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plzzzz rewritee this and keep the pics for the characters. /.................................................................................
I loved it so much, I wish the chapters were released faster, I read it again and again because it's really good, please send more chapters[img=recommend]
the mc is literally just Elijah with more abilities that alone already ruins the novel for me if you wanted to go that route just put the mc in Elijah's body don't create a entirely new character
The 6 chapter power intro was wild, but I ain't mad at it .to be honest I skipped those chapters cause I wanna know about his powers as he uses them, otherwise what good are his powers if it's not relevant to the story. anyway all this to say, I've read many TVD/TO fanfics and watched the underworld moveis and I'm excited for what direction you will take this story to. I'll be waiting.👍👍👍
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ok Imma cut to the chase what ruined it for me was the whole five chapters maybe four after he died truth gave him some good powers but what really sucks is that this guy explained everything down to the bone wasting chapters to explain something that could have been used for character development character design world background and more like to it just seemed like you pulled one of the Chinese novel synopsis where they have describe what the mc gets and the random bystanders opinions. but you did it long drawn out spreading within those chapters the writing was fine smooth but but that was literally the only thing that bugged me I think underworld and TO/TVD combo is awesome i love both series tremendously. note:you also have crazy short chapters iaw the standard of webnovel i have seen smaller but other than that good work
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this has been a very interesting start to a story I look forward to seeing where this goes
plzzzz rewritee this and keep the pics for the characters. /.................................................................................
I loved it so much, I wish the chapters were released faster, I read it again and again because it's really good, please send more chapters[img=recommend]
the mc is literally just Elijah with more abilities that alone already ruins the novel for me if you wanted to go that route just put the mc in Elijah's body don't create a entirely new character
The 6 chapter power intro was wild, but I ain't mad at it .to be honest I skipped those chapters cause I wanna know about his powers as he uses them, otherwise what good are his powers if it's not relevant to the story. anyway all this to say, I've read many TVD/TO fanfics and watched the underworld moveis and I'm excited for what direction you will take this story to. I'll be waiting.👍👍👍
Reveal Spoiler ok Imma cut to the chase what ruined it for me was the whole five chapters maybe four after he died truth gave him some good powers but what really sucks is that this guy explained everything down to the bone wasting chapters to explain something that could have been used for character development character design world background and more like to it just seemed like you pulled one of the Chinese novel synopsis where they have describe what the mc gets and the random bystanders opinions. but you did it long drawn out spreading within those chapters the writing was fine smooth but but that was literally the only thing that bugged me I think underworld and TO/TVD combo is awesome i love both series tremendously. note:you also have crazy short chapters iaw the standard of webnovel i have seen smaller but other than that good work
Reveal Spoiler this has been a very interesting start to a story I look forward to seeing where this goes
This story is awesome! I hope you continue with this story.