DC: Becoming Supreme With Technology ( I Beat Superman)

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Skav_Lit

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Prince_Arsalan

i am writing this comment after reading chapter 12. I like the concept of this story but tooo many things are skipped in this story. 1. mc is always calling heros by their real name, although he is a transmigrator he is not supposed to know their real name and supposed to call them by their hero name . 2. batman should not know about mc's powers as he didn't revealed them and there is no trace of this. mc also "should not" know about justice league as it was Batman's idea as mc doesn't have mind reading powers. 3. there should be an interaction between billy and mc like billy should ask how mc knows about him or his powrers. Mc is like walking disaster exposing superheroes real identity all the time. theres a reason heros choose to accept or create hero alias. 4. Mc becomes intimate with other heros way too suddenly, like mcs's interaction with billy or bruce way too forced. but i still gave 4.2 star because i like the concept of this story. i hope there are more fanfics like this one but with better interactions between characters. This is just my opinion, i don't know about others .

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Jeram_0725

he didnt beat superman ..............................................................................................................................................................................................