DxD - Multiverse | The Day To Day Life Of The Sephiroth Hero

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Ryughaa

Honest Review The story feels rushed overall, and it often skips over crucial details that would make the scenes more engaging. For example, the author introduces elements like flames or swords but doesn’t describe them in any meaningful way. It’s not enough to just say, flames appeared or a sword appeared at his waist. Take the time to paint a picture for the reader. For instance, are the flames roaring with heat, flickering in shades of crimson and gold, or casting shadows that dance across the battlefield? Is the sword sleek and polished, with intricate carvings along its hilt, or does it have a rugged, battle-worn appearance that tells a story of countless battles? These small details create immersion. The same issue applies to the fights—they’re too short and lack proper buildup or choreography. Action sequences need to feel dynamic, with clear descriptions of movements and the emotional intensity of the moment. Instead, the fights often come across as abrupt and underwhelming. And the dialogue during these scenes? It’s repetitive and drags the pace down. A good fight should seamlessly blend action and dialogue, with each enhancing the other, rather than interrupting the flow. Overall, the story could be much more compelling with better pacing, richer descriptions, and more thoughtful integration of action and dialogue. Right now, it feels like a first draft with a lot of untapped potential.

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Jeremy_Ramos_6686

I hope this story will be complete author.

LV 13

EyeOfSilver

Good novel but not the best. Author 100 years means MC has braincells so you actually need to write like his a human with actual intelligence. Not like a naive idiot like issei like bro??? Why else so you think they say wisdom comes with age??? But maybe the MC is more like Hunter Biden and never learns??? Either way author I think u nerfed the MC's IQ so much that you ruined the quick development part MC needs to act like he lived "100" years like the devil's in DXD they act the way u would expect a long loved figure too do so.

LV 4

steel17

The writing is decent—not amazing, but not terrible either. One of the main issues is the frequent use of time skips. It’s not the concept of time skips that’s the problem, but how often they occur without warning. This makes it confusing to follow the timeline, as it’s unclear whether months or years have passed. Based on the title, The Day-to-Day Life of Sephiroth, I expected more of a slice-of-life focus. However, the poorly timed skips take away from that experience. For example, one moment he’s planning a date with a girl, and in the next, two more girls are introduced, and they’re already very close to him. The author tends to skip over the moments that truly capture the essence of a slice-of-life story, leaving readers feeling disconnected from the narrative.

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i_SiMp_FoR_2dS

Reading this has been quite enjoyable so pls don't drop this book.

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Daoist6mM4Ra

I love date a live .....................

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B_M984

I want more, atleast a few hundred chapters... I mean the fic is honestly good, amazing even..

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Theory18

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Night_Fall_2004

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OveRlord

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LV 1

Bertinho_Gamer

just......bad

Very good... I mean, I won't lie to you, it's cliché, but what fanfic isn't cliché? There will only be two or three... Anyway I love Date A Live so I'm glad to read about it.

It's not the best I've read but it's ok , what else do you look for in a fanfic seriously, the writing is decent and the story progresses with each chapter, in short it's ok, it's not a masterpiece but it's good, period.

Yo this is good! hope u continue this author, pls dont drop😭

LV 13

I_Love_Hina

Great action and character dialogue but the future plans of building a faction ain't my cup of tea

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DaoistYFexvP

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LV 4

bledsting21

Good story👍.

LV 1

Gremory_Tould_12

It's not a masterpiece, but it's ok, it's entertaining and it amuses me, the author wants to try to do something out of the conventional in DxD fanfics (which is just putting the main character to solve Rias problems) here the main character (Aiden) is alone with his group (the Date A Live girls) and is building relationships with other characters ( like the Vali team, or the Phenex house) so for now I really like it, I hope this story will be completed, and author please add Mio to the group.

LV 1

nayaja6487

Quite good and entertaining. The author manages to connect several worlds, but not with the typical quest system or anything like that; simply, the protagonist jumps to other worlds randomly. So far he's only made it to two (DxD and the Isekai on the phone). Truth be told, the story is good and has potential for improvement, but hey, the author is a beginner, so it's understandable. Plus, the protagonist has the powers and the Date A Live girls, which has me completely sold.