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Good story, just try to improve Madara, to evolve as a character, since in personality he remains almost the same. I also hope to see more elements in action, even the most advanced version of each one like the hell element or typhoon.
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Alright I’m like 100 chapters in and the novel been okay so far. The story development for the most part follows the whitcher 3 storyline with no real deviation other than ciri going with madara. the problems with the novel are maybe it a little to obvious what gonna happen not that it’s really a negative. Also we still have no idea how his system works. I assume it based on quest assigned that are hidden maybe 🧐 idk. Also hope the author stops randomly throwing or putting the mic in situations by using the system.
Just bing it! Quite good, worth the time. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
reading this guys books should be reserved for when you are excessively tired and incapable of higher functioning. concepts are enough to get you to click on it the writing is enough to get you to click off
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The premise of the whole story is great. I’ve read a few chapters of it and it is ok so far. One huge issue. Chatgpt is strong in the story and I hate it. Also is this a translated story?
The mc is a boring version of Madara that forced a pairing with Ciri. Power levels don't really make sense, but I went along with it. "Madara" needs a personality other than arrogant emo. Now there's this stupid power card idea, and he can end ANY fight. Effectively eliminating any suspense.
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Truly an entertaining story so far as it doesn't make the MC strong as heck in just a few chapters but also doesn't make it look like the character is growing to slowly it sets just the right pace of growth. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Main issue I have with the story is it feels forced at most points throughout the story especially the randomly added shinobi and “Kaguya/Moon God” bit it’s like the author slowly started degrading instead of improving. It’s basically like instead of adding a direct nerf to the Mc the author added stronger elements to try and “balance things out”. Either way it started fine then went to hll. Character design is self explanatory he has a Madara template which basically become his personality. Mine as well not even add the romance aspect because it’s more like babysitting. If you seen Witcher that’s the background.
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Came back to check if the story had improved. Nope, still the same bs where the overall plot is the same as the og story, and where one chapter the MC has all the power to do what he wants and then the next chapter MC is struggling against the most random characters and bs for the plot. I also noticed a lot of negative reviews that were here previously aren't here anymore, including mine where I mentioned the same things. huh....oh well
I see a lot of positive reviews even though it's not so deserving. The reality is that it is very forced if you try to create a relationship with Ciri, they are 2 completely opposite worlds. Madara's power level is very poorly done, we must remember that Madara reached the level of the Sage of the 6 Paths, I don't understand how 3% is still a genin.
OK WOW, THIS NOVEL KICKAZZ..THE PLOT IS GOLD..AUTHOR THIS NOVEL CAN BECOME AN AWESOME MULTIVERSE STORY,, CIRI POWER IS THE KEY TO MADARA TRAVEL TO OTHER WORLDS..CIRI AND MADARA TRAVEL THE WORLD OF CYBERPUNK 2077.Did Ciri travel to the world of cyberpunk 2077 with her power,
It's a good story, but when the vision came, it made me leave the story. MC is going the same path as the original
Highly recommend this work, if you enjoy high quality crossover fanfics. This is one of the best fanfics out there. It has amazing character + world development, with captivating action scenes and progressive power development. Hope you enjoy this, as much as I have.
You finally came back. I thought I lost this fic but what a surprise it returned. It is one of my favorite fan fiction stories, and I have read it for a long time. Keep up the good work sir/ma'am
A really great fanfic with good story back ground and excellent mix with Madara and Witcher,love it
If it's finally back, author, I have a question: have you changed anything in the first chapters, or are they the same so I don't miss anything? Also, thank you for coming back, and happy New Year! 🎆
What a scare! I thought the author had deleted their novel since I couldn’t find it in the library. I’m so glad I found it; it’s one of the best fan-fics I’ve ever read!
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I want to preface that this fanfic is better than 95% of fanfics out there, it is an enjoyable read. I shall now nit pick on all the annoying things I found in this novel 1. Madara with only chunin and jonin level chakra, was spamming the shadow clone technique. Like at one point he had 60 clones I believe. This is impossible. Shadow clones split your chakra evenly between you and your clones. Jonin would never go over 5, and even Kage wouldn't spam 60 clones. It only made sense for naruto to do so because he had near infinite chakra. 2. 2 and 3 tomoe sharingan does not allow the user to read minds at a glance. This is crazy ability you randomly gave to the MC and he uses it frequently. And even if he could read minds, how does a normal 3 tomoe sharingan scan 100 years of memories in a second, against a kage level ninja to. 3. Mind control is another ability that shouldn't be available to non Mangekyo Madara, and the way its implemented in the story, its not even a genjutsu. Madara just has complete mind control instantly, and can even straight up talk out of other peoples bodies. 4. Madara is a talker, he isn't a silent uchiha like the rest. We saw him as a kid and adult. The author is clearly trying to make the MC very similar to Madara but he's not, he's more like a typical Uchiha than madara in terms of personality. 5. Speaking of this, a lot of fight scenes the MC emphasizes fighting like a “ninja”. He sets a lot of traps and uses clones and transformation a lot to confuse and trick his enemy. This is nothing like Madara. Maybe against a stronger enemy or a battle he has to win he would employ trickery, but Madara’s whole schtick is overwhelming his opponents with his superiority. 6. I've been waiting so long for the MC to fight like Madara and its just not happening. Its so upsetting seeing him spam shadow clone and using kunai as his main method to attack. Where is the Gunbai and Scyth! Also why does Madara have storm release? This was only gained by six paths madara so this shouldn't be in the system. 7. Also, after being in the forest for a few months training by himself, he was able to match the skill level of a master swordsman without the use of his sharingan. This never made sense, the author should have at least made the MC copy sword styles from great swordsman for a few years to reach his level. Even Sasuke wasn't that impressive with a sword after years of training with it. In fact none of the MC fighting techniques are copied or come from the system. He just trained for a few months in the forest and reached peak that technical skill in various forms of combat. All in all, great fanfic 👍
Good story, just try to improve Madara, to evolve as a character, since in personality he remains almost the same. I also hope to see more elements in action, even the most advanced version of each one like the hell element or typhoon.
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Alright I’m like 100 chapters in and the novel been okay so far. The story development for the most part follows the whitcher 3 storyline with no real deviation other than ciri going with madara. the problems with the novel are maybe it a little to obvious what gonna happen not that it’s really a negative. Also we still have no idea how his system works. I assume it based on quest assigned that are hidden maybe 🧐 idk. Also hope the author stops randomly throwing or putting the mic in situations by using the system.
Just bing it! Quite good, worth the time. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
reading this guys books should be reserved for when you are excessively tired and incapable of higher functioning. concepts are enough to get you to click on it the writing is enough to get you to click off
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The premise of the whole story is great. I’ve read a few chapters of it and it is ok so far. One huge issue. Chatgpt is strong in the story and I hate it. Also is this a translated story?
The mc is a boring version of Madara that forced a pairing with Ciri. Power levels don't really make sense, but I went along with it. "Madara" needs a personality other than arrogant emo. Now there's this stupid power card idea, and he can end ANY fight. Effectively eliminating any suspense.
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Truly an entertaining story so far as it doesn't make the MC strong as heck in just a few chapters but also doesn't make it look like the character is growing to slowly it sets just the right pace of growth. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Main issue I have with the story is it feels forced at most points throughout the story especially the randomly added shinobi and “Kaguya/Moon God” bit it’s like the author slowly started degrading instead of improving. It’s basically like instead of adding a direct nerf to the Mc the author added stronger elements to try and “balance things out”. Either way it started fine then went to hll. Character design is self explanatory he has a Madara template which basically become his personality. Mine as well not even add the romance aspect because it’s more like babysitting. If you seen Witcher that’s the background.
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Came back to check if the story had improved. Nope, still the same bs where the overall plot is the same as the og story, and where one chapter the MC has all the power to do what he wants and then the next chapter MC is struggling against the most random characters and bs for the plot. I also noticed a lot of negative reviews that were here previously aren't here anymore, including mine where I mentioned the same things. huh....oh well
I see a lot of positive reviews even though it's not so deserving. The reality is that it is very forced if you try to create a relationship with Ciri, they are 2 completely opposite worlds. Madara's power level is very poorly done, we must remember that Madara reached the level of the Sage of the 6 Paths, I don't understand how 3% is still a genin.
OK WOW, THIS NOVEL KICKAZZ..THE PLOT IS GOLD..AUTHOR THIS NOVEL CAN BECOME AN AWESOME MULTIVERSE STORY,, CIRI POWER IS THE KEY TO MADARA TRAVEL TO OTHER WORLDS..CIRI AND MADARA TRAVEL THE WORLD OF CYBERPUNK 2077.Did Ciri travel to the world of cyberpunk 2077 with her power,
It's a good story, but when the vision came, it made me leave the story. MC is going the same path as the original
Highly recommend this work, if you enjoy high quality crossover fanfics. This is one of the best fanfics out there. It has amazing character + world development, with captivating action scenes and progressive power development. Hope you enjoy this, as much as I have.
You finally came back. I thought I lost this fic but what a surprise it returned. It is one of my favorite fan fiction stories, and I have read it for a long time. Keep up the good work sir/ma'am
A really great fanfic with good story back ground and excellent mix with Madara and Witcher,love it
If it's finally back, author, I have a question: have you changed anything in the first chapters, or are they the same so I don't miss anything? Also, thank you for coming back, and happy New Year! 🎆
What a scare! I thought the author had deleted their novel since I couldn’t find it in the library. I’m so glad I found it; it’s one of the best fan-fics I’ve ever read!
You finally came back with this novel hehe =============================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================
Genial regreso pregunta cambiaste cosas al principio de la historia es para no perderme nada [img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I want to preface that this fanfic is better than 95% of fanfics out there, it is an enjoyable read. I shall now nit pick on all the annoying things I found in this novel 1. Madara with only chunin and jonin level chakra, was spamming the shadow clone technique. Like at one point he had 60 clones I believe. This is impossible. Shadow clones split your chakra evenly between you and your clones. Jonin would never go over 5, and even Kage wouldn't spam 60 clones. It only made sense for naruto to do so because he had near infinite chakra. 2. 2 and 3 tomoe sharingan does not allow the user to read minds at a glance. This is crazy ability you randomly gave to the MC and he uses it frequently. And even if he could read minds, how does a normal 3 tomoe sharingan scan 100 years of memories in a second, against a kage level ninja to. 3. Mind control is another ability that shouldn't be available to non Mangekyo Madara, and the way its implemented in the story, its not even a genjutsu. Madara just has complete mind control instantly, and can even straight up talk out of other peoples bodies. 4. Madara is a talker, he isn't a silent uchiha like the rest. We saw him as a kid and adult. The author is clearly trying to make the MC very similar to Madara but he's not, he's more like a typical Uchiha than madara in terms of personality. 5. Speaking of this, a lot of fight scenes the MC emphasizes fighting like a “ninja”. He sets a lot of traps and uses clones and transformation a lot to confuse and trick his enemy. This is nothing like Madara. Maybe against a stronger enemy or a battle he has to win he would employ trickery, but Madara’s whole schtick is overwhelming his opponents with his superiority. 6. I've been waiting so long for the MC to fight like Madara and its just not happening. Its so upsetting seeing him spam shadow clone and using kunai as his main method to attack. Where is the Gunbai and Scyth! Also why does Madara have storm release? This was only gained by six paths madara so this shouldn't be in the system. 7. Also, after being in the forest for a few months training by himself, he was able to match the skill level of a master swordsman without the use of his sharingan. This never made sense, the author should have at least made the MC copy sword styles from great swordsman for a few years to reach his level. Even Sasuke wasn't that impressive with a sword after years of training with it. In fact none of the MC fighting techniques are copied or come from the system. He just trained for a few months in the forest and reached peak that technical skill in various forms of combat. All in all, great fanfic 👍