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Warhammer 40k : Space Marine Kayvaan
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Horus’s betrayal was a cataclysmic event that forever changed the fate of the Imperium of Mankind. After this tragedy, our protagonist wakes up in this world—inside the body of a Space Marine. By a twist of fate, he not only gains permission to create his own Space Marine Chapter but also discovers that his new body, once belonging to Kayvaan, comes with an incredible inheritance: control over three star systems. With his Chapter and newfound power, he must navigate the treacherous politics of the Imperium and the constant threats from xenos, Chaos, and heretics, all while carving out his legacy in this grimdark galaxy.
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The story premise is good. Execution needs work. Chapters need serious combing through to fix mistakes. Mistakes like calling the Adeptus Custodes , the imperial guard. Or calling space marine chapters , star marine corps. This might also just be a translation for all we know.
It's been a while since I read a story like this, the progression is satisfactory and it seems realistic enough I suppose. I believe this story is worth reading, it just depends on your taste. My only downside is that there are few chapters (22 at the time of writing this review).
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Read to chapter 40. After the nonsense about a normal human being a chapter master, can’t wear power amour and can only be a scout, it just doesn’t make sense to keep reading
While it is a really good concept the execution is bad, not to the point of the story begin impossible to read but simply really bad. It has some jarrin problems that go from getting cofused betwen the difference of galaxy and star sistem to saying the protagonist is weak but then flipping a space marine over him like a judo master. Making the story difficult to read if you care about good structure and logic between things said in the book. Overrall great if you want to read simply for the sake of it ,but if not there are better things out there. This isn't to say that if the autor rereads his story and rewrites some paraghraps it will become a story worthy of reading.
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I love everything Warhammer 40k, and the dynamic between Sub-Sector Governors and a Space Marine Chapter Master is a compelling concept. For such a story to truly resonate, the Chapter Master must possess a strong and pure gene seed
je dois dire qu'une des meilleures choses avec cette série c'est l'écriture des personnages qui est différent des autre fic warhammer ou il ne font que crier gloire a l'empereur et ont juste l'air d'idiot fanatique ici il y a de la nuance et on sait qu'il le dise seulement pour pas être tue par l'inquisition
Volume 1
- 1 Horus Betrayal 3 months ago
- 2 Primarch Sanguinius 3 months ago
- 3 Joe & Kayvaan 3 months ago
- 4 Study Hard 3 months ago
- 5 A Curse? 2 months ago
- 6 Slaanesh 2 months ago
- 7 Different Of World 2 months ago
- 8 Kayvan Teaching 2 months ago
- 9 Too Strong 2 months ago
- 10 Martial Arts 2 months ago
- 11 Last Moment 2 months ago
- 12 Mysterious Woman 2 months ago
- 13 Who I Am? 2 months ago
- 14 Against Slaneesh 2 months ago
- 15 Awaken 2 months ago
- 16 Suspicion 2 months ago
- 17 Inquisitor 2 months ago
- 18 Ordo Malleus 2 months ago
- 19 Alen 2 months ago
- 20 Emperor Reward 2 months ago
- 21 Chapter Master 2 months ago
- 22 Darius Request 2 months ago
- 23 The High Lord of Terra 2 months ago
- 24 The Galaxy 2 months ago
- 25 Inheritance 2 months ago
- 26 Immaterium 2 months ago
- 27 Helpless 2 months ago
- 28 Astartes Monatery 2 months ago
- 29 Jacob 2 months ago
- 30 Trial of Combat 2 months ago
- 31 Kayvaan Reaction 2 months ago
- 32 Maneus Calgar 2 months ago
- 33 We Are here to Serve 2 months ago
- 34 Mountain of Document 2 months ago
- 35 Choosing Gene Seed 2 months ago
- 36 Two Member 2 months ago
- 37 Psyker 2 months ago
- 38 Battle Sister Hilsa 2 months ago
- 39 Plan Agains Eldar 2 months ago
- 40 Marius & Magos 2 months ago
- 41 Ebony Shadow 2 months ago
- 42 Opression 2 months ago
- 43 What it Mean? 2 months ago
- 44 Rosina 2 months ago
- 45 Why Me? 2 months ago
- 46 Planet Under His Control 2 months ago
- 47 Dangerous thought 2 months ago
- 48 Power as Governor 2 months ago
- 49 Elizabeth's Mission 2 months ago
- 50 The Previous Governor 2 months ago
- 51 The Chief Steward 2 months ago
- 52 Valyra 2 months ago
- 53 STC 1 months ago
- 54 Adeptus Mechanicus 1 months ago
- 55 Sister's Goal 1 months ago
- 56 I'm Sorry 1 months ago
- 57 STC in My Territory!? 1 months ago
- 58 Establishing the Plan 1 months ago
- 59 Where's Darius? 1 months ago
- 60 Launch It 1 months ago
- 61 Peter!!! 1 months ago
- 62 Marlborough 1 months ago
- 63 The Easy Way 1 months ago
- 64 Fury 1 months ago
- 65 Syladria 1 months ago
- 66 The Eldar Offer 1 months ago
- 67 What's your choice? 1 months ago
- 68 Cannot Leave 1 months ago
- 69 Archeological Site 1 months ago
- 70 The Fallen Eldar 1 months ago
- 71 Mission Start 1 months ago
- 72 The Chaos Spawn 1 months ago
- 73 Cooperation 1 months ago
- 74 Exploring the Site 1 months ago
- 75 Another World 1 months ago
- 76 Seraphae 1 months ago
- 77 Nightmare 1 months ago
- 78 Abellum III 1 months ago
- 79 Elizabeth's Past 1 months ago
- 80 Hopelessness 1 months ago
- 81 Awakening 1 months ago
- 82 I Won't 1 months ago
- 83 Circus 1 months ago
- 84 Explosive 1 months ago
- 85 The Golden Lion 1 months ago
- 86 All Clear? 1 months ago
- 87 Kill!? 1 months ago
- 88 Respect 29 days ago
- 89 Just Telling The Truth 28 days ago
- 90 The Way Of Howling Banshee 28 days ago
- 91 Fighting Rosina 27 days ago
- 92 Rosina's Strength 27 days ago
- 93 Slaneesh's Goal 26 days ago
- 94 Rosina's End 26 days ago
- 95 Three Million Souls 25 days ago
- 96 The Witch Strength 25 days ago
- 97 Kayvaan's Resistance 24 days ago
- 98 Combat 23 days ago
- 99 Time Is up 22 days ago
- 100 I'm Going To Vomit 22 days ago
- 101 Now Kneel 21 days ago
- 102 The Origin of The City 20 days ago
- 103 Love!? 19 days ago
- 104 Power Of Chaos 17 days ago
- 105 Multiple Personalities 16 days ago
- 106 ID Kayvaan 15 days ago
- 107 Rosina's Move 14 days ago
- 108 Oath of Eldar 14 days ago
- 109 Five Years 13 days ago
- 110 Not Now 12 days ago
- 111 The Istvanians 9 days ago
- 112 Xanthism 8 days ago
- 113 Edward's Visit 7 days ago
- 114 New Recruits 6 days ago
- 115 Training Methods 5 days ago
- 116 Educating the Recruit 3 days ago
- 117 Another Day of Training 2 days ago
- 118 Campaign of Fear 1 days ago
- 119 Mordaine 15 hours ago
This is but another story in which an earthling is put in warhammer 40k Where he wants to inject human rights into the imperium and doesn’t like fighting. The mc has been nerfed dramatically listen to this and see if it makes sense. The main character possesses the body of a space marine but do to a curse the body reverts to pre augmentation Now mc has amazing fighting abilities but no body to actually be strong. The main character although having his body reverted only has Internal injuries that doesn’t let him have any sort of modification FOR NO REASON WHATSOEVER. Author just wants to nerf mc so that he never fights on the front lines.