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Decent story, however I think it could be bit more fleshed out. For example, in chapter 1 he makes a lot of points from "scamming" Class D, and winning bets against the clubs, however it's all just stated that happened. I think it would've been better story-wise if the events were actually shown. Fast paced isn't bad thing, but if it's too fast-paced it kinda weakens the story a little. Looking forward to seeing how this develops nonetheless.
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me gusta mucho como se me presebto los personajes siento que tiene aun mas vida que otros fanficfics espero que sigas adelante y no te rindas.
Good so far there's not much of a mistake in the way the author writes, i also like that you put the mc in class B you know it gives a different vibe from other ff who usually put the mc in class D, like the interaction so far. Can I know if you have a release schedule or something?
Decent story, however I think it could be bit more fleshed out. For example, in chapter 1 he makes a lot of points from "scamming" Class D, and winning bets against the clubs, however it's all just stated that happened. I think it would've been better story-wise if the events were actually shown. Fast paced isn't bad thing, but if it's too fast-paced it kinda weakens the story a little. Looking forward to seeing how this develops nonetheless.
Reveal Spoiler me gusta mucho como se me presebto los personajes siento que tiene aun mas vida que otros fanficfics espero que sigas adelante y no te rindas.
Good so far there's not much of a mistake in the way the author writes, i also like that you put the mc in class B you know it gives a different vibe from other ff who usually put the mc in class D, like the interaction so far. Can I know if you have a release schedule or something?
please keep it up I love this story so much.!