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gostei boa histĂłria. so achei que nĂŁo precisava colocar os mutantes nessa histĂłria,.................................................................................................,...... ......................
Yet another trash chinese fic. - chinese propaganda - everyone talks and behaves like a chinese young master - boring gacha cheat - MC sticks to gwen to follow the plot
not much to say made it to ch62 and so far the Mc not even the Mc it's Gwen and Tony with the Mc sprinkled in really no development on him like Gwen and Tony has had more development then him he's maybe did 4 things with just catering to gwin in the past 60 chapters and All it was was stand and stare it sucks people rating are clearly bots and and this is just Ai brain rot
La historia es genial! ÂżCĂłmo lo sĂ© si aĂşn no lo he leĂdo? Pues porque es como la tercera vez que la veo en webnovel, por alguna razĂłn todos abandonan la historia despuĂ©s de un tiempo, la historia es muy buena, pero desearĂa poder llegar al final, y no simplemente sentirme muy decepcionado cuando la historia se corte de repente, suerte al traductor en su esfuerzo, comenzarĂ© a leer esta historia otra vez dentro de poco.
it was good until pikachu arrive giving mc an external power is only a liability ...........................................................................................................................................................................................
The story is good. you're just making it too chaotic for me. and your focusing too much and the side characters that the story's not progressing much. side characters don't need half the chapter dedicated to them like with the whole homeless guy thing you could have just did the bank robbery scene the added a brief summary about what happened to him instead of stretching it out into multiple chapters
Reveal SpoilerCongratulations on the translation.... Many flaws in the script, the only thing that catches my attention is the relationship with Gwen, which is actually very weak too, little development of the couple (I hope to find a story with this theme that is really good)... The protagonist has a habit of God thinking he is superior to intervene, it really doesn't make sense, someone from our world with skills, not wanting to save people, or to save what is in his sight, doesn't need to be a hero 24 hours a day, but don't ignore the people in front of him.
one of the best fanfics currently. if possible add Anna to his harem and have his identity known to to Gwen and Anna.
The book was uploaded as Marvel: My Girlfriend is Spider-Woman?! Author: Levaa But they have since removed it. You can also find it online under the title Marvel: My Frog Cub Brought Back The Green Dragon Fruit
Great Translation! I have read the MTL and this one is way better, there are minor mistakes in 1 or 2 places maybe, but overall it's really good read. 5 stars for your work!
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La novela cumple su función es entretenida, el autor hizo un buen trabajo tiene una gramática introducción decente, el desarrollo de la trama es interesante no es la gran cosa pero es entretenida hasta el momento y lo bueno es que no está plagado de frases Xixian 👍🏻
Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil—now form my sword Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil—now form my sword Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil—now form my sword
Reveal SpoilerFirst and foremost the translation is on point. IRedX43 has so far done an amazing job. Gotta give credit to that. Now with the the actual story: The story so far (ch 42) is good if you can ignore the whole Chinese culture/People are the best. I know its a fanfic and you have to take everything with a grain of salt but there are a few things that are very unrealistic. You can tell right away that the writer doesn't know much about American life and culture, so if you can bypass that the story is enjoyable and interesting.
Ive read the mtl and i just want to say that its good i hope go beyond the other guy that did a similar job with this but dropped
here... have a 5 Star for your efforts... it's like a 4th or 5th attempt of translation of this novel I've came across in here... good luck... you'll need it...
I have read up to 150 chapters in his Patreon. Story is good. Worth it. Try it ...........................................................................
Hi there, RedX43 here! 👋 This is the first story I have 'tried' to Translate. Well, TBH, previously, it was just light editing from MTL, not a real Translation from Raw, but this time, I've got support from you guys all (with Patreon, of course), so I'll try my best to give you good-quality chapters. I will continue to Translate this till you guys support it, hope you like it. As always, I'm a Human too, so If any mistakes happen, do forgive me and comment it out, I will try to fix it ASAP. Enjoy your reading ✨
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gostei boa histĂłria. so achei que nĂŁo precisava colocar os mutantes nessa histĂłria,.................................................................................................,...... ......................
Yet another trash chinese fic. - chinese propaganda - everyone talks and behaves like a chinese young master - boring gacha cheat - MC sticks to gwen to follow the plot
not much to say made it to ch62 and so far the Mc not even the Mc it's Gwen and Tony with the Mc sprinkled in really no development on him like Gwen and Tony has had more development then him he's maybe did 4 things with just catering to gwin in the past 60 chapters and All it was was stand and stare it sucks people rating are clearly bots and and this is just Ai brain rot
La historia es genial! ÂżCĂłmo lo sĂ© si aĂşn no lo he leĂdo? Pues porque es como la tercera vez que la veo en webnovel, por alguna razĂłn todos abandonan la historia despuĂ©s de un tiempo, la historia es muy buena, pero desearĂa poder llegar al final, y no simplemente sentirme muy decepcionado cuando la historia se corte de repente, suerte al traductor en su esfuerzo, comenzarĂ© a leer esta historia otra vez dentro de poco.
it was good until pikachu arrive giving mc an external power is only a liability ...........................................................................................................................................................................................
The story is good. you're just making it too chaotic for me. and your focusing too much and the side characters that the story's not progressing much. side characters don't need half the chapter dedicated to them like with the whole homeless guy thing you could have just did the bank robbery scene the added a brief summary about what happened to him instead of stretching it out into multiple chapters
Reveal SpoilerCongratulations on the translation.... Many flaws in the script, the only thing that catches my attention is the relationship with Gwen, which is actually very weak too, little development of the couple (I hope to find a story with this theme that is really good)... The protagonist has a habit of God thinking he is superior to intervene, it really doesn't make sense, someone from our world with skills, not wanting to save people, or to save what is in his sight, doesn't need to be a hero 24 hours a day, but don't ignore the people in front of him.
one of the best fanfics currently. if possible add Anna to his harem and have his identity known to to Gwen and Anna.
The book was uploaded as Marvel: My Girlfriend is Spider-Woman?! Author: Levaa But they have since removed it. You can also find it online under the title Marvel: My Frog Cub Brought Back The Green Dragon Fruit
Great Translation! I have read the MTL and this one is way better, there are minor mistakes in 1 or 2 places maybe, but overall it's really good read. 5 stars for your work!
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La novela cumple su función es entretenida, el autor hizo un buen trabajo tiene una gramática introducción decente, el desarrollo de la trama es interesante no es la gran cosa pero es entretenida hasta el momento y lo bueno es que no está plagado de frases Xixian 👍🏻
Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil—now form my sword Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil—now form my sword Dispassionate Queen of Steel, the sacred sword that destroys evil—now form my sword
Reveal SpoilerFirst and foremost the translation is on point. IRedX43 has so far done an amazing job. Gotta give credit to that. Now with the the actual story: The story so far (ch 42) is good if you can ignore the whole Chinese culture/People are the best. I know its a fanfic and you have to take everything with a grain of salt but there are a few things that are very unrealistic. You can tell right away that the writer doesn't know much about American life and culture, so if you can bypass that the story is enjoyable and interesting.
Ive read the mtl and i just want to say that its good i hope go beyond the other guy that did a similar job with this but dropped
here... have a 5 Star for your efforts... it's like a 4th or 5th attempt of translation of this novel I've came across in here... good luck... you'll need it...
I have read up to 150 chapters in his Patreon. Story is good. Worth it. Try it ...........................................................................
Hi there, RedX43 here! 👋 This is the first story I have 'tried' to Translate. Well, TBH, previously, it was just light editing from MTL, not a real Translation from Raw, but this time, I've got support from you guys all (with Patreon, of course), so I'll try my best to give you good-quality chapters. I will continue to Translate this till you guys support it, hope you like it. As always, I'm a Human too, so If any mistakes happen, do forgive me and comment it out, I will try to fix it ASAP. Enjoy your reading ✨