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the fact that you have villain as a tag and the mc isn't one or even a anti hero he's just some dude running helping heros with no sort of confrontation is annoying
Too much cringe, the protagonist has no personality, excessive glorification of the same, gaps or inconsistencies in the canon, a Harem relationship like a collector of trading cards, little depth in the development of relationships, change in the original characters for the benefit of its protagonist and a lot of confusion.
The mc is what you get when you write a character who’s only defining trait is being an edgy pseudo ‘manipulator’ Also a bunch of ai slop from what I read
Maravilloso, de los primeros fanfics que he leído en años y de verdad molan, 10/10 ..........................................................................................
i really like how manipulative the MC is and how he thinks and the author has shown how much of a moral character the MC is he wants the world for himself that what like so i really hope he does continue to update this more regularly and if so does another fanfic about trollhunter.
It's annoying to see a poll about love interests, in fact it's ridiculous, it's like going to a school as a teacher and he asks you what you want to learn, I would simply say: I want to learn about the relationship between layer Y and the diamond generation in Minecraft, is it because I know I should learn it? No, is it because I know it will help me in my exams? no, it's because I simply want to, in the same way that it is counterproductive for an author to ask for opinions from readers who have never written anything. If the story was good, be it a harem, bachelor romance or no romance there would be people reading it, but it's not a good story, the protagonist gets all arrogant saying that the people in that world are idiots and that he's the smartest one when he literally No, he hasn't achieved anything, it's pure arrogance, he says he doesn't want powers because, according to him, his own intelligence is enough to dominate the world, like, why? Do you want to prove something to yourself? how irrational, arrogance is excessive confidence without validating evidence, and that's what I'm seeing, the purest arrogance. I also often see many paragraphs wanting to say the same thing, I don't know if it's AI or it's a new author, if it's AI, stop using it, it's disgusting to read something made by AI, it's an insult to those who try to write and a poison that you put it in the food you serve to others (your writing)
Monologue and monologue and monologue and monologue and....... .................... ..................................... ........... .........................................
It seems interesting but he decided to please the virgin incels and became a harem google translate
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thank you for the amazing book , I have an idea for a book , we're the mc has a pathway from lord of the mysteries like the visionary pathway or the error pathway , the world where the book takes place is young justice DC .
Amid so many identical stories, finally a fresh fanfiction concept! I’ve been looking for a fanfiction on this topic for a long time, and thanks to you, it feels like a breath of fresh air. I really like your story; the MC isn’t purely good or merciless but has a gray personality. They’re not perfect, but they don’t need to be—after all, everyone has flaws, which makes the MC feel real. The only issue I’ve noticed with your story is that the word count per chapter feels a bit low. Other than that, this is nearly a perfect fanfiction for me.
If I can give you a suggestion, you should go first for Chloe and Kagami, both of whom have wealthy families that could help you put together the resources you need or for future plans. In addition, their emotional situations put them in a fragile state that allows you to mold them into better versions than in canon giving you future allies with or without their miraculus, what do you think?
First good miraculous ladybug fanfic I see yet that looks like it has a good storyline and please 🥺 don't be like the others that in the middle just stopping the story please finish this fanfic
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the fact that you have villain as a tag and the mc isn't one or even a anti hero he's just some dude running helping heros with no sort of confrontation is annoying
Too much cringe, the protagonist has no personality, excessive glorification of the same, gaps or inconsistencies in the canon, a Harem relationship like a collector of trading cards, little depth in the development of relationships, change in the original characters for the benefit of its protagonist and a lot of confusion.
The mc is what you get when you write a character who’s only defining trait is being an edgy pseudo ‘manipulator’ Also a bunch of ai slop from what I read
Maravilloso, de los primeros fanfics que he leído en años y de verdad molan, 10/10 ..........................................................................................
i really like how manipulative the MC is and how he thinks and the author has shown how much of a moral character the MC is he wants the world for himself that what like so i really hope he does continue to update this more regularly and if so does another fanfic about trollhunter.
It's annoying to see a poll about love interests, in fact it's ridiculous, it's like going to a school as a teacher and he asks you what you want to learn, I would simply say: I want to learn about the relationship between layer Y and the diamond generation in Minecraft, is it because I know I should learn it? No, is it because I know it will help me in my exams? no, it's because I simply want to, in the same way that it is counterproductive for an author to ask for opinions from readers who have never written anything. If the story was good, be it a harem, bachelor romance or no romance there would be people reading it, but it's not a good story, the protagonist gets all arrogant saying that the people in that world are idiots and that he's the smartest one when he literally No, he hasn't achieved anything, it's pure arrogance, he says he doesn't want powers because, according to him, his own intelligence is enough to dominate the world, like, why? Do you want to prove something to yourself? how irrational, arrogance is excessive confidence without validating evidence, and that's what I'm seeing, the purest arrogance. I also often see many paragraphs wanting to say the same thing, I don't know if it's AI or it's a new author, if it's AI, stop using it, it's disgusting to read something made by AI, it's an insult to those who try to write and a poison that you put it in the food you serve to others (your writing)
Monologue and monologue and monologue and monologue and....... .................... ..................................... ........... .........................................
It seems interesting but he decided to please the virgin incels and became a harem google translate
Reveal Spoiler thank you for the amazing book , I have an idea for a book , we're the mc has a pathway from lord of the mysteries like the visionary pathway or the error pathway , the world where the book takes place is young justice DC .
Amid so many identical stories, finally a fresh fanfiction concept! I’ve been looking for a fanfiction on this topic for a long time, and thanks to you, it feels like a breath of fresh air. I really like your story; the MC isn’t purely good or merciless but has a gray personality. They’re not perfect, but they don’t need to be—after all, everyone has flaws, which makes the MC feel real. The only issue I’ve noticed with your story is that the word count per chapter feels a bit low. Other than that, this is nearly a perfect fanfiction for me.
If I can give you a suggestion, you should go first for Chloe and Kagami, both of whom have wealthy families that could help you put together the resources you need or for future plans. In addition, their emotional situations put them in a fragile state that allows you to mold them into better versions than in canon giving you future allies with or without their miraculus, what do you think?
First good miraculous ladybug fanfic I see yet that looks like it has a good storyline and please 🥺 don't be like the others that in the middle just stopping the story please finish this fanfic
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