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Not bad could use some polishing in some places(i.e storyline explanation and basic background details) ,and is an overall decent read so far. (tip: With my experiences in reading fanfics, assume the reader has little to no knowledge of the world and find ways to introduce them to the plots so that you can plan on how to properly introduce stuff.) (tip/advice: In a multiverse/Omniverse fanfic, a AU is your best friend.)
Not bad could use some polishing in some places(i.e storyline explanation and basic background details) ,and is an overall decent read so far. (tip: With my experiences in reading fanfics, assume the reader has little to no knowledge of the world and find ways to introduce them to the plots so that you can plan on how to properly introduce stuff.) (tip/advice: In a multiverse/Omniverse fanfic, a AU is your best friend.)