In Bleach with an OP Skill

LV 4

Phantom_178

Bruh....not to be rude or anything, but I think you're rushing with this story. I mean I understand that you're trying to make MC op as hell but still man, at least give him some actual time to develop his character properly. But a good and average story, keep writing....

LV 14

Kobus_Liebenberg_4211

No awareness of himself and his involvement A wish fulfilment story because if you had more than two brain cells you would know that none of what was written would have happened with his arrogants I mean yeah you have a strong ability but so what you’re nothing compared to other people and yet you still go around doing what you want Not even the main character could do that let alone the main antagonist like seriously no could do that you would get killed pretty fast

LV 12

Yvcme

downgrade from the previous novel dudes a total cornball

LV 13

Mindlessreader25

Author is yoruichi in the harem? and is mc the strongest?or will become one..?

LV 4

Kwika

I love the mc and his ability but 22 chapters in and the plot is unchanged in the last one I thought maybe it would, then it corrected itself like the author is unable to come up with a plot of his own. Add that to the fact the author retells the og story of bleach every time it switches pov and it’s starting to feel like a waste of time.

LV 3

INFINITESTORAGE

I don't know how to say this gently but... Author needs to interract with people more. The MC dialogue is sometimes forced and cringe. Social Life seems almost null

LV 1

NeaCambelt

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LV 1

Mastersun

This story is the bottom of an infuriating hero with a character that he copies from youth films from the 90s about schoolchildren and students where caricatured tough guys use slang all the time and behave comically arrogantly, and the plot boils down to he came and saw and won without any problems, be it enemies or girls.

LV 1

Elemise

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LV 1

Maycon_Henrique_10

A sua história realmente é muito boa espero que continue escrevendo já que sei que muitos escritores têm dificuldades e acabam desistindo espero que não ligue para os comentários negativos só são pessoas que não entendem a dificuldade de escrever

LV 2

AsDAKRENS

Honestly speaking about the story, although it's still a little early to have a full opinion on it. I can say with certainty that it has a lot of potential and future, it is exciting to wait to witness its development.