hope he will not restrict himself too much, for his so called "MORALS" (like killing and certain MORALS which is cumbersome in his present situation cause he's now in the OTHERWORLD) , which is based on "EARTH", I mean he can still retain it (in a certain aspect) but I hope he understands that he's not on EARTH any more. And yeah that's all. I don't really review much often cause, I don't know how (LOL😂).
This story is a real hidden gem. I quite enjoy it a lot. The MC is OP but lacks knowledge of the new world. As such there is a lot of rich material to explore. The way the story is written and unfolds seems organic, not forced like other novels that seem to follow a formula and wants the MC to race ahead with out laying the ground work. All in all a good read.
The story itself is good but I think that the way it’s progressing is a bit slow plus you don’t really describe the setting as much as the action parts also the character description doesn’t really explain a lot of their features, anyway, other then that your story is great, I hope you write more!
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I really like this novel so far, the characters are lovely and also the story is fresh and has a nice pacing :) I am a fan of OP and a new live in a pantyhose ähh phantasy world - so I may be biased, but this is one of the few really good ones I read so far, at least until the current chapter - so I would recommend the novel.
Like every other author here, I'll shamelessly advertise myself in my own work. The story was first written in Word before copy/pasted here and did some arrangements afterwords. I hope this is to your liking.
It started out very’ well and then got stupid with bad timeline and mix ups.
Alright, I'm just going to point out the obvious... THERE ARE TOO MANY PEOPLE SPAMMING IN THE REVIEWS!!! Now that's bad... 1. they giving you a higher rating for spamming. 2. Why would anyone spam in reviews? Anyway, that's the obvious, And since I read the reviews first, I'll try to get into season 2 first, since the pacing seems like it's slow...
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Beginning chapters are really disappointing. He lets himself get captured and acts more like a servant with a hero complex than a main character. I don't have enough energy to read this anymore. At first I thought that this would be a good novel to read but I can't even bear read anymore chapters beyond chapter 10 in fear of getting more disappointments. I'm just going to read the few other original or fanfic novels that have a hundred times better beginning that this one. Authors never learn that the beginning chapters leave the impression and the plot gives the enjoyment.