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This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.
This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.
Story is about a 14 year MC that has a system who goes around killing all the animals and humans to level up in the land. Alot of lolitas and underage victims. Dont take this story serious because there is no plot. it mainly my level wins you, you win.
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This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.
This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.
Please I've given this review a lot of times and I'm saying and begging of you could increase the number of chapters a day please permit this selfishness of mine please and if you can leave your comments for us the readers at the end of the chapters maybe you can recommend any of your previous books thank you for your effort to satisfy our imagination with your great creativity thank you very much ❤️❤️❤️❤️
This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.
It was okay at the start but as i read more into it, it just got more boring for me and i was just forcing myself to finish a chapter this is mostly my personal preference then anything also there were spotty moments with the translation quality like i think there were times where the same term would be translated differently and also the name of the place they lived was really irritating to read “Firmament and continent” and it was just mind grating cause i dont know if it was a Tl error or if the author wrote it like that.
Don't trying to be negative, and I stuck with it till Chapter 1114 or something. Here it goes : Starts the same as most CN novels. You can tolerate all the face slapping. You can keep up with the plot armors. But then it starts repeating from chapter 100 and feels like the author is a 14-16 years old child who is letting his fantasy take flight [which is fine] but then levels and time gets so twisted from chapters to chapters and sometimes form paragraph to paragraph. As in saying he has been in closed door cultivation for 2 months, and then there is still 3 months left to the challenge match, while couple paragraph back was mentioned challenge match was 2 months away. Anyways dropped it and not gonna pick it up again.
I really appreciate all your efforts in this book though I've been switching accounts to read this book I'll say it's totally worth it now that I'm this close to you 'the last chapter before an update' it really pains me cause I just want to read but it ain't coming like how I got to read from the beginning I still appreciate you tho please if you can you do a bunus week or day for us or should I say me where you'll release more chapters I know your work ain't easy being creative ain't easy please permit me this selfishness I'll appreciate it thank you
We need more chapters I love your book but the updates are really slow like I come online to read this particular book but get disappointed when I see only one chapter it doesn't stop it from being great but it reduces the enthusiasm
Like I said I won't hold back my stars please more chapters I'll gift again,mind you it might not be with this account but you'll notice the pattern
Please the numbers are really confusing they don't concord how will they make a strike 100000km long in a place 100m wide, and also I think you need to calm down and cross check before every update too much typo errors I've given a comment with my other account about the blood force issue also and I don't know why it is getting too complicated for Su Mo at least you should give him some closure let him solve some of these problems first please let's try to solve these maybe you should use the characters like ‘li and Zang’ so that the numbers can be consistent I believe you can improve more than the current state I'm waiting for the next review so I'll drop your five stars
Translation quality is okay. Nothing good. Frequent repeated lines increase word count so often chapters are shorter than they originally appear. Updates are regular which is nice. On the other hand, it should be weighted as strongly for a review rating. Story development started out good, but then slowly gets worse. It's not as good as many other novels. MC Character is okay, but everyone is just a murderhobo. There are frequent mass killing brawls where everyone just kills each other. Disappointing because this world relies on the talent of martial spirits to cultivate. If everyone depends on the talent they are born with, then it's not really a good story at all. Like its totally based on upgrading talent and nothing else.
Honestly not bad, just quite boring sometimes, I mean yeah it's cliche, but so what, I don't really mind that much. But honestly there's just too much filler, unnecessary conflicts, unnecessary side stories and simply unnecessary chapters that make this book tedious to read. I mean I still read up to the latest chapter (1707), that being said though, I probably only read about 1000 of those chapters, out of those 1000 chapters I skimmed through probably half of them, so yeah, quite boring, but if you want to pass some time reading something, this is a book for you. (What has happened in these 1707 chapters could have been written in less than a 1000 chapters.)
I read up to ch 25, but it really is a terrible novel. Everything he gains is more or less given or thrown at him. He does not earn any of it with hard work or high risk. It just falls in his lap. In addition, the term genius is insulted in this novel. A genius can get to rank 6 in 2 months, but another "genius" got there after 3 years. Even trash cultivation levels got there in 5 or 6 years. (this paragraph is an annoying thing I found but not important to the quality of the story) Lastly, the author has no idea how betting works from a sponsor's stand point. If a competition between 2 people is predicted to be a landslide victory for 1 side, they will only lose money. They only gain money if the odds are close (slightly different standing with more than 2, but that is irrelevant here). The get the money by skimming the top of the bets of the losing side, if no one bets on the losing side, they would have to cover it by themselves, so if the prediction is a landslide, few people will bet on the losing prediction amd they will lose money.
This novel is great. the main character is cool and not dense and the fight scene are pretty epic. The story is also kinda original. my issue is with the heroine the main character was a Simp from the start. Also the summary is exaggerated. The heroine was just forcibly taken back to her family who are the strongest power in the continent. The summary makes you think she's gonna die in five years but it's more like the mc has to stop pursuing in five years. It's just his romantic pursuit that's on the line
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This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
I love the story development it truly immerses all who read it. Understandably I haven't read for the full story but I can already tell it will get even better as it goes on.
after he left his hometown it has gone downhill so fast i wont give anything more than 1 star thats all it deserves actually it doesnt even deserve that much but i cant do anything less so yea
Good novel event not too good. I enjoy the story. But late for the update. The tim should update the story more often so we can enjoy without delay
I love the story😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😘😘😘😘😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😘😘😘😘😘
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This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.
This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.
This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.
Story is about a 14 year MC that has a system who goes around killing all the animals and humans to level up in the land. Alot of lolitas and underage victims. Dont take this story serious because there is no plot. it mainly my level wins you, you win.
7tdoyzıgxlhckğbüof7tsyugıaurdğuvpuxtuvohıtcikvfızphvüıvgoxğhvikxlgvikctızşjcogzhp,ğjvküxy9vüıt8x8yvüıvypxyoxoycuğuğc9yc9ycy8x8ycpysotpycğuvüıvğıvıüb
This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.
This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.
Please I've given this review a lot of times and I'm saying and begging of you could increase the number of chapters a day please permit this selfishness of mine please and if you can leave your comments for us the readers at the end of the chapters maybe you can recommend any of your previous books thank you for your effort to satisfy our imagination with your great creativity thank you very much ❤️❤️❤️❤️
This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.
It was okay at the start but as i read more into it, it just got more boring for me and i was just forcing myself to finish a chapter this is mostly my personal preference then anything also there were spotty moments with the translation quality like i think there were times where the same term would be translated differently and also the name of the place they lived was really irritating to read “Firmament and continent” and it was just mind grating cause i dont know if it was a Tl error or if the author wrote it like that.
Don't trying to be negative, and I stuck with it till Chapter 1114 or something. Here it goes : Starts the same as most CN novels. You can tolerate all the face slapping. You can keep up with the plot armors. But then it starts repeating from chapter 100 and feels like the author is a 14-16 years old child who is letting his fantasy take flight [which is fine] but then levels and time gets so twisted from chapters to chapters and sometimes form paragraph to paragraph. As in saying he has been in closed door cultivation for 2 months, and then there is still 3 months left to the challenge match, while couple paragraph back was mentioned challenge match was 2 months away. Anyways dropped it and not gonna pick it up again.
I really appreciate all your efforts in this book though I've been switching accounts to read this book I'll say it's totally worth it now that I'm this close to you 'the last chapter before an update' it really pains me cause I just want to read but it ain't coming like how I got to read from the beginning I still appreciate you tho please if you can you do a bunus week or day for us or should I say me where you'll release more chapters I know your work ain't easy being creative ain't easy please permit me this selfishness I'll appreciate it thank you
We need more chapters I love your book but the updates are really slow like I come online to read this particular book but get disappointed when I see only one chapter it doesn't stop it from being great but it reduces the enthusiasm
Like I said I won't hold back my stars please more chapters I'll gift again,mind you it might not be with this account but you'll notice the pattern
Please the numbers are really confusing they don't concord how will they make a strike 100000km long in a place 100m wide, and also I think you need to calm down and cross check before every update too much typo errors I've given a comment with my other account about the blood force issue also and I don't know why it is getting too complicated for Su Mo at least you should give him some closure let him solve some of these problems first please let's try to solve these maybe you should use the characters like ‘li and Zang’ so that the numbers can be consistent I believe you can improve more than the current state I'm waiting for the next review so I'll drop your five stars
Translation quality is okay. Nothing good. Frequent repeated lines increase word count so often chapters are shorter than they originally appear. Updates are regular which is nice. On the other hand, it should be weighted as strongly for a review rating. Story development started out good, but then slowly gets worse. It's not as good as many other novels. MC Character is okay, but everyone is just a murderhobo. There are frequent mass killing brawls where everyone just kills each other. Disappointing because this world relies on the talent of martial spirits to cultivate. If everyone depends on the talent they are born with, then it's not really a good story at all. Like its totally based on upgrading talent and nothing else.
Honestly not bad, just quite boring sometimes, I mean yeah it's cliche, but so what, I don't really mind that much. But honestly there's just too much filler, unnecessary conflicts, unnecessary side stories and simply unnecessary chapters that make this book tedious to read. I mean I still read up to the latest chapter (1707), that being said though, I probably only read about 1000 of those chapters, out of those 1000 chapters I skimmed through probably half of them, so yeah, quite boring, but if you want to pass some time reading something, this is a book for you. (What has happened in these 1707 chapters could have been written in less than a 1000 chapters.)
I read up to ch 25, but it really is a terrible novel. Everything he gains is more or less given or thrown at him. He does not earn any of it with hard work or high risk. It just falls in his lap. In addition, the term genius is insulted in this novel. A genius can get to rank 6 in 2 months, but another "genius" got there after 3 years. Even trash cultivation levels got there in 5 or 6 years. (this paragraph is an annoying thing I found but not important to the quality of the story) Lastly, the author has no idea how betting works from a sponsor's stand point. If a competition between 2 people is predicted to be a landslide victory for 1 side, they will only lose money. They only gain money if the odds are close (slightly different standing with more than 2, but that is irrelevant here). The get the money by skimming the top of the bets of the losing side, if no one bets on the losing side, they would have to cover it by themselves, so if the prediction is a landslide, few people will bet on the losing prediction amd they will lose money.
This novel is great. the main character is cool and not dense and the fight scene are pretty epic. The story is also kinda original. my issue is with the heroine the main character was a Simp from the start. Also the summary is exaggerated. The heroine was just forcibly taken back to her family who are the strongest power in the continent. The summary makes you think she's gonna die in five years but it's more like the mc has to stop pursuing in five years. It's just his romantic pursuit that's on the line
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This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
I love the story development it truly immerses all who read it. Understandably I haven't read for the full story but I can already tell it will get even better as it goes on.
after he left his hometown it has gone downhill so fast i wont give anything more than 1 star thats all it deserves actually it doesnt even deserve that much but i cant do anything less so yea
Good novel event not too good. I enjoy the story. But late for the update. The tim should update the story more often so we can enjoy without delay
I love the story😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😘😘😘😘😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😘😘😘😘😘
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This story is cliched but it was started before the cliché was as big a cliché. Not an excuse but the story is good if you like the clichés. The main problem with this story is the translator seems to have never read a Wuxia or Xianxia novel before but has read game novels. This leads to the dantian being translated as elixir field and lots of other bad choices in translation. Again I do not feel this is a deal breaker to make it a bad story. Someone has been nice enough to add some alternative translations in the comments. Finally there is the use of 666 unnecessarily as a page break. That's annoying.