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Other than the slow pace of the story it's one of the better translations I've read and the grammar is not all over the place.
I want give my regards to author/translator, cuz this fic, like the rest of his works, is of high quality! The story itself is slow paced and an overall enjoyable read. I love the MC’s powers and his role within the story. The interactions between him and the rest of the characters is smooth and nice. I would love to know if there is any romance happening some time soon (or within the story in general). I understand that it’s just a translation, so no flack given to the you, author. But it would definitely add some spice and flavour to the novel.
The translation is great quality as always, tge story is just not that good unfortunately. The authors writing style is hard and boring to read, the story development is slow and pretty boring as well. I trued to force myself to keep reading, but couldnt. That said, its a rare genshin fic with a great translation and while boring, a decent enough story, so its defin readable.
Love the characters and the interactions and the slow that doesn't rush the plot as i love small in between __________________________________
Other than the slow pace of the story it's one of the better translations I've read and the grammar is not all over the place.
I want give my regards to author/translator, cuz this fic, like the rest of his works, is of high quality! The story itself is slow paced and an overall enjoyable read. I love the MC’s powers and his role within the story. The interactions between him and the rest of the characters is smooth and nice. I would love to know if there is any romance happening some time soon (or within the story in general). I understand that it’s just a translation, so no flack given to the you, author. But it would definitely add some spice and flavour to the novel.
The translation is great quality as always, tge story is just not that good unfortunately. The authors writing style is hard and boring to read, the story development is slow and pretty boring as well. I trued to force myself to keep reading, but couldnt. That said, its a rare genshin fic with a great translation and while boring, a decent enough story, so its defin readable.
Love the characters and the interactions and the slow that doesn't rush the plot as i love small in between __________________________________