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I really like that the MC is an old dude that knows nothing about isekai or anime, I haven’t seen such a premise before so it makes the tropes seem fresh. The dialogue and interaction has good bones but is somewhat crippled by the “editing tool” we all know and hate. Constantly repeating descriptions, irrelevant descriptive language, etc. Everytime the MC teaches someone he compares it to an agriculture lesson, Everytime usop speaks he’s trembling in his boots, luffy wants meat, zero is lost, etc. these tropes are good to introduce the character to the reader but they should not be the core personality traits of the characters.
Keep up the good work. Take your time, but of course, more chapters pleeeaase. Do what you gotta do IRL and don't forget us readers. lol
Mc trained strawhats for 27 chapters... The story didn't even start yet, so everything is unpredictable. Grammar is good, but for me personally, authors writing style annoys me. Also, mc never watched tv in his entire life, because he know nothing tv/anime/manga related whatsoever.
This is so good not gonna lie i finished reading all available chapters already I need more!!!
The writing quality is good but, it's not for me. There were just a few things that kept me from fully enjoying it. #1 The MC can't keep or otherwise obtain or utilize the powers and skills he teaches beyond using them for demonstrations, and there was no indication he'd be able to learn/train them himself. So he's stuck in a cycle where he teaches people powers/abitlies/skills and can't actually grow from it. #2 The MC can teach things that have no business being in one piece and the people should have zero capabilities of learning, such as Chakra (Naruto jutsus), Ki (Dragonball), Harry Potter spells etc. It simply just doesn't belong there. #3 Admittedly it's a rather minor one but it still kinda annoyed me by repetitively comparing basically everything that happens to his old agriculture class and students. We get it, he's an ag teacher, no need to bring it up 2-3-4 times a chapter.
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I really like that the MC is an old dude that knows nothing about isekai or anime, I haven’t seen such a premise before so it makes the tropes seem fresh. The dialogue and interaction has good bones but is somewhat crippled by the “editing tool” we all know and hate. Constantly repeating descriptions, irrelevant descriptive language, etc. Everytime the MC teaches someone he compares it to an agriculture lesson, Everytime usop speaks he’s trembling in his boots, luffy wants meat, zero is lost, etc. these tropes are good to introduce the character to the reader but they should not be the core personality traits of the characters.
Keep up the good work. Take your time, but of course, more chapters pleeeaase. Do what you gotta do IRL and don't forget us readers. lol
Mc trained strawhats for 27 chapters... The story didn't even start yet, so everything is unpredictable. Grammar is good, but for me personally, authors writing style annoys me. Also, mc never watched tv in his entire life, because he know nothing tv/anime/manga related whatsoever.
This is so good not gonna lie i finished reading all available chapters already I need more!!!
The writing quality is good but, it's not for me. There were just a few things that kept me from fully enjoying it. #1 The MC can't keep or otherwise obtain or utilize the powers and skills he teaches beyond using them for demonstrations, and there was no indication he'd be able to learn/train them himself. So he's stuck in a cycle where he teaches people powers/abitlies/skills and can't actually grow from it. #2 The MC can teach things that have no business being in one piece and the people should have zero capabilities of learning, such as Chakra (Naruto jutsus), Ki (Dragonball), Harry Potter spells etc. It simply just doesn't belong there. #3 Admittedly it's a rather minor one but it still kinda annoyed me by repetitively comparing basically everything that happens to his old agriculture class and students. We get it, he's an ag teacher, no need to bring it up 2-3-4 times a chapter.
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