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Daoist1rvBov

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BrianG9677

Dropped at chapter 2 story is rediculouly all over the place. Chapter 1 MC takes over body then moves to mountain to train in some art left by father of original owner of body Chapter 2 turns out MC had not taken over body and moved to mountain to train in some art left by father but that it was original owner who trained in art and died allowing MC to take over body Yes I didn't read enough chapters to give accurate review but if you are that inconsistent within 2 chapters what would be the fucking point in reading it

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nightingale97

i like this story a lot hehehe ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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LittleWuxia

Shameless 5 star rating I’ve not seen any updates seen 3 month ago. Is it worth reading? Is it completed? Is it still updating? Someone tell me...

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afire190

This is a pretty good story, ruined by a low quality translation. This is in line with the terrible standards of this site. The translators don't bother translating basic terms from pinyin and regularly make grammatical mistakes. Even mistakes like randomly changing characters' genders occur.

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omowillee

Shen wants to be a master Diaost. He was born into a rich family but he never took with any inheritance, not a dine. He was involved in accident that transformed from being a doctor to a body of a young boy

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Lordgrim94

Translation quality is good. As for the novel MC sucks, is contradictory and idealistic. Couldn't go on so dropped at 10th chapter. Xoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxo

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No_Reading_No_Life

Hi. I'm just starting this novel. Here are some recommendations from me. ❤️ Jack's top 10 ❤️ 01) Lord of the Mysteries 02) Way of the Devil 03) The Devil's Cage 04) The Legendary Mechanic 05) Gamers of the Underworld 06) My House of Horrors 07) The City of Terror 08) Low Dimensional Game 09) Enlightened Empire (Webnovel original) 10) Black Tech Internet Café System Im actually reading more than 20 novels at the moment, but I'm only posting my 10 most favorite ones here.

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Peace
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Beginning was little slow and boring then it got interesting an I am hooked now....................................... Awesome Interesting Great story

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Little9

saya hanya suka membaca. banyak membaca itu menyenangkan. menyenangkan sekali. apakah sudah 140 kata. entahlah. intinya suka membaca. dan terimakasih untuk capternya

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Little_Herb

Bretty gooo read ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ye

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dkennedyb1988

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What a wonderful, nice and good write-up. I have been thinking which novel I can read for motivation. I wish I could have the chance to finish it. Continue your hard work. Good luck

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danisian

Giving up 75 chapters in. Either the story was written quite poorly or the translation's butchering the story. Its quite quite difficult to follow whats happening for several reasons including missing or slightly malformed sentences which make it quite difficult to understand what is happening and make you think you may have missed a paragraph, An overreliance on Chinese poems religon and mythology which could work if any of it were explained - as it stands it just seems like a way of extending the text. Overall it had potential but I don't think it'll ever really be worth reading.

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Desolate

The story became more of a narrative after he became a Celestial. Everything is said in some ways to make it sounds overly complicated. Flowery words amongst other things. There was also a part where his Senior Brother Chen got kidnapped(killed?) and the disciples in the Temple of Killings were all killed except one. When he discovered that, he was all calm and rational. Saying that life is like so and whatnot. That he has to have considerations or something for his Sect. That his sect must continue onward with or without Chen Jianmei. This kinda pisses me off. He's become quite... dull. Boring I should say. Maybe it's just the translations or something but the story is less interesting from then on.

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Dosithee

Action packed fights, intense training scenes, and interesting cultivation methods, are all things you won't find in this story. The translation itself is a slog to read through, partially due to the overly flowery language and content of the source material. So far 47 ch in, there has been many more pgs dedicated to poetry that doesn't translate well, or at least hasn't been, than pgs of fighting, cultivating, and learning combined. I feel like author is trying to show off how cultured he is. The fights are very bland as far as I can interpret from the confusing translation. Mc suddenly get good at techniques without any on screen training or exploration of the technique itself. This does have some potential, Mc is interestingat least, but potential was squandered by poor translating and writing.

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Ancient_

I really like this novel and it's my favorite novel now. I had enough of all the stupid mcs who think with their **** and does stupid young masters so i was looking for a like time for a novel like this l. But the translation is a little bad partly because he doesn't has an editor to help and the problem is nobody likes these types of novels they like does annoying harem novels withs lots of faceslaps. What basically happens in those novels is tge mc goes to a place the annoying young master looks down on him then he starts to fight the antagonist says the name of his technique the bystanders keep says the mc is going to lose he is week he can't win and then bam!!!. O and it still isn't finished the young masters whole family goes after hin annoy him till he destroys the family. And the keeps on repeating itself. I used to like it years ago when i first started read Chinese novel but now it's very annoying and keeps on getting on my nerves. What i hate in Chinese cultivation novels: 1: fighting enemies with cultivation a lot more the you. 2: be very young but still stronger and smarter than people millions of years older then you. 3: heals limbs and his whole body easily even when he becomes a lot stronger. 4: Cultivate with a unique technique and become so strong the cultivation levels don't matter (one of my favorite things in novels is when he enters new  cultivation realms so my favorite movels Re the ones whose cultivation is the same as everybody alse. 5: Harems And forget many othe important ones.

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Daoist1rvBov

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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BrianG9677

Dropped at chapter 2 story is rediculouly all over the place. Chapter 1 MC takes over body then moves to mountain to train in some art left by father of original owner of body Chapter 2 turns out MC had not taken over body and moved to mountain to train in some art left by father but that it was original owner who trained in art and died allowing MC to take over body Yes I didn't read enough chapters to give accurate review but if you are that inconsistent within 2 chapters what would be the fucking point in reading it

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nightingale97

i like this story a lot hehehe ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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LittleWuxia

Shameless 5 star rating I’ve not seen any updates seen 3 month ago. Is it worth reading? Is it completed? Is it still updating? Someone tell me...

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afire190

This is a pretty good story, ruined by a low quality translation. This is in line with the terrible standards of this site. The translators don't bother translating basic terms from pinyin and regularly make grammatical mistakes. Even mistakes like randomly changing characters' genders occur.

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omowillee

Shen wants to be a master Diaost. He was born into a rich family but he never took with any inheritance, not a dine. He was involved in accident that transformed from being a doctor to a body of a young boy

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Wincho
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Lordgrim94

Translation quality is good. As for the novel MC sucks, is contradictory and idealistic. Couldn't go on so dropped at 10th chapter. Xoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxo

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No_Reading_No_Life

Hi. I'm just starting this novel. Here are some recommendations from me. ❤️ Jack's top 10 ❤️ 01) Lord of the Mysteries 02) Way of the Devil 03) The Devil's Cage 04) The Legendary Mechanic 05) Gamers of the Underworld 06) My House of Horrors 07) The City of Terror 08) Low Dimensional Game 09) Enlightened Empire (Webnovel original) 10) Black Tech Internet Café System Im actually reading more than 20 novels at the moment, but I'm only posting my 10 most favorite ones here.

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Peace
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Beginning was little slow and boring then it got interesting an I am hooked now....................................... Awesome Interesting Great story

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SleepyGrims

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Little9

saya hanya suka membaca. banyak membaca itu menyenangkan. menyenangkan sekali. apakah sudah 140 kata. entahlah. intinya suka membaca. dan terimakasih untuk capternya

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Little_Herb

Bretty gooo read ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ye

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dkennedyb1988

No harem would be a nice change😂😮😂😮😂😮😣😍😍😥😗😑😮😑😁😂😁😣😍😋😗🙂😮😣😮😁😂😍😑😗😑😗😋😮😥😮😂☺😍😂😗😙😗😥😮🙂😮😋😍😍😑😗😑😍🙂😮😥😮😂😍😗😑😗😑😮🙂😮😊😍😑😗😂😀😎😮😂😁😁😣😍🙂😗😋😗😑🤔😎😮😁😂😁😥😍🙂😗🙂😗😑😗😑😮😮😑😁😣☺🙂😗😑😗😑🤔😂😁😁😣😍😋😗😑😗😂😮😥😁😮😥😗😂😀😂😮🙂😍😍😋😗😑😗😂😁😣😁😮😑😗😂😗😥😮😣😮😋😗😑😗😀😥😮😣😮😣😍😥😗🤨😀😗😑😮🙂😍😋😍😥😗😂😗🤔😑😁😉😍🙂😗😥🤔😂😚😎😐😁😉😍😋😗😂😗😑🤔😮😣😍😑😍😑😗😂

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roberto999

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LordBlueDao

What a wonderful, nice and good write-up. I have been thinking which novel I can read for motivation. I wish I could have the chance to finish it. Continue your hard work. Good luck

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leech_
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YOUTUBE_WORLD

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danisian

Giving up 75 chapters in. Either the story was written quite poorly or the translation's butchering the story. Its quite quite difficult to follow whats happening for several reasons including missing or slightly malformed sentences which make it quite difficult to understand what is happening and make you think you may have missed a paragraph, An overreliance on Chinese poems religon and mythology which could work if any of it were explained - as it stands it just seems like a way of extending the text. Overall it had potential but I don't think it'll ever really be worth reading.

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MrZeo
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Stingy

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dkennedyb1988

Looks interesting. Hopefully stays that way😥😗😂😅😂😊😁😄😗😥😐😂😚😆😗😁☺😉😎🙂😎☺😊🤐😥😀🤨😣😙🤨😑🙂☺😀🤔😥😚😥😙😣🥰😐😍😀😍😄😋😍😁😎😍😄🤔😥😂😀🤔😀😂😄😀🤔😉😚😐😃😍🥰😄😂😉😂😀🤨😄😚😥🤔😀🤨😐😆😐😣😑😄😮😊😙😎😉😎😙😗😆🥰😁😉😎😙😙😎🥰🤔🤨🤔😉😚😙😚😉😚😉😑😉🤔😉😙😎😙😊😙😗😙😎🥰😥🤨🥰🤔😙😥😙😎😙😎😙😎🥰🤔🤨🤨🤔😉😥😉😁😙😚😙😉😑😆😥😉😃😙😃😙😙😁🥰😁🤨😥😆😥😉😎😙😙😎🥰😎🤨😑🤨😑😆😉😥😙😎😙😎🥰😥🤨😁😉😙😎😙😎😙😁🥰😁🤨🤔😆😂😥😋😚😙😎🥰🤨😎🤨🤔😆😑😉😥😙😮😎☺😎🤨🤔🤨😥😉😚😙😙😎😙😎🥰🤔🥰😎🥰😉😁😉😁😉😎

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Dadumdada

Hi hi hi!!!!!@ lol😁😁😁😁😁 i am reviewing reviewing lalala...reviewing this novel for the points points point i love me sum 5+ points for reviewing!!!😉😉😉😉😏 But hey Im sure this is a great story!😤😤 so i will be sure to review it once again once i actually read the story😋😋😋😋😘Hi hi hi!!!!!@ lol😁😁😁😁😁 i am reviewing reviewing lalala...revieeing this novel for the points points point i love me sum 5+ points for reviewing!!!😉😉😉😉😏 But hey Im sure this is a great story!😤😤 so i will be sure to teview once again once i actually read the story😋😋😋😋😘

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Desolate

The story became more of a narrative after he became a Celestial. Everything is said in some ways to make it sounds overly complicated. Flowery words amongst other things. There was also a part where his Senior Brother Chen got kidnapped(killed?) and the disciples in the Temple of Killings were all killed except one. When he discovered that, he was all calm and rational. Saying that life is like so and whatnot. That he has to have considerations or something for his Sect. That his sect must continue onward with or without Chen Jianmei. This kinda pisses me off. He's become quite... dull. Boring I should say. Maybe it's just the translations or something but the story is less interesting from then on.

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Dosithee

Action packed fights, intense training scenes, and interesting cultivation methods, are all things you won't find in this story. The translation itself is a slog to read through, partially due to the overly flowery language and content of the source material. So far 47 ch in, there has been many more pgs dedicated to poetry that doesn't translate well, or at least hasn't been, than pgs of fighting, cultivating, and learning combined. I feel like author is trying to show off how cultured he is. The fights are very bland as far as I can interpret from the confusing translation. Mc suddenly get good at techniques without any on screen training or exploration of the technique itself. This does have some potential, Mc is interestingat least, but potential was squandered by poor translating and writing.

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Yram_Gams_9080

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joyix
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Ancient_

I really like this novel and it's my favorite novel now. I had enough of all the stupid mcs who think with their **** and does stupid young masters so i was looking for a like time for a novel like this l. But the translation is a little bad partly because he doesn't has an editor to help and the problem is nobody likes these types of novels they like does annoying harem novels withs lots of faceslaps. What basically happens in those novels is tge mc goes to a place the annoying young master looks down on him then he starts to fight the antagonist says the name of his technique the bystanders keep says the mc is going to lose he is week he can't win and then bam!!!. O and it still isn't finished the young masters whole family goes after hin annoy him till he destroys the family. And the keeps on repeating itself. I used to like it years ago when i first started read Chinese novel but now it's very annoying and keeps on getting on my nerves. What i hate in Chinese cultivation novels: 1: fighting enemies with cultivation a lot more the you. 2: be very young but still stronger and smarter than people millions of years older then you. 3: heals limbs and his whole body easily even when he becomes a lot stronger. 4: Cultivate with a unique technique and become so strong the cultivation levels don't matter (one of my favorite things in novels is when he enters new  cultivation realms so my favorite movels Re the ones whose cultivation is the same as everybody alse. 5: Harems And forget many othe important ones.

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