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Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
After reading just 12 chapters, I'm thoroughly captivated by this unique and engaging story. Each chapter leaves me eager to dive into the next. Well done, author-kun!
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
Just love the story and main character It has a unique plot and I live the world building. Also nice cover [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
An excellent idea executed almost perfectly. the only negetive things I can point to in this novel is the repetition of the annoying banter between the system and Elion. Even that can be excused as a way to explain the situation to the reader( although in my opinion there are surely better ways to do that). well done, I recommend anyone who see this review to try and judge yourself. I will definitely hopp on for the journey :).
I hate Elion's classmates for bullying him so much. I fell in love with this book just from reading the first chapter alone. I highly recommend!
A super nice read, guys!! Though, you might end up thinking the Author is messed up - and maybe you're not wrong - but you'll enjoy this journey 😉. Elion's life is very poignant, he gets REALLY bullied by his classmates and parent. a true loner. but his loneliness is mitigated by a "voice." yeah, that's how far my spoiling go - read the rest. 😁
Q&A for the readers here, before or after you jump into my book! Ask me anything! *\0/* And this is 50 Chaps marks! I give my own book a pretty shameless review ^_^ At first i didn't expect it to be good actually. Even now I can't say my book is perfect, but there are people who genuinely follow and love the story. I'm aware I'm lacking in many aspects, so I tend to seek out feedback from my readers, and i will continue doing so. So, thanks for all the support 💗 I really appreciate you guys! 🤧
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing advance chapter this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline] And please consider this deal it may change your life and for confirmation we are not talking about pateron and the chapters will be free for readers but you will be make thousand from this deal Thank you Best regards for your journey ahead Adrenaline
After reading just 12 chapters, I'm thoroughly captivated by this unique and engaging story. Each chapter leaves me eager to dive into the next. Well done, author-kun!
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
Just love the story and main character It has a unique plot and I live the world building. Also nice cover [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
An excellent idea executed almost perfectly. the only negetive things I can point to in this novel is the repetition of the annoying banter between the system and Elion. Even that can be excused as a way to explain the situation to the reader( although in my opinion there are surely better ways to do that). well done, I recommend anyone who see this review to try and judge yourself. I will definitely hopp on for the journey :).
I hate Elion's classmates for bullying him so much. I fell in love with this book just from reading the first chapter alone. I highly recommend!
A super nice read, guys!! Though, you might end up thinking the Author is messed up - and maybe you're not wrong - but you'll enjoy this journey 😉. Elion's life is very poignant, he gets REALLY bullied by his classmates and parent. a true loner. but his loneliness is mitigated by a "voice." yeah, that's how far my spoiling go - read the rest. 😁
Q&A for the readers here, before or after you jump into my book! Ask me anything! *\0/* And this is 50 Chaps marks! I give my own book a pretty shameless review ^_^ At first i didn't expect it to be good actually. Even now I can't say my book is perfect, but there are people who genuinely follow and love the story. I'm aware I'm lacking in many aspects, so I tend to seek out feedback from my readers, and i will continue doing so. So, thanks for all the support 💗 I really appreciate you guys! 🤧