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for realism I would suggest incorporate the good and bad side of things, romance,breakup, smoking, alcohol,party,and some fun and also emotional and mental stuff to give his songs more meaning,i know his songs come from space but wouldn't hurt
It's been over three months since I discovered this story, and now it’s my favorite one among all I've read on this topic. The plot and the emotions it evokes make it truly unforgettable. Every chapter keeps me engaged, and I always look forward to what happens next.
I love this book it's one of the first books I have read this long thank you author for writing it
je recycle la critique d'un gars qui dit tout ce que je pense. (j'ai arreter de lire il y a deux mois mais c'etait encore dans ma biblioteque) Quel est le bon point de cette histoire ? Tout d’abord, la famille, devrais-je dire trop accommodante ? Trop aimant ? Deuxièmement, la route vers la célébrité est trop facile. Pas de pression, de lutte, d’envie,... rien. C’est comme... un bon jour, il écrit une chanson, il est devenu une star, signe un agent, écrit la chanson suivante, devient une superstar,.... LA FIN.
What good point does this story have? First of all the family- should I say too accomodating? too loving? Second is road to stardom-too easy. No pressure, struggle, desire,... nothing. It's like like- one good day he writes a song, he became star, signs agent, writes next song, becomes a superstar,....THE END.
The story lacks depth, and the characters make illogical choices. Who the MC is and what the new world is in are poorly explained(outside of the synopsis). The MC then takes a contract that will take 10% of all his earnings to his agent. He then allows his first YouTube paycheck to be delivered to his agent's bank account, which makes no sense. It's a great story idea that is poorly executed.
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dropped chapter 20 1..1 dimensional characters 2..unrealistic view count for a song that mc posted online from an unknown acckunt within 24 hours 3..unrealistic reaction due to the 1 song 4.. within 20 chapters author time skips twice instead of building character development 5...lack of awareness of the mc he knows he isn't in own universe yet 5b. doesn't research what is different 5c. doesn't think about his own family and how they have changed due to different reality 5d. doesn't research if the song isn't already available 6.. name of the sister wtf Positives 1. author responds 2. author corrects mistakes once pointed out 3. you have 100 chapters to read
this is the best story Read in months love intrust Billie Elise (music duos) fuel eminem song for p.didy
really like this ff. Only thing you can do better on is making longer chapters or doing more chapters. ......................................................................
VERY good so far as long as u dont insert too much drama and keep politics meaning both government and company out it will be awesome. i understand having to put some drama but i just dont want the story to fall into a mess of constant drama just cause it all u can think of to make it keep going. it would be good to have some of the songs wrote out when he sings them and reactions put in between verses just a thought but the way ur doing it aint bad. also it would be good to name the original artist so people can look up an listen to the right song.
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"You’ve created something truly special. Keep writing – the world needs more stories like this!"
like the newest chapter is the main character just gonna focus on music or is he going do other things in entertainment
"Superstar is a celebration of ambition, resilience, and the pursuit of greatness—highly recommended!"
what the update schedule would love to read more chapters. been a while since I read a good fanfic story
It's a good idea making Ed not part of the world but could be better by making other artists not on the world so there's diversity in his song. Story does get all over at times but if you can speed up the story and start adding a lot of other artist reaction then I think the story would be elevated
Story is nice and I like the Mc and his family, few things kinda is mess and but still story has great potential. I Personally looking forward to read more. ..... .... ... .. .
Well, the concept is great but the conversation is a whole lot messy and there is no sense just things are happening in baseless order, and no world-building and character are building if it can be improved then it will be good but from my experience,e I can say that this novel is getting to hiatus...
Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀
for realism I would suggest incorporate the good and bad side of things, romance,breakup, smoking, alcohol,party,and some fun and also emotional and mental stuff to give his songs more meaning,i know his songs come from space but wouldn't hurt
It's been over three months since I discovered this story, and now it’s my favorite one among all I've read on this topic. The plot and the emotions it evokes make it truly unforgettable. Every chapter keeps me engaged, and I always look forward to what happens next.
I love this book it's one of the first books I have read this long thank you author for writing it
je recycle la critique d'un gars qui dit tout ce que je pense. (j'ai arreter de lire il y a deux mois mais c'etait encore dans ma biblioteque) Quel est le bon point de cette histoire ? Tout d’abord, la famille, devrais-je dire trop accommodante ? Trop aimant ? Deuxièmement, la route vers la célébrité est trop facile. Pas de pression, de lutte, d’envie,... rien. C’est comme... un bon jour, il écrit une chanson, il est devenu une star, signe un agent, écrit la chanson suivante, devient une superstar,.... LA FIN.
What good point does this story have? First of all the family- should I say too accomodating? too loving? Second is road to stardom-too easy. No pressure, struggle, desire,... nothing. It's like like- one good day he writes a song, he became star, signs agent, writes next song, becomes a superstar,....THE END.
The story lacks depth, and the characters make illogical choices. Who the MC is and what the new world is in are poorly explained(outside of the synopsis). The MC then takes a contract that will take 10% of all his earnings to his agent. He then allows his first YouTube paycheck to be delivered to his agent's bank account, which makes no sense. It's a great story idea that is poorly executed.
Reveal Spoiler dropped chapter 20 1..1 dimensional characters 2..unrealistic view count for a song that mc posted online from an unknown acckunt within 24 hours 3..unrealistic reaction due to the 1 song 4.. within 20 chapters author time skips twice instead of building character development 5...lack of awareness of the mc he knows he isn't in own universe yet 5b. doesn't research what is different 5c. doesn't think about his own family and how they have changed due to different reality 5d. doesn't research if the song isn't already available 6.. name of the sister wtf Positives 1. author responds 2. author corrects mistakes once pointed out 3. you have 100 chapters to read
this is the best story Read in months love intrust Billie Elise (music duos) fuel eminem song for p.didy
really like this ff. Only thing you can do better on is making longer chapters or doing more chapters. ......................................................................
VERY good so far as long as u dont insert too much drama and keep politics meaning both government and company out it will be awesome. i understand having to put some drama but i just dont want the story to fall into a mess of constant drama just cause it all u can think of to make it keep going. it would be good to have some of the songs wrote out when he sings them and reactions put in between verses just a thought but the way ur doing it aint bad. also it would be good to name the original artist so people can look up an listen to the right song.
...................................... . . .. : :. : : : :.... : : : . : :.. :.. . .. .. . :... . :.. :.. . : :. : :... : : : . :. . :. . : : :. :... :. :... . ..... :. :. :........ :.. : : : : :. . .. :. :. :. :. : :.... : :. : :.............................
"You’ve created something truly special. Keep writing – the world needs more stories like this!"
like the newest chapter is the main character just gonna focus on music or is he going do other things in entertainment
"Superstar is a celebration of ambition, resilience, and the pursuit of greatness—highly recommended!"
what the update schedule would love to read more chapters. been a while since I read a good fanfic story
It's a good idea making Ed not part of the world but could be better by making other artists not on the world so there's diversity in his song. Story does get all over at times but if you can speed up the story and start adding a lot of other artist reaction then I think the story would be elevated
Story is nice and I like the Mc and his family, few things kinda is mess and but still story has great potential. I Personally looking forward to read more. ..... .... ... .. .
Well, the concept is great but the conversation is a whole lot messy and there is no sense just things are happening in baseless order, and no world-building and character are building if it can be improved then it will be good but from my experience,e I can say that this novel is getting to hiatus...
Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀