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Way too much potential. Hope he intercepts Kalel and nurtures him, no need to allow a future liability to run amock, also, hope he uses the serum on himself to evolve further and also leave no loose ends, it was magnificent till this stage and I hope it just gets better😮💨
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This follows the story of an evil and cunning MC. He's also pretty smart too though, I won't say THAT smart because he makes some pretty basic mistakes later on. But regardless, I think it's a good story, so give it a try. As always, if you notice any mistakes, let me know in the comments, and I'll fix them. Have a nice read.
Mc was captured as soon as he landed. What made this an enjoyable read for me so far was the way he manipulated everyone to escape. I also hope Jenny survives, even though I feel like it will be detrimental to bardi, but I hope he won't be inhumane enough to kill her. Anyways, I look forward to reading this.
Way too much potential. Hope he intercepts Kalel and nurtures him, no need to allow a future liability to run amock, also, hope he uses the serum on himself to evolve further and also leave no loose ends, it was magnificent till this stage and I hope it just gets better😮💨
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This follows the story of an evil and cunning MC. He's also pretty smart too though, I won't say THAT smart because he makes some pretty basic mistakes later on. But regardless, I think it's a good story, so give it a try. As always, if you notice any mistakes, let me know in the comments, and I'll fix them. Have a nice read.
Mc was captured as soon as he landed. What made this an enjoyable read for me so far was the way he manipulated everyone to escape. I also hope Jenny survives, even though I feel like it will be detrimental to bardi, but I hope he won't be inhumane enough to kill her. Anyways, I look forward to reading this.