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Naruto: The Mist Within

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Author: ItoKun

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When a Medical student awakens in an infant's body in the deadly Hidden Mist Village, he knows surviving will require more than just his memories of a past life. In a world where children are forced to kill each other and bloodline abilities mark their wielders for death, Ren must carefully balance hiding his true potential while gathering enough strength to change the village's dark future. As Kirigakure descends into an era of unprecedented brutality, this reincarnated soul will discover that the deadliest technique isn't found in forbidden scrolls - it's knowing exactly when to reveal your true power.

Fair Warning:

This is a slow-burn story - no overpowered MC from the start
Power progression is realistic and earned through years of dedicated training
Contains graphic violence and death
Story builds gradually with careful character and plot development

What to Expect:

Detailed training arcs and power progression
Clever manipulation of future events using foreknowledge
Original story arcs and character development


[This novel is for readers who enjoy:
Smart protagonists who rely on wit over raw power
Realistic skill progression and strategic combat
Deep world-building and political intrigue
A fresh perspective on the Naruto universe]

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  1. ItoKun
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  2. Jayroy_63
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Avirup_Das

I like your story author. However, since his father's death you are showing how Ren is creating boundaries and "using" his friends, watching everything with indifference. I understand that after a close person's death people needs time to heal and all. But the idea of not having bonds because they are weakness and using everyone, always seeing things with indifference is soon going to be the same as literally 99% other fanfics where authors think that is somehow the best option. Without bonds soon the character will feel mechanical and like no emotional intelligence. It also wouldn't create hooks, tension while particularly tricky situations unfold. Forgive me if i seemed like ranting, but a lot of authors make their character cold, indifferent, dark, etc etc. and not always it makes sense. Especially here he felt love with his parents, had friends. Instead of weakness it could be shown as powerful motivation to not loose them and improve more. The other characters could also have significant growth, and together with Ren, could dunno have more impact than just some one man show. Just my opinion that can make the story more engaging and real. Nobody will become Madara level powerful by the time they are in early teens. You said so that realistic growth will be there. Rivalry, and helping each other grow is sorta more feasible than one dude becoming a mechanical machine and training non stop and using everyone to bis advantage for years until he feels ready to face the world, which can take decade and still me me tally sane. I jst wanted to convey my thoughts, as i wouldn't have bothered writing so much if i hadn't been hooked. The chapters of bonding and the subsequent couple chapter where Toshiro died and the funeral and all, how he said his mother doesn't need to be strong all the time, how his mother and father met, all these were really nice, i actually felt the emotions. In anycase, good luck with your story.

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Jayroy_63

This is a good fic in the hidden mist. The Mc is a few years younger than Kakashi. Smart Mc who's not edgy and cares about people. Give it a try

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Raphael_Souza_5356

Really good, I liked the beginning. Can't wait for more chapters! . . .

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Latest Release:
Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Water and Coral 9 hours ago

Volume 1

  1. 1
    Chapter 1: In the Hidden Mist 29 days ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2: the Store 28 days ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3: Whispers from the War 28 days ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4: First Steps 28 days ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5: Migthy Guy 28 days ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6: Days of Waiting 27 days ago
  7. 7
    Chapter 7: The Art of Seals 27 days ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8: Small Steps 27 days ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9: The Proposal 26 days ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10: Intensifying Training 26 days ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11: Preparations and Changes 26 days ago
  12. 12
    Waiting in the Mist 25 days ago
  13. 13
    Chapter 13: Changes 25 days ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 14: Test 25 days ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 15: The First Day 24 days ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 16: An Unusual Routine 24 days ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 17: Shadows of Power 23 days ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 18: Precarious Balances 23 days ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 19: The Library of Mist 22 days ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 20: Foundations 22 days ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 21: The Seven Swords 21 days ago
  22. 22
    Chapter 22: The Thread of Mist 20 days ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 23: The Stalking village 20 days ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 24: Progress and Discovery 19 days ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 25: Lessons in Sword and Humanity 19 days ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 26: Revelations 18 days ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 27: Plans 17 days ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 28: Gift 16 days ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 29: Wind and Revelations 15 days ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 30: A Special Day 15 days ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 31: The Darkest Night 14 days ago
  32. 32
    Chapter 32: The Last Mist 13 days ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 33: Absence 12 days ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 34: The Stone in the Mist 11 days ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 35: Return 10 days ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 36: Echoes and Shadows 9 days ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 37: The Weight of Months 8 days ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 38: Echoes of Change 8 days ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 39: Exams 7 days ago
  40. 40
    Chapter 40: The Written Test 6 days ago
  41. 41
    Chapter 41: The Demonstration 5 days ago
  42. 42
    Chapter 42: Fights [Part 1] 4 days ago
  43. 43
    Chapter 43: Fights [ Part 2] 4 days ago
  44. 44
    Chapter 44: The First Round Continues 3 days ago
  45. 45
    Chapter 45: Dance of Weapons 2 days ago
  46. 46
    Chapter 46: Another Side of the Mist 1 days ago
  47. 47
    Chapter 47: Water and Coral 9 hours ago

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