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Write a reviewIt would be nice if you changed te actor of tony stark from the original to young Keanu Reeves in john wick Mc should learn and practice martial arts to the grand master level even if he could use a visual reality technology that he himself invented to do the job to train his mind and body …… Mc should beside technology and engineering……also study biotechnology and try to recreate a super man sirum that give him strength on par with hulk strongest version and immortality and super healing. ….also mc should try to master magic under ancient one or what ever like doom compine technology with magical…will be epic
I love this story. It's great with fantastic character moments and story progression. The escalating conflict doesn't feel rushed, the MC, Anthony Edward Stark, acts like an actual genius and has a control of his hormones unlike the Batman story where he's a prepubescent boy finding older woman hot and sexy yet no one seems to notice. He is written so well and I cannot wait to see how you include some more street-level threats from the Iron Man comics like Crimson Dynamo, Living Laser, Titanium Man, etc.
fuck#n finally some good shit. good storytelling, narrative and a work in progress protagonist. and if things go well? Black widow as possible female lead. ( finally. I swear, i can't find any story with her as the principal female lead. and if god cough* Author permits, she will be the one in this. ) so, in summary, read this thing, this is gold.
MC: SI Tony Stark Rating: 8.5/10 I like the pace of the story and the time jumps are good. Has a lot of potential to be a good story and the beginning isn't like almost any other fiction either. Find it a bit unrealistic that with all the ‘success’ he's had so far he hasn't popped up on the radar of others like Hydra, SHIELD and the like.
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5 star for you. Another awesome ff from XC. Keep it up. You are one of the very rare authors who actually completes their work without abandoning them despite the trolls.
Hey Author ! love your stories as always but before starting this one, I gotta ask a question: Spoilers ahead for reader for batman x ironman TURN BACK IS this story connected to your batman x ironman like a prequel or a stand alone cause y'know if it's not then we already know his wife gonna betray him and all that evil fury thing , I was this fic could be a standalone and watch ironman become an ultimate ironman there are so few good ironman fic I hope this will be too. and about your both batman and ironman fic they both connect well together. it's a great read i'm following on. Keep going 💪. Thanks for answering.🔥💯
Reveal Spoiler+added to my collection,waiting for more chapter, before I read, 5star cuz i like her 2 marvel/DC fanfiction,
I already fallen in love with this story, i can not wait to see what your version of Tony Stark will do, to all those bad guys OG Tony was forced to deal with in his life.
Finally, Thanks for releasing the Ironman fanfic. I was waiting for a long time. I am sure this story is gonna be amazing like your other Marvel fanfics. Let's end this review with some outstanding Tony Stark aka Ironman's quotes from the comics and the movies: Tony Stark aka Ironman: -" I went from being a man trapped in an Iron Suit to being a man freed by it."(Ironman: Extremis) -" It's about becoming better. It's about bringing on the future. The earlier stages of adapting machine to man and making us great." (Ironman: Extremis)" -“Sometimes you’ve gotta run before you can walk.”(Ironman 2008 movie) -"If we can't accept limitations we’re no better than the bad guys."(Captain America: Civil War) >I'm the most intelligent, capable person on the planet. I'm not playing God - all this time... I've been playing human. (Superior Ironman) >"Heroes aren't born. They're built"(This is a tagline from the 2008 film Iron Man.) >"The truth is... I am Iron Man"(Ironman 2008 movie)
As usual, Author here with 5 star review. And you know the drill, ask away if you have any questions and let me know if you find any mistakes, I'll fix them as soon as possible. Well, happy reading.
It would be nice if you changed te actor of tony stark from the original to young Keanu Reeves in john wick Mc should learn and practice martial arts to the grand master level even if he could use a visual reality technology that he himself invented to do the job to train his mind and body …… Mc should beside technology and engineering……also study biotechnology and try to recreate a super man sirum that give him strength on par with hulk strongest version and immortality and super healing. ….also mc should try to master magic under ancient one or what ever like doom compine technology with magical…will be epic
I love this story. It's great with fantastic character moments and story progression. The escalating conflict doesn't feel rushed, the MC, Anthony Edward Stark, acts like an actual genius and has a control of his hormones unlike the Batman story where he's a prepubescent boy finding older woman hot and sexy yet no one seems to notice. He is written so well and I cannot wait to see how you include some more street-level threats from the Iron Man comics like Crimson Dynamo, Living Laser, Titanium Man, etc.
fuck#n finally some good shit. good storytelling, narrative and a work in progress protagonist. and if things go well? Black widow as possible female lead. ( finally. I swear, i can't find any story with her as the principal female lead. and if god cough* Author permits, she will be the one in this. ) so, in summary, read this thing, this is gold.
MC: SI Tony Stark Rating: 8.5/10 I like the pace of the story and the time jumps are good. Has a lot of potential to be a good story and the beginning isn't like almost any other fiction either. Find it a bit unrealistic that with all the ‘success’ he's had so far he hasn't popped up on the radar of others like Hydra, SHIELD and the like.
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5 star for you. Another awesome ff from XC. Keep it up. You are one of the very rare authors who actually completes their work without abandoning them despite the trolls.
Hey Author ! love your stories as always but before starting this one, I gotta ask a question: Spoilers ahead for reader for batman x ironman TURN BACK IS this story connected to your batman x ironman like a prequel or a stand alone cause y'know if it's not then we already know his wife gonna betray him and all that evil fury thing , I was this fic could be a standalone and watch ironman become an ultimate ironman there are so few good ironman fic I hope this will be too. and about your both batman and ironman fic they both connect well together. it's a great read i'm following on. Keep going 💪. Thanks for answering.🔥💯
Reveal Spoiler+added to my collection,waiting for more chapter, before I read, 5star cuz i like her 2 marvel/DC fanfiction,
I already fallen in love with this story, i can not wait to see what your version of Tony Stark will do, to all those bad guys OG Tony was forced to deal with in his life.
Finally, Thanks for releasing the Ironman fanfic. I was waiting for a long time. I am sure this story is gonna be amazing like your other Marvel fanfics. Let's end this review with some outstanding Tony Stark aka Ironman's quotes from the comics and the movies: Tony Stark aka Ironman: -" I went from being a man trapped in an Iron Suit to being a man freed by it."(Ironman: Extremis) -" It's about becoming better. It's about bringing on the future. The earlier stages of adapting machine to man and making us great." (Ironman: Extremis)" -“Sometimes you’ve gotta run before you can walk.”(Ironman 2008 movie) -"If we can't accept limitations we’re no better than the bad guys."(Captain America: Civil War) >I'm the most intelligent, capable person on the planet. I'm not playing God - all this time... I've been playing human. (Superior Ironman) >"Heroes aren't born. They're built"(This is a tagline from the 2008 film Iron Man.) >"The truth is... I am Iron Man"(Ironman 2008 movie)
As usual, Author here with 5 star review. And you know the drill, ask away if you have any questions and let me know if you find any mistakes, I'll fix them as soon as possible. Well, happy reading.