Fairy Tail: Jinchuriki

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MARLENE_ANGEL

I LOVE THIS NOVEL IDEA PLOT IT HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR A FUN STORY..AUTHOR THIS IS SOMETHING CHINESE NOVELS DO..THOSE THIS HAS RAW VERSION I WANT TO READ IT,,,, AUTHOR DO NOT FxUxCxK THIS UP AND QUIT..AUTHOR I FxUxCxKing HATE TO START TO reading a novel WITH an AWESOME PLOT JUST SO YOU GIVE ME THE MIDDLE FINGER IN THE END AND QUIT.

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MARLENE_ANGEL

AUTHOR KAGUYA THE RABBIT GODDESS NEEDS TO BE THE 10-TAIL BEAST INSIDE HIM...WENT HE OPENED ALL THE TAIL BEASTS, , SHE AWAKE ..The 10 tail is a female Kaguya

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M7md_Star

it's all good but dude did you have to have all these chapters under a pay wall that's not cool bro not cool at all

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Kell_Kewyo

Is there a link to the original? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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John_Adam_9096

I like it, but does anyone have the raw link?

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MR_HOOD

fanfic with good idea..don't drop it so far so good..please continue

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Jaccam

Good idea terrible execution I highly recommend you avoid this shitty translation.

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No_Name_Character

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PsyLoRD

raw?

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Kyatus

Really good concept. I like the MC. But the grammar is just god awful. Even compared to other MTL’s it is pretty bad. I literally had to stop reading because of how bad it was even though I like the concept. Also the interactions of the characters is strange. They don’t feel real.

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DaoistyLr7LZ

thank you for the good story...............

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ContagiousFanatic

I'm just gonna say the Writing Quality is decent since I can still understand them, the problem however, Is that it gets too exhausting trying to correct the grammar each time in my head while reading. It's good though keep it up

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Arlekin01

how often are you going to be uploading chapters? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Duck_on_Fire

The premise of the story is great but the grammar is holding it back tremendously. It was hard to feel invested in the story since it doesn't feel real. This could have been great but bad grammar ruined it

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The_WheelOfFortune

I like the concept and overall theme of the story but the grammar isn’t the best.

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Classified

Writing quality is mid at best. The main character is like a fucking child. I dont give a shit if his old memories came to him "like a dream" he still got his old memories back. Also he LOVES doing stupid shit like breaking a precious phone thing, and thinking he has more stamina that a FUCKING MONSTER. He then litterally gets stipped in front of a crowd of people and does fight it. Like seriously all he says "NOOOO" but doesnt actually do shit. He has fucking magic strong enough to take them off of him but doesnt use it like a dumbass. Then he sulks. At that point its like bro wanted it.

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Quid_the_leach

The story seems quite intriguing, the main character was locked up and experimented with, in the same facility as Ultear. I only read a few chapters and it seems to hold potential. The downside to this is the grammar. I do not know if this was written by a non English speaker or translated; what I do know is that the mix-up with the temporal tenses is giving me a headache. There are some other more minor grammatical errors, but the tenses are driving me crazy. Ultimately, I'm forced to drop this for the time being. Pro tip, use grammarly or similar tools for language checking.

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Zuesofolypus

the title is misleading as the mc is not a like naruto he gets zero power from the beasts only abilities

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RimuruTempeat_09

nice story, what the name of the original or is this a translation?