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Nice👍 Need more chapter👍 Foyoydogdogdgodgoxogxhlxhlxhoxgoxohxlhxlhxlhxhlchlxlhxhpxhpxhpxphxhpchpchpchlxhlxlgzhlxhlxhlxhlxjlxhlxlhxjclhlxhlxhlxlhxhlxhlxhoxphxhpxhpxhpxhpxphxlhxphxhlxhlxphxhpxphchpxypdhpxhpphxhpxhpxhpx
I'm really enjoying this however it is clear that the mcs personality had changed quite drastically or rather in the beginning he felt more like a side character. and 1 things that getting on my nerves is the way he's dragging everything out. he has the power to fully control the ninja world yet he doesn't for over like 50+ chapters. it's to the point that it boring me
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Большое спасибо за эту историю! Самое приятное в ней, это что она довольно уникальна. Главный герой спокойный и размеренный человек, что его приятно выделяет.
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It's interesting, I hope It could skip cliché of going after Hancock or Robin. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
It's a good fanfic. Picture is not that great tho. --------------------------------------- --------------------------------------- --------------------------------------- Feeling generous, might isekai you later.
Aside from some incorrect infos, this was quite enjoyable. MC is also quite likeable.
Well the story is quite good to read, the protagonist doesn't become op instantly but his development of fruit is good. the writing quality is good except there are some mistakes in the starting chapters and some sentence that don't make any sense bot over all it is good.
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Фанфик имеет смысл быть, история довольно интересная. Надеюсь главы выйдет по скорее. Автор не думай забрасывать историю она имеет шанс зайти в топ из лучших!
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Nice👍 Need more chapter👍 Foyoydogdogdgodgoxogxhlxhlxhoxgoxohxlhxlhxlhxhlchlxlhxhpxhpxhpxphxhpchpchpchlxhlxlgzhlxhlxhlxhlxjlxhlxlhxjclhlxhlxhlxlhxhlxhlxhoxphxhpxhpxhpxhpxphxlhxphxhlxhlxphxhpxphchpxypdhpxhpphxhpxhpxhpx
I'm really enjoying this however it is clear that the mcs personality had changed quite drastically or rather in the beginning he felt more like a side character. and 1 things that getting on my nerves is the way he's dragging everything out. he has the power to fully control the ninja world yet he doesn't for over like 50+ chapters. it's to the point that it boring me
Reveal Spoiler Большое спасибо за эту историю! Самое приятное в ней, это что она довольно уникальна. Главный герой спокойный и размеренный человек, что его приятно выделяет.
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It's interesting, I hope It could skip cliché of going after Hancock or Robin. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
It's a good fanfic. Picture is not that great tho. --------------------------------------- --------------------------------------- --------------------------------------- Feeling generous, might isekai you later.
Aside from some incorrect infos, this was quite enjoyable. MC is also quite likeable.
Well the story is quite good to read, the protagonist doesn't become op instantly but his development of fruit is good. the writing quality is good except there are some mistakes in the starting chapters and some sentence that don't make any sense bot over all it is good.
Reveal Spoiler Фанфик имеет смысл быть, история довольно интересная. Надеюсь главы выйдет по скорее. Автор не думай забрасывать историю она имеет шанс зайти в топ из лучших!
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Following tradition, rating my work as 5 starts. Please give it a chance and dive into the story. Your feedback is important, whether you loved it or see areas for improvement. Thank you for being part of this journey!