Naruto: Exterminating Hyuga At The Beginning

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CodeKingu

It seems like you’re not putting any effort in to fix the many mistakes that make this mtl unreadable.

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Demon_Gouhl

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maniac_008

This is a really good naruto fanfic and I am sating this after reading many many fanfics. There is a grammar issue upto the 18-19th chapter which needs to be re-edited. But starting with the 20th chapter, there are no issues and can be read easily. I really good fanfic, don't give up on it easily. Please finish this story!

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Fl1ck

trash story and beta MC hiding his power plus he's a coward

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gustavo_hhhhdsd

I read up to the 3rd chapter and I can't continue, the way of writing this story seems more like a diary/summary than a real story. ---------------

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Daoist971076

reading this gave me a stroke . . . . . ..

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reza_Asgari

hope it wont be a hyuga fanfic were one can get tenseigan by stealing the yin of others byakugan bc it stupid and cliche ............................................................................