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1. Writing Quality: I don't have any complaints, I have read 100 chapters and after that started stacking, you should write ur own novels, the writing Quality is really good. 2. Story Development: One of the most engaging FFS i have ever read so far just fking wow, what the f do you take before you write and can I have some??? 3. Character Design: They feel real when you read, they don't feel like they are fictional characters. 4. Update Stability: when I was reading there were multiple chapters coming out daily. 5. World Building: nice it takes place during the World war, author has given life to the world itself. overall: I have rarely read a ff this good, if you write any other novels please do tell mate i would love to read them. if anyone has any suggestions for novels and FF then comment them down below.
This story is confusing. Like first 20 chapters don't have anything about system and then some system is added in between without any context and many plot holes in the story. I think it's cuz of the translation
My biggest issue with this is that the main character has the same maturity, oftentimes less, than his 11 year old peers, despite having an 'adult soul'. Additionally, the main character continually waxes on about how he has an Eastern background and is thus above such things as conflict. The main character needs work.
it is good but disorganized , the story gives me heart ache especially the death of algaia
I have to agree with whatever Khaled said. This story is indeed disorganized among other negatives that he gets into. Of course the way that the mc unlocks his animagus transformation is perfect and a few other scenes are just mwah but why cannot the mc use wand less magic that powerfully, why can’t he use the “dragon” part of him, why is the system so inconsistent, and so many other whys and whats this story really should be rewritten. A good story yet one filled with bad and good writting I hope you have a good day author and goodbye
This story has alot of potential to be great but it's too disorganised and makes no sense. One moment the story is heading in a direction then then the other its heading into a completely different story. Stuff that seem important and Critical gets forgotten about after a couple chapter and something new comes to replace for it to be forgotten again. The MC is too emotional and makes no sense, he can defeat a top general of Grindelwald but is struggling against muggles, everything feels forced, doesn't flow naturally and makes no sense. It has potential but it needs to be rewritten with a clear story in mind not chaos
Shits fire fr fr. I love the new spin on the story! Although it is still set in the world of Harry Potter, the story is completely new, starting off during the era of Tom Riddle's start at hogwarts. However despite this, the story is captivating and gives a great rush through the twists and turns of the story. The only issue is the translation, sometimes spell names and character names get mixed up a bit but other than that it is a great read!
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surprisingly great Wizarding World fic for a translated CN FF. I love how the author expounded the wizarding world and not just cop out with what the books shown us. MC also didn't get any free ride, no massive cheats like a vault full of golden galleons or magic at the level of Grindelwald or Dumbledore. He's better than his peers but not the best in every subject. Though I do love that author gave MC some setbacks, but it felt like there's no payoff most of the time. I do believe that this captured the OG source by almost killing the MC every year. But c'mon, give him some break. Great work from the translator although there are some misspellings.
Absolutely amazing story I highly recommend. it's set during Tom riddle / Voldermorts day at school but has a huge world outside of hogwarts which it explore very well and the main character isnt super overpowered and the powerr progression is exceptional well done give him both weakness and strengths. On top of multiple chapters everyday making it one of my top current reads.
if I'm not wrong this is a translation, one made with machine. But I have to say, I love the story, and kodoes too the original author. And now this is one of my new favorites. thank you
Sin romance? Sin harem? Solo un tipo al azar que ahora es compañero de clase de tom riddle? Por alguna razón no puedo encontrar entusiasmo por leer la historia, si alguien quiere, puede hacerme un poco de spoiler, y decirme si la historia es interesante, y si hay romance o comedia, mis géneros favoritos.
good stuff tbh...............................................................................................................................................................................................
Sorry but i just cant handle the start of the book it just didnt hook me into it, i think mainly because of the background chosen. Still its pretty good overall and i recomend it if you dont have anything else to read and i mean it
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useless system useless mc,do you really tell me Voldemort is that powerfull at early stage ,useless story writing style , system for help not to cause problem
1. Writing Quality: I don't have any complaints, I have read 100 chapters and after that started stacking, you should write ur own novels, the writing Quality is really good. 2. Story Development: One of the most engaging FFS i have ever read so far just fking wow, what the f do you take before you write and can I have some??? 3. Character Design: They feel real when you read, they don't feel like they are fictional characters. 4. Update Stability: when I was reading there were multiple chapters coming out daily. 5. World Building: nice it takes place during the World war, author has given life to the world itself. overall: I have rarely read a ff this good, if you write any other novels please do tell mate i would love to read them. if anyone has any suggestions for novels and FF then comment them down below.
This story is confusing. Like first 20 chapters don't have anything about system and then some system is added in between without any context and many plot holes in the story. I think it's cuz of the translation
My biggest issue with this is that the main character has the same maturity, oftentimes less, than his 11 year old peers, despite having an 'adult soul'. Additionally, the main character continually waxes on about how he has an Eastern background and is thus above such things as conflict. The main character needs work.
it is good but disorganized , the story gives me heart ache especially the death of algaia
I have to agree with whatever Khaled said. This story is indeed disorganized among other negatives that he gets into. Of course the way that the mc unlocks his animagus transformation is perfect and a few other scenes are just mwah but why cannot the mc use wand less magic that powerfully, why can’t he use the “dragon” part of him, why is the system so inconsistent, and so many other whys and whats this story really should be rewritten. A good story yet one filled with bad and good writting I hope you have a good day author and goodbye
This story has alot of potential to be great but it's too disorganised and makes no sense. One moment the story is heading in a direction then then the other its heading into a completely different story. Stuff that seem important and Critical gets forgotten about after a couple chapter and something new comes to replace for it to be forgotten again. The MC is too emotional and makes no sense, he can defeat a top general of Grindelwald but is struggling against muggles, everything feels forced, doesn't flow naturally and makes no sense. It has potential but it needs to be rewritten with a clear story in mind not chaos
Shits fire fr fr. I love the new spin on the story! Although it is still set in the world of Harry Potter, the story is completely new, starting off during the era of Tom Riddle's start at hogwarts. However despite this, the story is captivating and gives a great rush through the twists and turns of the story. The only issue is the translation, sometimes spell names and character names get mixed up a bit but other than that it is a great read!
10/10.............................................................................................................................................................
surprisingly great Wizarding World fic for a translated CN FF. I love how the author expounded the wizarding world and not just cop out with what the books shown us. MC also didn't get any free ride, no massive cheats like a vault full of golden galleons or magic at the level of Grindelwald or Dumbledore. He's better than his peers but not the best in every subject. Though I do love that author gave MC some setbacks, but it felt like there's no payoff most of the time. I do believe that this captured the OG source by almost killing the MC every year. But c'mon, give him some break. Great work from the translator although there are some misspellings.
Absolutely amazing story I highly recommend. it's set during Tom riddle / Voldermorts day at school but has a huge world outside of hogwarts which it explore very well and the main character isnt super overpowered and the powerr progression is exceptional well done give him both weakness and strengths. On top of multiple chapters everyday making it one of my top current reads.
if I'm not wrong this is a translation, one made with machine. But I have to say, I love the story, and kodoes too the original author. And now this is one of my new favorites. thank you
Sin romance? Sin harem? Solo un tipo al azar que ahora es compañero de clase de tom riddle? Por alguna razón no puedo encontrar entusiasmo por leer la historia, si alguien quiere, puede hacerme un poco de spoiler, y decirme si la historia es interesante, y si hay romance o comedia, mis géneros favoritos.
good stuff tbh...............................................................................................................................................................................................
Sorry but i just cant handle the start of the book it just didnt hook me into it, i think mainly because of the background chosen. Still its pretty good overall and i recomend it if you dont have anything else to read and i mean it
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useless system useless mc,do you really tell me Voldemort is that powerfull at early stage ,useless story writing style , system for help not to cause problem